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Posted by Mejson - 2 weeks ago


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Welcome everyone!


How was your holidays? My - with my family in a nice atmosphere, quite good. What plans for New Year's Eve? Early wishes - Happy New Year's Eve and Happy New Year! Despite the holidays, I found time to plan Scene 11 :) @SayMeBott and @MariogD and @Mazurek helped me, thanks colleagues for their help!


What do you think about it, @Cyberdevil@Animetion24@ChordC@MariogD@SayMeBott?


Regards,

Mejson


Scene 11 - Carefree

Inscription (on black background):

Episode 11
Day 33
(~3 days later)
1:03 PM


Action:

1. The scene starts in the place where a cage is made (made of sticks and lianas or boards with nails) - it is located to the left and slightly above the firepit. There is a spider inside (on the left side). Candy (crouched) on the left side of the cage - puts his hand in and touches (strokes) the spider. The Spider obviously likes Candy. In front of the cage (at a safe distance), Mejson is sitting (with his back to the viewer) on a larger chest (there are several crates here). On the right side Keni is standing (with his arms folded) - still a bit angry).

2. Keni is halfway through saying: "...and it's his fault". And after a while he adds (squint one’s eyes maliciously): "Especially yours!". Mejson looks at him (side face) indifferent and composed, says: "You think any of us saw this coming?". And then adds: "You surprised us". Mejson looks down sadly (for a moment), then at Keni and continues: "You know perfectly well that in our lives now, losses are unpredictable". Keni comments: "Don't remind me...". And shrugs his shoulders contemptuously.

3. Then he says in a low voice (as if to himself): "What do I care?". Mejson squints one's eyes a bit. A moment of silence. Keni closes his eyes for a moment, <sighs> lowering his hands (regains his composure). He opens his eyes and walks over to the cage. Then, looking at the spider, he asks: "Now what do you need this thing for?". Mejson looks at the spider (turns his head) and says: "Don't you know?". And after a while he adds: "The geeks want to make an antidote with its help".

4. Keni leans against the cage (with both hands) and says (staring mysteriously at the spider): "Why do you really need this thing?". Then Keni brings his face close to the cage, squint one's eyes a bit and says (as if to himself a little quieter): "Maybe to turn it into a weapon?". Mejson did not have time to say anything, because suddenly the spider jumped to the right side of the cage (the spider has covers made of wood on its venom teeth - so that it would not hurt anyone). Candy stops smiling and just stares. Camera zoom in - on this event.

5. Keni (mostly surprised and less scared) falls to the ground (on his back). Instinctively, Mejson <bursts out laughing>, and after a while he puts his hand to his mouth and <tries not to laugh>. Lying on the ground, Keni (frustrated) swears: "Fuck!". And then adds (looking at Mejson): "That wasn't funny!". But after a moment he smiled a bit. The camera goes to the left, stops at the workbench (at that moment, it's a laboratory table). Bott* and Zip are standing in front of the table (with their back to the viewer).

6. There are two (at least) on the table - wood mortar. Also wooden jars for various substances and pieces of aloe. The heroes are working on something. Bott* crushes something into a mortar, and Zip holds the jar in his hand, waits (Zip looks at his companion) for Bott* to finish. Bott* turns to Zip and asks: "Are you okay?". And then adds: "You're surprisingly rather quiet and absent". Zip answers indifferently, looking at Bott*'s hands: "You're imagining things". Bott* raises his eyebrows and comments: "I don't think so".

7. Zip starts to be irritated by Bott’s words and says a little louder and but still firmly: "You must've smuggled some hallucinogens before you got webbed up". Bott* is surprised but still says to Zip calmly: "Well, you've sure changed...". Zip quickly changes the subject: "Are you done?". Bott*, a bit surprised, reacts: "What?". And continues, "Ahh... yes, here". When Bott* saying the last sentence, he passes the mortar Zip. Zip looks at the mortar he is holding and says as if to himself: "Too bad we don't have lab staff".

8. Bott* looks at Zip and says (indifferently, like a scientist): "Any doubts?". Zip looks at Bott* suspiciously and says: "There's no telling right now what's in this mutated venom...". Bott* looks at Zip and says seriously: "Indeed" then adds: "What if there are side effects?". Zip looks suspicious at Bott* and says (seriously): "Best not to mention them". Bott* replies (somewhat maliciously): "Really? The old Zip would've not spared a paragraph". Zip answers him: "Look at Bill, we have no choice".

9. Bott* looks at the Zip from the bottom up (a bit surprised as the Zip is not the same Zip) then straight ahead and says: "All right. Let's keep this quiet". Zip connects the ingredients (which he holds in his hands). Bott* says: "What's next?". Zip replies seriously without looking at Bott*: "Everyone will get their dose". Bott* looks straight ahead and says to himself with little crazy voice: "Little experiments have not hurt anyone yet". The camera goes to the left. The camera stops at the stationary Spear Laucher (similar to Delsin's weapon, but has a few extra rounds in reserve).

10. Delsin is standing in front of the gun (back to the viewer). MariogD stand on the right side of this weapon. MariogD looks at the trigger of the gun (with interest / curiosity). Delsin is watching (possibly comparing the differences). MariogD says excitedly (as if to himself): "Such a clever contraption...". Delsin don't looks to MariogD and says (sarcastic): "Yep. An incredible masterpiece". MariogD looks at Delsin and says (somewhat amused): "Are you jealous?". Then he smiles a little maliciously.

11. Delsin turns his head to MariogD and says indifferently: "Am I jealous?' Absolutely not". And then he adds, biting back: "You're getting more excited than you should be". Then he smiles a little maliciously. MariogD looks shocked for a moment, then replies (also a bit maliciously): "Ah, you're afraid you're going to be replaced soon". MariogD smiles maliciously. Delsin does not get carried away and going back to looking at the guns, says calmly: "Yeah, right". MariogD grabs the handle of the weapon (out of curiosity) - checks the operation (moves the cannon a bit up and down).

12. After a moment, Delsin says as if to himself (a little quieter): "Hmm, looks like the trigger mechanism is very sensitive". MariogD (holding the trigger) and reacts (didn't hear): "What?". A fraction of a second later, the weapon is shooting. MariogD lets go of the trigger abruptly and says: "Whooops...". Delsin looks at him questioningly (with a hint of disappointment). The camera goes to the left. Camera stops at the next place. There is a trap here with a pressure system (the spikes go up and stick into the intruder after you step on a certain place).

13. Rash is standing on the right (facing the previous heroes). Behind the trap there is a crouched Mazurek. Mazurek was working on a trap. Rash looks angry and shouts (furious): "Are you out of your mind?!". And he continues: "You nearly killed us!". Then is hear MariogD's voice (off-screen): "Sorry! My bad!". Rash shrugs, <sighs> and, with a blank expression on his face, says (not too loud, as if to himself): "Moron...". He then turns around and crouches down next to the trap. Mazurek looking at Rash says (indifferently): "I sure didn't miss shit like this".

14. Mazurek noticed Rash's reaction and says: "It's nice to see that some things don't change". And then he smiles (Mazurek). Rash smiles very gently (out of courtesy or respect to Mazurek). After a while, they both become serious. Then Rash asks (curious) looking at Mazurek's hands: "Is it ready?". Mazurek, focused on his work (does not look at Rash) replies: "One moment". After a while, Mazurek says (pleased with himself): "Done!". Mazurek looks at Rash and says (feisty): "Would you like to test?".

15. Rash also smiles feisty, then without a word he reaches for his weapon (on his back - some white weapon made of chitin and metal). He then gets up, walks over, and squats in front of the trap. Mazurek is watching. Rash then gently touches (with his weapon) the mechanism's trigger. The trap's spikes (on both sides) immediately slammed with a wooden clack. Rash instinctively shudders, Mazurek didn't even blink (he knew exactly what was going to happen). Rash says (excitedly): "Wow, that's impressive!".

16. Mazurek smiles for a moment and then adds: "Indeed". In the background, MariogD goes left (possibly earlier - so that he would reach / disappear behind the left edge of the screen, just before the end of the fragment: Mazurka and Rash). The camera moves to the left. The camera shows a barricade (made of various materials: boards, nails, sticks, ropes). There are spikes on the left side of the barricade. On the right side, Mr. Mate (relaxes with his arms crossed). MariogD approaches. Missile, which he fired earlier, is stuck into the floor in front of the standing Mr. Mate).

