What do you think about this scene, @Animetion24?
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There is, and always was Mazurek- no Mazurka (10.) :P
Hehehehe, I didn't really mean such a correction. XD
@Mejson That's strange, I haven't touched my PM settings at all, and I'm nowhere near full on the inbox.
Anyways, with the grammatical error dealt with, this scene is mostly good. I think there's only things like Mazurek seeking one of his spears to attack God-DL, who swats it aside before returning attention to Zip. I suppose Mazurek might've lost a couple of those while fleeing, but a resourceful guy like him ought to have a couple in reserve.
And perhaps a final/penultimate scene of Keni either dragging the zombie away in case it revives again (the crew are probably too early in their adventure to know if they can't come back a second time), or he curbstomps DL's head to show his more callous form of prudency.
@Animetion24, yes is really strange...
All three heroes ran away in a hurry and even Keni does not have a weapon (that's why he broke the neck of God-DL Zombie). We pay attention to details and the spear cannot be hidden in a pocket. Only Delsin has a container for spears on his back (which will be also used for something else :P), also this situation - they are theoretically defenseless, only Keni is really strong - he can break someone neck.
I think even if he were to wake up again it... However, Keni doesn't care that much about them and Mazurek is very focused on helping Zip. In this scene, we (with my brother - @MariogD) took into account the character of the characters and the relationships between them.
Thanks for your ideas! You have a great imagination! I like it! :)
Anyone else have any new ideas? If not, we start the next scene. :)
@Animetion24 @Mejson
I agree with @Animetion24 about second part. Let's add some step of being sure that God-DL is dead. Maybe destoying his head? From my point of view this behaviour is logic. @Mejson please take this point into consideration.
About first point let's assume that guys lost spears during running.
Again @Animetion24 thank you for your participation!
@Animetion24 @MariogD
Ok, You're right, I didn't have time to think about it because I was going to the gym, I'm already correcting it.
As for the first point, I think they abandoned on purpose because they can run faster. Don't you think that when you're empty-handed, it's easier to run? :P
Thanks, it's the second time @Animetion24 when we have realized your great idea. :P
Today I will add the draft project of another scene! :P
“8. God-DL Zombie slides down, Zip who is panting heavily and whispering”
I think panting and whispering does not convey the emotion enough, instead of panting, how about a growl of agony, like, “Grrgghhhh”, or, “Arrgghhh”, not screaming, but grunting or growling, “Fuck! It hurts like hell”
You're right, but... 'Zip' will not record them because he is working and busy. @ChordC, I would like to ask you for help with these sounds, I know there will be a lot of difficult sounds in this scene :/
This scene is also difficult to animate, only the next one will be easier.
@Mejson Alright then, I’ll see what I can do
MariogD
Keni: "You no idea..." -> for me there is lack of verb here. "You have no idea..." maybe?
Mejson
Yes, I'm already correcting. :P