17. Mr. Mate looks at MariogD indifferently (also a bit disappointed). MariogD says (a bit ashamed): "Sorry... are you okay?". Mr. Mate says calmly: "Are you talking about this?" (Mr. Mate looks at the missile). And he continues: "You think this thing could hit me?". MariogD is surprised by the words of Mr. Mate (looks surprised) and just said: "Well...". Mr. Mate is amused by MariogD's reaction and smiles (feisty). MariogD smiles artificially (forced). After a while, they both get serious. Mr. Mate says: "I know you think I'm some cold-blooded killer".

18. MariogD replies by scratching his head and looking at the floor (a bit embarrassed), replies: "I don't think that". MariogD looks at Mr. Mate and says (cheerfully): "I think you're awesome!". Simultaneously Delsin approaches and stays next to MariogD. Mr. Mate replies: "Thanks", next he continues: "Not too often I get to hear that coming towards me" and takes the missile from ground and tosses it to Delsin. Delsin catches the missile and squints eyes (makes threatening face), turns around and leaves. MariogD is surprised by Delsin's behaviour. Mr. Mate says nothing and he looks indifferently. Blackout.


Light effect:

Normal (midday).


Dialogues:

Keni: "...and it's his fault"
Keni: "Especially yours!"
Mejson: "You think any of us saw this coming?"
Mejson: "You surprised us"
Mejson: "You know perfectly well that in our lives now, losses are unpredictable"
Keni: "Don't remind me..."
Keni: "What do I care?"
Keni: <sighs>
Keni: "Now what do you need this thing for?"
Mejson: "Don't you know?"
Mejson: "The geeks want to make an antidote with its help"
Keni: "Why do you really need this thing?"
Keni: "Maybe to turn it into a weapon?"
Mejson: <bursts out laughing>
Mejson: <tries not to laugh>
Keni: "Fuck!"
Keni: "That wasn't funny!"
Bott*: "Are you okay?"
Bott*: "You're surprisingly rather quiet and absent"
Zip: "You're imagining things"
Bott*: "I don't think so"
Zip: "You must've smuggled some hallucinogens before you got webbed up"
Bott*: "Well, you've sure changed..."
Zip: "Are you done?"
Bott*: "What?"
Bott*: "Ahh... yes, here"
Zip: "Too bad we don't have lab staff"
Bott*: "Any doubts?"
Zip: "There's no telling right now what's in this mutated venom..."
Bott*: "Indeed"
Bott*: "What if there are side effects?"
Zip: "Best not to mention them"
Bott*: "Really? The old Zip would've not spared a paragraph"
Zip: "Look at Bill, we have no choice"
Bott*: "All right. Let's keep this quiet"
Bott*: "What's next?"
Zip: "Everyone will get their dose"
Bott*: "Little experiments have not hurt anyone yet"
MariogD: "Such a clever contraption..."
Delsin: "Yep. An incredible masterpiece"
MariogD: "Are you jealous?"
Delsin: "Am I jealous?' Absolutely not"
Delsin: "You're getting more excited than you should be"
MariogD: "Ah, you're afraid you're going to be replaced soon"
Delsin: "Yeah, right"
Delsin: "Hmm, looks like the trigger mechanism is very sensitive"
MariogD: "What?"
MariogD: "Whooops..."
Rash: "Are you out of your mind?!"
Rash: "You nearly killed us!"
MariogD: "Sorry! My bad!"
Rash: <sighs>
Rash: "Moron..."
Rash: "I sure didn't miss shit like this"
Mazurek: "It's nice to see that some things don't change"
Rash: "Is it ready?"
Mazurek: "One moment"
Mazurek: "Done!"
Mazurek: "Would you like to test?"
Rash: "Wow, that's impressive!"
Mazurek: "Indeed"
MariogD: "Sorry... are you okay?"
Mr. Mate: "Are you talking about this?"
Mr. Mate: "You think this thing could hit me?"
MariogD: "Well..."
Mr. Mate: "I know you think I'm some cold-blooded killer"
MariogD: "I don't think that"
MariogD: "I think you're awesome!"
Mr. Mate: "Thanks"
Mr. Mate: "Not too often I get to hear that coming towards me"

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Posted by Mejson - December 14th, 2021


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Welcome everyone!


Damn... it took us two weeks again XD. Well, this time it was actually not easy to design the scene (although it's not at all long)... Thank you for your help @MariogD and @SayMeBott. It was an indispensable help.


First, let me start with the most interesting information. Holiday gifts! As a thank you for great work, I awarded premium accounts: @Plasmarift, @ChordC and @Animetion24. :D Happy Christmas! (I don't know if I will have time or opportunity to add another poster before Christmas).


Update of important information:

  • we have all - prepared voices (from VA) for the characters for Part I,
  • my brother (@MariogD) and I chose a voice for the narrator - Plasmarift gave us such an amazing opportunity to do this. Probably soon it will be ready for Part I,
  • one film inspired me to come up with an interesting monologue. Mejson - the end of season 3 (during the end credits) says the words in the monologue: https://www.newgrounds.com/dump/item/613d8ba51534d050dee535ab71345be9 (how do you like it? @Animetion24, I'm asking for an opinion, PS. These are intentionally short statements),
  • we were able to officially connect and define the lapse of time in the animations - how much time passes between the animations (R2: Pass of Time vs Reduce 3), I've updated data everywhere.


Thanks for helping @ChordC & @MariogD to plan & improve this scene.


What do you think about it, @Cyberdevil@Animetion24@ChordC@MariogD@SayMeBott?


Regards,

Mejson


Scene 10 - Surprise

Inscription (on black background):

Episode 10
Day 30
(~1 hour later)
9:31 AM


Action:

1. The scene starts at a familiar location. Under a dome made of plant pot leaves, there are primitive beds and primitive rescue equipment. The camera is focused on - Bill is lying on one of the beds, with Bott* crouched right behind him (front body). Bott* finishes putting on a bandage on Bill's body chest (This is a new dressing). Bill is unconscious, but stable. Camera zoom out a little. On the right, Mejson is standing (he is leaning his back against some boxes). Bott* stands up (without taking his eyes off the bandage). Mejson comes up to him and during walking asks seriously (he has a worried face): "How’s Bill holding out?".

2. Bott* looks at Mejson (turns his body to him) and says calmly (without optimism): "I’ve done all I can...". Then looks down at the ground (for a moment), and then again at Mejson and says: "He seems stable for now, but damn, just look at him…". Mejson nods and asks (worried): "So we can only wait and pray?". Bott* turns his head towards Bill and says compassionately (looking at Bill): "If he wants to live, it's up to him now". Mejson looks worriedly at Bill. The camera moves slightly to the left. MariogD comes and stops behind Bott*.

3. MariogD asks (a bit concerned, but mostly curious): "Will he make it?". Mejson looks at MariogD and Bott* turns (whole body) and says (concerned): "We were just talking about that". Then he turns front and then crouches down (looking at Bill) and says (without turning) to both of them: "You gave him a chance". Then he says (with a forced smile) looking (turns his head) at Mejson and then at MariogD: "Great work". Both (Mejson & MariogD) smile a little. MariogD says (cocky): "I agree, we are awesome!". Mejson <sighs> and make disappointed face (Mejson is disappointed by MariogD in spoiling the sublime moment by him).

4. Mariogd says (suprised): "What? We really tried our best". Bott* says (firmly): "Quiet down! Bill needs his rest". Mejson ignores MariogD and say seiously to MariogD: "He's right". MariogD is little embarased and sayd to himself (looking down at the ground): "Well, I got things to do, ciao..." and leaves. Candy walks in when MariogD leaves (the same time). MariogD looks with intereted at Candy during leaving. Candy go to Bott* ad then bends over Bott*, shakes his shoulder and says (firmly but gently): "Come here!". Then Candy quickly walks away (walks at a faster pace to the left). Bott* shuddered in surprise, then calmly says as he watched Candy walk away: "I'm on my way". Bott* then looks at the sleeping Bill (for a moment), then gets up and follows Candy.

5. Mejson says to himself (pensive) when scratch on his head: "Strange, Candy never behaves like that... He found a new friend". Camera zoom in on Mejson, he squint one's eyes. After a while, the camera goes left (catches up with Bott*), which approaches the pile of stones (near the workshop). Bott* goes (on the line of stones) and looks around (he can't see Candy yet) and says: "Where are you, buddy?". Candy calls out (not too loudly): "Over here!". Candy is sitting behind that pile of stones (you can't see him - it's his hideout, apparently). Camera zoom in and 50% transparency. Candy squatted on his knee next to a large open bag. Bott* squats (but with a distance) and asks the interested person: "What have you got there?". Candy smiles in response.

6. He then gets up and reaches into the bag, a white spider jump to his arms (same spider as in scene 8). The spider is as calm as a pet. Bott* gets up quick in surprise and says: "Wow... a magnificent creature!". Candy says: "It's white". Then Bott* puts his hand to his chin, looks at it and says: "And it won't hurt us?". Candy smiles in response. Bott* lowers his hand and says: "Can I examine it?". Candy stops smiling and says (anxiously): "What?". Bott* replies (reassuringly): "Don't worry, I won't hurt it...". Then he continues (more quietly, more to himself and crazy voice): "At least... I'll try not to". Then Bott* make small, crazy smile. Candy nods. Camera zoom out a little. Mejson comes up and suspiciously asks: "What's going on here?".

7. Bott* shudders in surprise (shudders and his eyes pupils narrow) for a moment, then looks (turns his head towards Mejson, but doesn't say anything). Mejson squint one's eyes and walks over - walks by, then notices the spider and shudders disgusted , and takes a step back (remembers the spiders from the last trip): "UGHH... Fuck!". Then Mejson sees that the spider is calm. Mejson takes two steps forward and looks at the spider worriedly (he has a stern face). Then he stands in front and looks (angry & firmly) and asks Bott*: "What are you guys doing with that damn thing?!". Bott* trying to calm Mejson down says (reassuringly): "Easy, I just found out moments ago". Then he continues: "It seems harmless, too". Mejson replies (already a bit calm): "It can be extremely poisonous you know!".

8. Then he adds, concerned: "Have you seen what happened to Bill?!". Bott* replies (excitedly): "We can use it, for research". Mejson squint one's eyes and raises his eyebrows, says (doesn't know what's going on): "'Research?'". Bott* looks at the spider and then at Mejson and says calmly: "We have an opportunity to do something more than just, 'wait and pray'". Then Bott* adds (excited): "Thanks to this specimen, we could make an antidote for Bill". Mejson's face expresses understanding (enlightenment) and he says: "Ooh". Then he adds curious: "Great idea, Bott*". Mejson looks at the spider, then scratches his head, then at Bott* and says: "But can we do something about those fangs first?". Bott* raises his hand to his chin, staring at the spider.

9. He then looks at Mejson and says (mad & happy): "Shevy and I can come up with something!". Mejson raises an eyebrow, squint one's eyes (reconciled with fate), and says nothing. Then he closes his eye for a moment (his face softens), <sighs>, then says: "Give me a moment, I need to think". The camera zooms in on Mejson (Mejson's mind). Mejson (front face) looks up and to the right, then thinks: "Hey, man". Silence. Mejson looks around (moves his eyes) and thinks: "You still here, Steve?". Mejson looks forward, raises his eyebrows and thinks: "He's… gone?". Next Steve appears (with offset & transparency) behind Mejson (also front face) and says: "What's up?" and adds: "I was in the memories sector". Steve disappears. Mejson squint one's eyes, makes an angry face and thinks: "What?!".

10. Steve appear on the right side (side face) indifferent and says: "I saw your memories... The comrades that you've lost... Jimmy, Jason... even myself!". Mejson looks to the right and angrily thinks: "How dare you?!". Steve answers: "You know, I even saw your death!". Steve disappears. Mejson is suprised and little scared and thinks: "The Fuck?!". Steve comes up from the left side (side face) and says (amused): "Relax... I was just messing with you...". Mejson's expression returns to normal, he thinks: "Enough chit-chat! What do you think I should do with this spider?". Steve comes up from the left side (side face) and says: "That really a question?". And then adds: "Raise it like yours". Mejson looks left (at Steve) and says nothing. Next Mejson looks down (confused & sad). 

11. Steve asks Mejson (curious): "What?". Mejson without looking at Steve thinks: "Candy was hiding it from me". Mejson <sighs>. Steve makes a sad face and says: "But he took the initiative". Mejson looks at Steve. Then he looks in the opposite direction and thinks: "Yes, I know... he's growing up". Steve (calmly & firmly) says: "So do as I say!". Steve disappears. Mejson looks firmly ahead. Back to reality. Mejson looks at Bott*. Bott* says (impatiently): "And? Did you decide?". Next Mejson replies (calmly) scratching his head and looking at the spider: "Yes, but...". Candy says: "Yayyy! thank you thank you thaankk youu!!!", <sounds of joy> and smiles. Then Mejson looks at Bott* and continues: "Just put it in a safe cage". Bott* nods and says (seriously): "Of course".

12. Suddenly, Bott* looks up and left and then only to the left, in the process he says (surprised & puzzled): "What's that?". Mejson asks (interested): "What?". Bott* is not responding. Mejson looks to the left too, then says (in shock): "Who would have expected?". Candy (continues smiling) ignores this. The camera moves to the left. The workshop and materials are passes by camera. Then it also passes Mazurek (slightly higher and in the front) and Zip (slightly lower and behind). Then it approaches a fairly large butterfly (it has a harness and 4 habitats and a chitin armor). Two huge bags (made of chitin) are already on the ground. Rash is standing by the luggage (backwards) - he is checking something, and Keni is standing on the right (sideways), he is stroking the butterfly (calming him down) - the butterfly moves its wings nervously.

13. The camera then pan to the right and focuses on Mazurek and Zip. Mejson comes up from the right (slightly lower and to the front), and then Bott* (a little higher and behind). Mejson says (cheerfully): "You made it. You survived!". And then adds: "You guys surely are a sight for my sore eye!". Then he smiles. Zip replies sadly and a little tired: "Yes,... we survived". Then to himself (more quiet) looking into ground: "Not all of us, though...". Mejson reacts grimace on his face. Candy is walking from the right (between the heroes) with a spider in her arms. Bott* and Mazurek, who were watching the interlocutors, took the floor now. Mazurek asks (cheerful): "How are you holding up, madman?". Bott* has an amused look: "In the mind?". They both <laugh> briefly.

14. After a while, Bott* says more seriously: "I'm doing juuusst fiiinnee..." and then asks: "And how are you?". Mazurek also says (seriously): "Stuff's been rough, but we can manage". Candy walked over and stopped between the characters (smiling). Zip says (hesitantly & worried): "What is this?!". Nobody had time to say anything else, as the spider breaks free from Candy's hands and runs quickly to the left. Candy notices this and runs (after the spider) screams: "Wait!". Zip shudders and reacts with disgust: "UGHH, nasty!". Mazurek also flinches a little. Mejson says firmly leaning forward sharply: "Catch it!". Mazurek and Zip turn left. Camera go to the left, passes Candy running. The camera then stops at the butterfly and the heroes. 

15. The spider jumps to the butterfly (doesn't reach it), but it scares away and butterfly flies away. Keni shudders in surprise and reacts (surprised): "What the fuck?!". Rash stands up and says (surprised): "What's going on?". Then looks at the butterfly flying away and adds (disappointed): "Shiiit...". Then Keni takes a few steps with his hand up screaming: "Hey! Come back here!". Meanwhile, Candy catches the spider. Keni looks at Candy, then he squint one's eyes and says to Candy: "The fuck is this?!". Candy looks at Keni seriously and says nothing. Blackout.


Light effect:

Normal (midday).


Dialogues:

Mejson: "How’s Bill holding out?"
Bott*: "I’ve done all I can..."
Bott*: "He seems stable for now, but damn, just look at him…"
Mejson: "So we can only wait and pray?"
Bott*: "If he wants to live, it's up to him now"
MariogD: "Will he make it?"
Bott*: "We were just talking about that"
Bott*: "You gave him a chance"
Bott*: "Great work"
MariogD: "I agree, we are awesome!"
Mejson: <sighs>
MariogD: "What? We really tried our best"
Bott*: "Quiet down! Bill needs his rest"
Mejson: "He's right"
MariogD: "Well, I got things to do, ciao..."
Candy: "Come here!"
Bott*: "I'm on my way"
Mejson: "Strange, Candy never behaves like that... He found a new friend"
Bott*: "Where are you, buddy?"
Candy: "Over here!"
Bott*: "What have you got there?"
Bott*: "Wow... a magnificent creature!"
Candy: "It's white"
Bott*: "And it won't hurt us?"
Bott*: "Can I examine it?"
Candy: "What?"
Bott*: "Don't worry, I won't hurt it..."
Bott*: "At least... I'll try not to"
Mejson: "What's going on here?"
Mejson: "UGHH... Fuck!"
Mejson: "What are you guys doing with that damn thing?!"
Bott*: "Easy, I just found out moments ago"
Bott*: "It seems harmless, too"
Mejson: "It can be extremely poisonous you know!"
Mejson: "Have you seen what happened to Bill?!"
Bott*: "We can use it, for research"
Mejson: "'Research?'"
Bott*: "We have an opportunity to do something more than just, 'wait and pray'"
Bott*: "Thanks to this specimen, we could make an antidote for Bill"
Mejson: "Ooh"
Mejson: "Great idea, Bott*"
Mejson: "But can we do something about those fangs first?"
Bott*: "Shevy and I can come up with something!"
Mejson: <sighs>
Mejson: "Give me a moment, I need to think"
Mejson: "Hey, man"
Mejson: "You still here, Steve?"
Mejson: "He's… gone?"
Steve: "What's up?"
Steve: "I was in the memories sector"
Mejson: "What?!"
Steve: "I saw your memories... The comrades that you've lost... Jimmy, Jason... even myself!"
Mejson: "How dare you?!"
Steve: "You know, I even saw your death!"
Mejson: "The Fuck?!"
Steve: "Relax... I was just messing with you..."
Mejson: "Enough chit-chat! What do you think I should do with this spider?"
Steve: "That really a question?"
Steve: "Raise it like yours"
Steve: "What?"
Mejson: "Candy was hiding it from me"
Mejson: <sighs>
Steve: "But he took the initiative"
Mejson: "Yes, I know... he's growing up"
Steve: "So do as I say!"
Bott*: "And? Did you decide?"
Mejson: "Yes, but..."
Candy: "Yayyy! thank you thank you thaankk youu!!!"
Candy: <sounds of joy>
Mejson: "Just put it in a safe cage"
Bott*: "Of course"
Bott*: "What's that?"
Mejson: "What?"
Mejson: "Who would have expected?"
Mejson: "You made it. You survived!"
Mejson: "You guys surely are a sight for my sore eye!"
Zip: "Yes,... we survived"
Zip: "Not all of us, though..."
Mazurek: "How are you holding up, madman?"
Bott*: "In the mind?"
Bott*: <laugh>
Mazurek: <laugh>
Bott*: "I'm doing juuusst fiiinnee..."
Bott*: "And how are you?"
Mazurek: "Stuff's been rough, but we can manage"
Zip: "What is this?!"
Candy: "Wait!"
Zip: "UGHH, nasty!"
Mejson: "Catch it!"
Keni: "What the fuck?!"
Rash: "What's going on?"
Rash: "Shiiit..."
Keni: "Hey! Come back here!"
Keni: "The fuck is this?!"

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Posted by Mejson - November 28th, 2021


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Welcome everyone!


How are you guys? Those two weeks passed quickly... I don't know when XD But all the time we keep going!


From the pending events:

  • we are still waiting for VA from @Animetion24 to Delsin (we can't wait). How is going, buddy?,
  • @Plasmarift is still apparently working hard on the narrative (I hope so).


I have a question. It seems to me that we should consider the narrative for Part II and Part III (about the previous parts of Reduce 3 at the beginning). Such general information, what happened, for example, in Reduce 3 - Part I. What do you think about it?


Thanks for helping @ChordC & @MariogD to plan & improve this scene.


What do you think about it, @Cyberdevil@Animetion24@ChordC@MariogD@SayMeBott?


Regards,

Mejson


Scene 9 - Sharp-shooters

Inscription (on black background):

Episode 9
Day 30
(at the same time)
7:33 AM


Action:

1. The scene starts at the top (on corner) of the cabinet from Scene 5. The anchor (arrow with the archer's rope - MariogD's stuff) is hooked on the cabinet. Camera on heroes. MariogD climbs the rope (it is practically at the top). Delsin looks at him. MariogD is at the edge, Delsin leans over and he holds out her hand to him and says (calmly): "Take my hand". MariogD looks at Delsin, who helps him climb. MariogD then stands up and says (still a bit annoyed - on squint one's eyes): "Thanks".

2. MariogD removes his bow from his body, then goes right without saying a word. Delsin watches him silently, then follows him. They walk for a moment in silence (silence). After a moment Delsin says: "Don't you think you were a bit harsh on Mejson?". MariogD replies without turning (indifferently): "I don't really know..." and after a while <sighs>, he calms down and adds: "I understand we're out of options... but Candy?". MariogD stops when he says this and turn head to Delsin.

3. Delsin replies (seriously): "Surely Mejson's got his reasons" and then adds: "He needs to grow up eventually, too". Delsin look to MariogD as he says it. MariogD looks down at the ground (ponders), then adds (a bit embittered): "But why now?". Then he continues (as if to himself), following Delsin (still staring at the ground): "This really isn't a good time for that...". Delsin turns (to MariogD), smiles artificially and says (rhetorically): "Think there'll be a better time?". MariogD looks at him uncertainly, says nothing. Delsin sees MariogD is not answering says: "You and Mejson are birds of a feather, speaking to yourselves like that". Delsin smirks. MariogD looks surprised.

4. Suddenly, Delsin stops (he squint one's eyes) and crouches at the same time (with his hand) give a sign to MariogD. MariogD also makes a serious face and also squat. MariogD whispers: "What do we have here". The camera moves to the left. In front of the heroes there is a cactus in a pot plant (also with a bit of spider webs). There are aphids in front of (and on) the plant pot. Three large and several small ones. Small aphids also sit on the edges of the pot plant (one on the left and one on the right).

5. The camera returns to the heroes. Delsin has his gun ready to shoot. He raises his gun (spear laucher) - he is about to shoot, and suddenly Mariogd whispers firmly: "Wait!". And then adds: "I have a better idea". Delsin lowers his gun, turns his head and asks (interested): "What?". MariogD smiles, hands Delsin a lighter and says: "Here, take this". Delsin turns his body to MariogD, takes the lighter and asks in surprise: "Where did you get this?". MariogD smiles more and replies: "Compliments of Mr. Mate". Delsin said nothing.

6. MariogD unclips (from the body) a small wooden jar and places it on the ground in front of him. He then takes a cork (also wooden) from a small wooden jar (MariogD has two wooden jars attached to the belt - one on the right and one on the left of the body). There is a flame carved on this jar. Then MariogD takes out a special arrow (this is not a standard arrow) and then (for a moment) put the tip of the arrow into the jar (sticky, slightly brown substance - honey-based). Delsin observes (curiously) this enterprise without saying a word.

7. MariogD look at Delsin, put an arrow towards him and says: "Set it alight". Without a word, Delsin ignites the arrow, the point of which ignites violently. MariogD put an arrow over the bow and draw a bow (held in the other hand). MariogD says (confident): "Watch and weep!". MariogD shoots and the camera follows the arrow. The arrow sticks between the aphids, and after a while another two arrows. All the aphids scared (from the fire) run away. Camera returns to the heroes. Both are already going to right. MariogD has already hidden his stuff.

8. MariogD, smug with himself, says the first: "Pretty cool, huh?". Delsin replies: "Yea, not bad". Next Delsin looks at him (squint one's eyes) and says: "Just don't burn us alive". MariogD grows serious and says: "I'm not a child!". Delsin's expression returns to normal, he says nothing more. Both are in front of the plant pot. Delsin runs up and takes out the arrows, puts them together on the ground (in the same direction), then he extinguishes them by treading his foot (he tramples using his foot).

9. While Delsin extinguish arrows, MariogD stops and looks up at the cactus, his face saddened. After a while he (MariogD) says in an absent voice: "Cactus spines...". Delsin turns around (to MariogD): "What?". MariogD looks in his direction, closes his eyes for a moment (looking down at the ground), then opens them (looking at Delsin) and says to Delsin: "They remind me of Jimmy". Delsin asks (interested): "Who's that?". MariogD <sighs> looking down at the ground then back at Delsin and says: "He was a great man". After a while he adds: "Too great...". Delsin nods slowly (he doesn't quite understand what MariogD meant). MariogD after a while says: "Nevermind, we need to carry on...". They both start to go right. Blackout.


10. A large digital clock appears on a black background, showing the time: 7:33 AM + <time elapsed in this scene>. Suddenly the time starts running fast (24 minutes) until it stops at: 7:57 AM. Then the clock disappears after a while. The black background fades (transparency) to showing the new area.


11. The heroes walk side by side (to the right) and talk. Delsin looks at lighter that he has in hand and then looks at MariogD and says (interested): "I'm not sold on Mr. Mate" and adds: "Kinda hard to trust a known assassin". Delisn retracts the lighter. MariogD looks at Delsin and says (calmly): "Around these parts, better to have a well-trained killer than not. Besides, he looks awesome!", then smirks (squint one's eyes) and says: "What's your beef with him?". Delsin doesn't reply, just raises an eyebrow. They both stare straight ahead for a moment. Then Delsin looks back at MariogD and asks: "You and Bott* have history?". MariogD looks at Delsin and replies: "We used to work together. He's decent, but fucked up in the head sometimes". Delsin smiles and says: "Yea, I've noticed". After a while, he adds: "What's the shovel obsession about?".

12. MariogD smiles and replies: "You don't want to know". Delsin blinks twice (a bit surprised by the answer), then looks ahead and squint one's eyes and says (firmly): "Hey, follow me, quick!". They both run fast to the right and up (diagonally). MariogD right behind Delsin. Both are hiding behind a glass bottle (spray with a dark substance - it is slightly transparent, there is a plastic tube inside). The heroes disappear behind this object. The camera that has followed the heroes so far - zoom out (some) and go to right. There's a fire ant standing there, which was the front to the heroes, but is interested in the stain on the floor, so it didn't react from such a distance.

13. The camera move (also zoom in) to the right glass bottle's side. Behind it heroes are show up (a little) - MariogD lower, and Delsin higher. Delsin speaks the first confident (whisper): "We can take care of this easily enough...". MariogD smiles and says (whisper): "I have a better idea". MariogD disappears behind the bottle. Delsin looks (left) after him, <sighs>, asks (in a whisper): "What do you mean?". Delsin also disappears behind the bottle. After a while, the bottle turns slightly transparent (50%). Delsin runs to the crouched MariogD (left edge of the bottle).

14. MariogD holds a bait arrow in one hand, and a jar in the other, with its contents pouring over the arrow. MariogD has squeezed lids and eyes (as if he was holding his breath). After that, MariogD quickly puts the jar on the ground (it has a picture of a dead fish with an odor) and closes it. Then he shoots (also quickly). There is a visible greenish smoke (rot) from both - the jar and the arrow. When MariogD was pouring it (substance) on the arrow, Delsin covers his face and says (disgusted & shudder): "UGHH, What is that smell?!". MariogD did not react (he was busy).

15. The camera moves (also a little zoom out) left and down (diagonally). It shows an arrow stuck in the ground (you can see this stink - greenish smoke). After a while, the camera moves a little to the right, a running fire ant appears (the camera follows her). The ant stops right next to the bait and examines it with its antennae. In the meantime, the heroes disappear (they watched this for a while).

16. The camera moves to the right (also a little zoom in) - to the right edge of the bottle. After a while, MariogD's head peeks out from behind her (he checks if it's safe). MariogD then goes right, followed by Delsin (he has a slightly resigned expression) at a greater distance. MariogD (without turning around) says (confident & smug): "See that? Not a single drop of blood shed". Delsin says (indifferently): "Sure..." and then adds (maliciously): "Just your excuse to show off".

17. MariogD stops (Delsin too) and turns (whole body) and says (confident): "It is only when mosquito land on your balls that you realize there is a way to solve problems without using violence". Delsin makes a shoked face for a second, then <laughs> for a moment, and MariogD smiles. Delsin (as he finished laughing) replies (amused): "Funny". Suddenly, a fire ant jumps off the bottle and lands on MariogD (he presses him with his front leg to the ground). Camera zoom in half of the ant and MariogD. MariogD only managed to: <groan>, and after a while he screams in a desperate voice: "Help me!...". The MariogD bow fell next to him, and he grabbed (with both hands) the ant's leg (he tries to free himself). The ant tilts its head (moves its antennae) towards MariogD.

18. Delsin runs between the ant's legs, skids on its knee, and shoots at the ant head (when he's slide under ant's head). While still sliding, he turns. Next grabs MariogD by the shoulders, then stands up and pulls MariogD (Delsin takes a few quick steps back) before ant's body was falling down to ground. Delsin helps MariogD get up. MariogD then leans back a little, puts his hands on his hips, and <breathing heavily> for a while and says (scary): "God, that was too close!". MariogD calms down, turns around and says to Delsin: "Thanks, man...". Delsin watches MariogD calmly in silence, then says (firmly, but not maliciously): "Let that be a lesson: No solution is one and done. We must always remain vigilant". MariogD (a bit embarrassed) nods. Blackout.


19. A large digital clock appears on a black background, showing the time: 7:57 AM + <time elapsed in this scene>. Suddenly the time starts running fast (31 minutes) until it stops at: 8:28 AM. Then the clock disappears after a while. The black background fades (transparency) to showing the new area.


20. Delsin goes ahead (first), followed by MariogD. MariogD is somewhat depressed (he has a disheartened expression on his face). Suddenly Delsin stops and turns his head and asks (interested): "You alright, buddy?". MariogD stops, touches his chest (leaning slightly forward) and replies (gloomily & with pain): "No, my chest hurts". Delisn replies (reassuringly): "Don't worry, we'll take care of that once we get there". Then he pulls out a map and after a while he says: "Come on, just a little further". Then Delsin hides the map and they walk in silence.

21. MariogD looks at the ground as he walks (looks tired). Suddenly Delsin stops. He smiles and then he looks up and his expression changes to horror - he is stunned. MariogD bounces off his back (he doesn't notice Delsin stopping) and says, exasperated: "Hey!". The blow shudders Delsin and sobers. Delsin whispers: "Be quiet...". Then he starts running bent over, and whispers: "Follow me". MariogD does the same and asks (intrigued): "What's going on?". Delsin doesn't answer (he has a serious expression).

22. Camera going to right (also zoom out a little) on plant pot with spider web (Aloe). On the plant (cobwebs) sits a spider (much larger than the one that killed Diablo) in a brown-maroon color (previously spider was black). There is a large cobweb (its visible fragment) between the object and the plant pot. The camera returns to the heroes (also zoom in a little). They are hidden (their heads stick out a little from object - as before) behind a plastic white bottle (plant growth chemicals). MariogD is shocked, says (in a whisper): "What a beast!".

23. MariogD then looks at Delsin and whispers (a bit reproachfully): "Why didn't you tell me?". Delsin looks at him calmly and says (whisper): "With your chest weak, I didn't want this to scare your heart out of the cavity". MariogD raises an eyebrow in react (squint one's eyes a little), but says nothing. Then they both look at the spider again. After a moment, Delsin asks: "Got any other tricks up your sleeve?". MariogD looks at him (a bit surprised) and replies: "Really?". And then adds: "I thought you didn't like my ideas...". Delsin looks at him and whispers (softly): "Why's that?". Then adds: "I'll be frank, they're pretty cool". He smiles at MariogD. MariogD says (whispering): "I knew it!". MariogD smiles.

24. Delsin breaks this happy moment (curious): "So?". Then adds: "No time like the present to show your genius". MariogD without looking at Delsin smiles (to himself) madly (psychopathic expression) for a moment and says: "I have something tasty for this occasion". As he says this, he detaches the small wooden jar from own neck and sets it on the ground. This time there is a skull symbol carved on the small jar. MariogD takes an arrow from a quiver and then dips it in a purple substance (poison). 

25. Delsin watched him with interested, then asks (interested): "Brilliant idea". And then adds: "Don't mind if I do". MariogD gives him the jar up (Delsin stands over him) saying (in a whisper): "Sure, feel free". Delsin picks up the jar, and then pours out (a little) its contents over the tip the spear ammo (located in his gun). During this activity, MariogD whispers: "Careful now, this is extremely poisonous". Without a word, Delsin plugs the jar with cork and then returns this jar to MariogD. 

26. MariogD hangs the jar on own neck. Both are getting ready to shoot (aiming, etc.). MariogD glances at Delsin and whispers (focused): "Ready?". Without taking his eyes off the target, Delsin whispers: "Standby". MariogD says: "On my mark... 3... 2... 1... Fire!" The missile and the arrow fly to the target (to the right) and the camera follows (shows this flight).

27. Both it hit to the spider's body. The beast shudders and emits a dark groan. Then it jumps from the plant (Aloe) to the ground (probably looking for the victim). The spider make a cloud of dust when land on the ground. The dust has barely descended (disappeared), and suddenly the spider starts convulsing (shaking and moving its front legs), making many dark groans at the same time. Then the spider slide down to graund without life. The camera returns (also zoom in a little) to the heroes.

28. They both have surprised expressions (faces). MariogD is the first to speak: "Wow... The poison's a lot more potent than I thought". Delsin, without taking his eyes off the spider, says: "Agreed". After a while, Delsin looks at Aloe, and points with his hand (to the right and up) and says (calmly): "Can you help me with this?". MariogD also looks in that direction and says (also calmly): "Sure". Blackout.


Light effect:

Yellow (morning).


Dialogues:

Delsin: "Take my hand"
MariogD: "Thanks"
Delsin: "Don't you think you were a bit harsh on Mejson?"
MariogD: "I don't really know..."
MariogD: <sighs>
MariogD: "I understand we're out of options... but Candy?"
Delsin: "Surely Mejson's got his reasons"
Delsin: "He needs to grow up eventually, too"
MariogD: "But why now?"
MariogD: "This really isn't a good time for that..."
Delsin: "Think there'll be a better time?"
Delsin: "You and Mejson are birds of a feather, speaking to yourselves like that"
MariogD: "What do we have here"
MariogD: "Wait!"
MariogD: "I have a better idea"
Delsin: "What?"
MariogD: "Here, take this"
Delsin: "Where did you get this?"
MariogD: "Compliments of Mr. Mate"
MariogD: "Set it alight"
MariogD: "Watch and weep!"
MariogD: "Pretty cool, huh?"
Delsin: "Yea, not bad"
Delsin: "Just don't burn us alive"
MariogD: "I'm not a child!"
MariogD: "Cactus spines..."
Delsin: "What?"
MariogD: "They remind me of Jimmy"
Delsin: "Who's that?"
MariogD: <sighs>
MariogD: "He was a great man"
MariogD: "Too great..."
MariogD: "Nevermind, we need to carry on..."
Delsin: "I'm not sold on Mr. Mate"
Delsin: "Kinda hard to trust a known assassin"
MariogD: "Around these parts, better to have a well-trained killer than not. Besides, he looks awesome!"
MariogD: "What's your beef with him?"
Delsin: "You and Bott* have history?"
MariogD: "We used to work together. He's decent, but fucked up in the head sometimes"
Delsin: "Yea, I've noticed"
Delsin: "What's the shovel obsession about?"
MariogD: "You don't want to know"
Delsin: "Hey, follow me, quick!"
Delsin: "We can take care of this easily enough..."
MariogD: "I have a better idea"
Delsin: <sighs>
Delsin: "What do you mean?"
Delsin: "UGHH, What is that smell?!"
MariogD: "See that? Not a single drop of blood shed"
Delsin: "Sure..."
Delsin: "Just your excuse to show off"
MariogD: "It is only when mosquito land on your balls that you realize there is a way to solve problems without using violence"
Delsin: <laughs>
Delsin: "Funny"
MariogD: <groan>
MariogD: "Help me!..."
MariogD: <breathing heavily>
MariogD: "God, that was too close!"
MariogD: "Thanks, man..."
Delsin: "Let that be a lesson: No solution is one and done. We must always remain vigilant"
Delsin: "You alright, buddy?"
MariogD: "No, my chest hurts"
Delisn: "Don't worry, we'll take care of that once we get there"
Delisn: "Come on, just a little further"
MariogD: "Hey!"
Delsin: "Be quiet..."
Delsin: "Follow me"
MariogD: "What's going on?"
MariogD: "What a beast!"
MariogD: "Why didn't you tell me?"
Delsin: "With your chest weak, I didn't want this to scare your heart out of the cavity"
Delsin: "Got any other tricks up your sleeve?"
MariogD: "Really?"
MariogD: "I thought you didn't like my ideas..."
Delsin: "Why's that?"
Delsin: "I'll be frank, they're pretty cool"
MariogD: "I knew it!"
Delsin: "So?"
Delsin: "No time like the present to show your genius"
MariogD: "I have something tasty for this occasion"
Delsin: "Brilliant idea"
Delsin: "Don't mind if I do"
MariogD: "Sure, feel free"
MariogD: "Careful now, this is extremely poisonous"
MariogD: "Ready?"
Delsin: "Standby"
MariogD: "On my mark... 3... 2... 1... Fire!"
MariogD: "Wow... The poison's a lot more potent than I thought"
Delsin: "Agreed"
Delsin: "Can you help me with this?"
MariogD: "Sure"

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Posted by Mejson - November 11th, 2021


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Welcome everyone!


First, I have a question. @Animetion24, how are you? All good? How's your writing narrative? I can not wait because it will definitely be super cool!


Summarizing the previous Poster (VA - Part I):

Cyberdevil - MariogD (30) - 3/3 Done (100%)

Cyberdevil - Candy (2) - 3/3 Done (100%)

Cyberdevil - Diablo (3) - 3/3 Done (100%)

Animetion24 - Delsin (22) - 0/3 Done (0%)

ChordC - Mr. Mate (11) - 3/3 Done (100%)

SayMeBott - Bott* (6) - 3/3 Done (100%)

Plasmarift - Mejson (33) - 2/3 Done (66.6%)

Plasmarift - Bill (38) - 2/3 Done (66.6%)


Thank you for a great job! A few more are missing, but (for Part I) we have dubbing the characters ready. @Animetion24, how is the recording going? Do you still have a sore throat?


Now let's move on to the main point of the program. There was no Poster for a long time, well... it took a long time to prepare files for the character (dubbing) which I got from you. Still in awe of the quality - great job. In Reduce 3 there will be a brand new interface and navigation that I can recount if this interests you... but I guess I'm losing the plot. Planning Scene 8 took me more time that I was expecting, well... it is even longer than the previous ones XD


Thanks for helping @ChordC & @MariogD to plan & improve this scene.


What do you think about it, @Cyberdevil@Animetion24@ChordC@MariogD@SayMeBott?


Regards,

Mejson


Scene 8 - Hide-and-seek

Inscription (on black background):

Episode 8
Day 30
(~20 minutes later)
7:33 AM


Action:

1. The scene begins in place where Bill was pinned to the ground by a common earwig (at the end of scene 2). On the right, a large galosh, on the left, a pot (with a plant). Between these two objects there is a spider web (above), which was also in scene 2. In the foreground, on the worn (more dirty left - in front of the galosh) floor (eaten by insects and some excrement) is the body of a common earwig (he was killed by Delsin) along with a spear (ammo) in the head.

2. The body of the insect has started to rot - it has changed color and there is a small cloud of stink (rot) around it. Additionally, this body is a bit incomplete (slightly eaten). On the left and right side (this body) there are fire ants interested in the body. These ants are a bit smaller than black ants (probably a young colony). The camera slowly moves on these insects (slow camera movement). Then a piece of Mr. Mate's head and then Mejson head peeks out from behind the galosh.

3. Camera zoom in on these characters. At the moment of zooming in, the wellington boot becomes translucent (the same as in Pass of Time in the scene of the meeting between Rash and Keni) showing the figures of the characters. Right after a moment zooming in, Mejson is the first to say: "So what's the plan?". Then smiles and adds jokingly: "Mate, I can't do a frontflip with this thing on my back" (on the Mejson's back is a water container).

4. Mr. Mate looks in his direction, then asks jokingly: "So just like when you don't have it on your back?" and smiles with little squint one's eyes. Mejson also a little squint one's eyes and smiles. They both get serious and look at the fire ants again. Camera zoom in on Mejson. He squint one's eyes and says: "Really now, what's the plan?". Silence. After a while, Mejson looks down. Camera moves down slightly. Mejson says: "Mate?" and after that he says in surprise (his eyebrows rise): "Where the hell did you go?!" (Mr. Mate disappeared).

5. Camera zoom out. Mejson looks around, then scratches his head. Camera more zoom out and moves to the left (you can see part of the galosh and the plant pot - on the left). Mr. Mate leans out from behind the plant pot and whispers: "Pssst! Over here...". Mejson looks in his direction (his pupils is narrow) and also says in a whisper shocked: "But?... But?... How?!". Mr. Mate smiles and then says: "I'm like a shadow...". Mejson squint one's eyes and says: "Suuure...". After a while, Mejson says: "What about me?".

6. Mr. Mate says: "Hold on a sec". Then he looks around and picks up a lump of earth (dried mud from the galoshes). Then he looks at Mejson and asks: "Ready?". Mejson nods. Mr. Mate throws the nugget to the right, the fire ants take an interest and run to the right. Mejson runs through and disappears behind the pot plant. Camera zoom in. The pot plant becomes translucent. Mr. Mate looks at Mejson and says smiling: "Like a cheetah!" Mejson looks at Mr. Mate, squint one's eyes and says "Fuck off!".

7. After a while, Mr. Mate turns and goes to the left. Mejson shrugs and follows Mr. Mate. After a while, a close-up on Mejson's head (Mejson's mind - background change). Mejson (face side) and Steve's face (face front) appears behind his head. Steve says: "You busy?". Mejson thinks: "No, it's cool. What's up?". Steve says: "Is that your new boyfriend?". Then he squint one's eyes and smiles before disappearing after a while. Mejson grimaces an eyebrow, squint one's eyes and replies: "Very funny...".

8. Steve appears from the back (face side) and says: "Cheer up, old friend! It's a lovely day!". Mejson takes a look at Steve and thinks: "Uh-huhm...". Steve disappears. Then Mejson raises his eyebrows indifferently and thinks (still have squint one's eyes): "What do you want?". Steve appears (face front) behind Mejson's head and says: "This guy's good". Mejson's expression returns to normal and he thinks: "Yea... so?". Steve is seriously saying: "Don't loose him like you lost me...".

9. Mejson lowers his eyebrow a little, a little quint one's eyes, and thinks: "I...". Suddenly, Mr. Mate says: "Are you listening to me?!" (a bit quieter). Steve disappears and Mejson comes back to reality (background change). In front of Mejson there is an irritated Mr. Mate looking at his eyes. Mejson blinks with a surprised face, and after a moment says: "Yea, sure...". Mr. Mate leans back a bit and puts his hands on his hips and asks distrustfully: "Yeah? What did I say?".

10. Mejson a little squint one's eyes, raises his eyebrows, scratches his head and says: "Ummm...". Mr. Mate leans forward depressed, puts his hand on his face and <sighs>. Then he straightens up, looks down at the ground and says: "What I'm trying to say is...". Mejson straightens up, lowers his hands and focuses on Mr. Mate. Mr. Mate raises his head and looks at Mejson, raising his eyebrows in a gentle look. Then he says: "I'm sorry for hurting you...". Mejson reacts in surprise: "Hmmm?".

11. Mr. Mate continues: "Forgive me for what I said before...". Mejson, even more surprised, says: "Ohh... that...", and then adds: "It's cool, nothing happened". Mr. Mate smiles and Mejson smiles back. After that Mr. Mate looks down at the ground, (his expression is back to normal) he <grunt> when touching his face with his hand, then says as he straightens up and turns around: "Alright, let's get out'a here". Mr. Mate goes left and Mejson follows him. The heroes reached the left side of the area. Blackout.


12. A large digital clock appears on a black background, showing the time: 7:33 AM + <time elapsed in this scene>. Suddenly the time starts running fast (28 minutes) until it stops at: 8:01 AM. Then the clock disappears after a while. The black background fades (transparency) to showing the new area.


13. The scene begins in the area between the previous site and the old base (first base on the porch). There are 3 plant pots here (half of one plant plot is also of the previous area - right side this area). Another one a bit deeper and another one closer. And further on the left is an open space (no objects to hide behind).

14. For a moment, the camera shows the space between the first and second plant pots (apart from the cobwebs between the leaves of the plants, there are also cobwebs between the plant pots - there are many more spider webs). Before the second plant pot, the floor was eaten (damaged) by insects and there is also droppings. There's also a group of small Aphids (feeding on rubbish). Camera zoom in on first plant pot.

15. Mr. Mate comes out from behind the first plant pot, followed by Mejson. Mr. Mate squint one's eyes, then runs up to the group of Aphids, stamps his foot and screams: "Shoo! Shoo!", then adds: "Fucking bugs..." as he watches the Aphids run away. Mejson joins Mr. Mate. Camera a little zoom out. Both heroes look around. Then the camera zoom in. Mejson squint one's eyes, scratching his head, then lowers his hand and says looking at Mr. Mate: "Is it just me, or are there a lot of spiderwebs?".

16. Mr. Mate looks up, squint one's eyes, pulls out the knife and says: "Yeaaa, I agree..." then adds (has a serious expression on his face) turning to Mejson: "I don't like this... stay alert...". Mr. Mate continues to the left, looking around. Camera zoom out and go to right edge of plant pot. There's a small white spider walking up on it (white because it was hatched from egg some time ago). Camera zoom in and go to heroes. They are close to the third plant pot (both are looking around and have knives in their hands).

17. Then the pot plant goes transparent (when characters follow the pot plant) and the camera stops on Mejson who stops (Mr. Mate goes left). Mejson leans back, lifting his head in a grimace and says: "Damn, how far did we go? My back's killing me!". Next is hearing Mr. Mate: "You can do it Grandpa!". Mejson replies: "Sure!". And then quickly returns to his normal position and squint one's eyes at Mr. Mate and says surprised: "Wait... what did you call me?!".

18. Camera go to Mr. Mate (he was crouched). He looks from behind the plant pot and says "Shhh... quiet!". Mejson joins Mr. Mate and also looks outside. Then he (Mejson) says: "What do we got?". Camera go to Left and Front (Diagonally). There are two beetles there, which eat the floor (the floor is destroyed) and there are also droppings. Next, camera returns to heroes. Mr. Mate looks at (seriously) worms and says: "We got two beetles up ahead...".

19. And next he adds: "I don't think we can pass through them unnoticed..." (on the left side of the area there is no objects to hide). Mejson looks (intrigued) at Mr. Mate and asks: "Any suggestions?". Mr. Mate squint one's eyes a little, his eyebrows lower in the wild look and he says: "Let's take'em out". Mejson looks at bugs and asks: "Alright. You taking the left beetle or right?". Mr. Mate says like to himself: "I'm taking both...". Mejson looks at Mr. Mate shocked and reacts: "Wait, what?!".

20. Mr. Mate looks at Mejson, smiles feisty and says: "You heard me. Sit back and enjoy the show". Mejson is shocked and nothing says - observes situations. Mr. Mate after his words runs to the bugs. When he is close to the abdomen of the first worm - he jump on it, and in the next jump he does a deadly blow in the center of the insect head. Then he gets up quickly, turns and doing backflip directly on the head of the second worm by asking a deadly blow (also in head).

21. Then Mr. Mate sits on the bug's head. The camera goes to the right and shows Mejson incoming. Mejson comes over and also sits on the head of the second bug. Mejson looks at Mr. Mate shocked (impressed) and says: "Oh shit... I've never seen anything like that!". Mr. Mate smiles smug and says: "Yeah... I practiced!". Mejson in response is <chuckles>. After a while, they both become serious. Mejson, after a while says: "I've seen enough, shall we have breakfast?".

22. Mr. Mate nods. They both pull out pieces of roast meat. Mejson looks down at the ground. Camera zoom in na Mejson - going to Mejson's mind. Mejson (face side) thinks (seriously): "You're right...". Steve's face (face front) appears behind his head. Steve says (seriously): "Right about what?", Mejson response (seriously): "About him...". Steve smiles, then says, squint one's eyes a little and eyebrows (seriously & sarcastic): "Hahaha, sure I am!". Steve disappears. Mejson squint one's eyes a little, then closes his eye, <sighs> and thinks (hopeful): "Mr. Mate...".

23. He then opens his eye (his face returns to normal) and thinks (hopeful): "If anyone was going to save us from this hellhole, it would be him...". Steve appears from the back (face side) and says (excited): "I told you!". Suddenly, Mr. Mate (a bit irritated): "You seeing things again?". Steve disappears. Mejson back to reality - camera zoom out. Mejson raises an eyebrow and asks (hesitantly): "What are you talking about?". Mr. Mate folds his hands, squint one's eyes, leans back and says firmly: "Really?... You're gonna pretend like nothing's wrong?".

24. Embarrassed Mejson looks at the ground scratching his head. He then lowers his hand and looks embarrassed at Mr. Mate and stays silent. Mr. Mate returns to his normal position and looks softly as he sees Mejson's embarrassment and says: "I specialize in human psychology" then adds: "And you look like you're dead inside". Then he smiles to Mejson. Mejson says (still a bit embarrassed): "Well... yeah" and continues, seriously: "I think I'm going crazy".

25. Mr. Mate grows serious and asks, intrigued (maybe also grieved): "Something from the past?". Mejson <sighs>, <takes a deep breath> closing his eye for a moment. Mr. Mate notices Mejson's anxiety and Mr. Mate says (serious & low tone): "It's ok, you don't need to talk about it...". Mejson gets up and goes to the left next to Mr. Mate (Mr. Mate turned his head to watch Mejson) then stops, puts his hands on his hips, leans back (straightening his sore back).

26. Then he says, looking into space: "Steve... returned. To call my head his home". Mr. Mate inquisitively (curiously) asks: "What does he say in there?". Mejson squint one's eyes a little and says: "He advises me...". Mr. Mate leans forward, looking down at the ground, puts his hand to his chin (thinks) and says: "This looks like a mind's way of dealing with trauma...". 

27. Mejson turn his body to Mr. Mate. Then he squint one's eyes a little and says (a bit maliciously): "Thank you for the diagnosis, Doc Mate". Then he smiles. Mr. Mate smiles too. After a while, Mr. Mate says (serious tone & emotion): "You have people to look over, don't let that slip out of your mind". Mejson raises his eyebrows as his eyes pupils narrow. Then, after a short while, he looks down at the ground, then changes the subject (not looks to Mr. Mate): "Okay, let's get going". Blackout.


28. A large digital clock appears on a black background, showing the time: 8:01 AM + <time elapsed in this scene>. Suddenly the time starts running fast (26 minutes) until it stops at: 8:27 AM. Then the clock disappears after a while. The black background fades (transparency) to showing the new area.


29. The third part (of this scene) is the place where the heroes set up their first base (veranda). From the very beginning, the camera shows walking heroes (towards the base). Mejson and Mr. Mate stops by a simple, low barricade, which reaches the hero's waist (made of: sticks, leaves, wood). Mr. Mate is crouching quickly (he is hiding behind the barricade), he has a serious face. With a gesture of his hand, he orders Mejson to do the same (Mr. Mate is closer, and Mejson is further from viewer).

30. Mr. Mate squint one's eyes and says seriously in a whisper (not looking at Mejson): "What a mess...". Mejson says (also whispering): "What the hell happened here?". Mr. Mate replies in a whisper: "Isn't it obvious?... Mother nature took back her land…". The camera then moves to the left (also zooms out) and shows the base. Everywhere there are a lot of cobwebs on the objects there. Also there are white spiders (young) - for heroes the size of a dog (or a little bigger). The camera returns to the heroes (also zooms in).

31. Mr. Mate says (whispering): "We gotta take’em down". Mejson replies (whispering): "Sure...". After a while, Mr. Mate whispers firmly: "Eyes open!". Mejson turns his head to him, raises one eyebrow. Mr. Mate turns his head towards him and says (whispering) a little embarrassed: "Well... eye". Mejson looks at Mr. Mate sarcastically and squints his one eye (while Mr. Mate cringes his teath, smiling), then Mejson says: "Very funny", rolling his eye as he says that. After a while, he Mr. Mate and Mejson becomes serious again, then Mejson continues: "Let's go...", Mr. Mate looks ahead and nods.

32. Both heroes pull out knives and then jump over the barricade. They run towards (two different) two spiders (spiders are in the two lines, one is deeper one is further to the viewer). Mejson, who is further background, runs towards the spider (this spider is back side to Mejson) in this line. When he's close, he skids on the knee (dust) and then he stabs the knife into the spider's body when he's next to it. The spider begins to squeal, and Mejson quickly pulls out his knife and stabs it similarly, this time into the spider's head, which abruptly goes silent.

33. At the same time (the action of Mejson and Mr. Mate will be shown simultaneously). Mr. Mate runs towards the spider (the one below, this spider is front side to Mr. Mate). This spider reacts and starts walking towards Mr. Mate. When the hero is close, he presses the spider's head to the ground with his foot - they slide (dust) left together until they lose their all speed. Then Mr. Mate makes a quick bow, stabbing the knife into the spider's head. Mr. Mate turns when hears the spider squeal (one that Mejson took care of).

34. After Mejson silences the (first) spider with the deathblow of a knife - Mr. Mate whispers to Mejson: "Shhh...". Mejson looks at him and says in a whisper making a slightly embarrassed face: "Sorry...". Mr. Mate wastes no time and whispers as he gets up: "Follow me...". It starts running a bit up and left and hides behind the pot plant. Mejson's face returns to normal, he without a word gets up and runs after Mr. Mate. Mejson is hiding behind a jar of cucumbers (these two objects are close to each other - plant pot on the left, and the jar on the right).

35. After a while, a spider (probably provoked by noise) walks (to the right) in front of the plant pot. The moment he passes the hidden Mr. Mate (he is only slightly visible), the protagonist leans out and stabs it quickly in the head, and then quickly hides. Mejson (he's also a bit visible from behind the jar) watches this shocked. Then Mr. Mate looks at Mejson and squint one's eyes. Mejson responds whispering: "What?". Mr Mate throws the knife (over Mejson's head). Mejson hides instinctively. 

36. The spider drops and hits the ground (dust). The spider has a knife in its head. Mr. Mate walks over and pulls his knife from the spider's head. Mejson leans out and stares at the spider's body first, and then at Mr. Mate (all time in shocked). Mr. Mate. squint one's eyes a little and whispers to Mejon with a slight disappointment: "This isn't some picnic!". Mejson looks at him without a word and blinks faster eye (coming out of admiration). After a while, Mr. Mate softens (looks gently) seeing at Mejson's reactions. Next Mr. Mate turns around and whispers: "Let's keep going...". Mejson nods (to himself).

37. Mejson and Mr. Mate continues going (they are sneaking) along the plant pot. When they almost end of plant pot, Mr. Mate suprsingly gives a sing (he raises his hand) to Mejson to stop and crouches. Mejson is doing the same. Camera move to the left and there is zoom out. There's a workshop table on the foreground with spider sitting on it. In the background there is big plastic backet where spider is sitting (almost near the ground). Camera is returning to heroes and zoom in. Heroes are still couching (they not seeing each other because Mr Mates strictly observing spiders). Mr Mates whispers: "Ok, you ready?". Mejson whispers: "Right behind you...".

38. They start runing in the same moment (simultaneous action). Mejson kills spider on the plastic bucket with simple hit in the head. Then he quickly takes a step back, and the spider's body hits the ground (dust). Next Mejson looks at Mr. Mate action. Mr. Mate jumps on the rock's stack and throws knife in the spider's head (he wants to make epic kill so knife is thrown lighter). Next he do a backflip that is ending when he land on knife (one foot presses the knife and the other one lands on the spider's head). He wants to show Mejson another spectacular kill. Mejson in the background sees this and is under big impression.

39. Mejson is getting closer to Mr. Mate. In this time Mr. Mate is picking knife from spider head and sees around to be sure that all spiders are dead. Mr. Mate says seriously: "Targets neutralized". Mejson looks at him confused and asks: "Eee... what?". Mr. Mate answers a bit embarrassed: "Sorry, habit from my previous job". Mejson changes the subject and says: "Was that backflip really necessary?". Next Mejson is smiling. Mr. Mate responds: "Of course! It was extremely necessary!". He smiles to Mejson. Camera move up (zoom out) to the plant pot leaves with spider web. They're there drops of water (condensation). Mejson says off-screen: "Maybe not extremely, but… how are we gonna get there?". Mr. Mate responds: "Don't worry, I have an idea". Blackout.


Light effect:

Yellow (morning).


Dialogues:

Mejson: "So what's the plan?"
Mejson: "Mate, I can't do a frontflip with this thing on my back"
Mr. Mate: "So just like when you don't have it on your back?"
Mejson: "Really now, what's the plan?"
Mejson: "Mate?"
Mejson: "Where the hell did you go?!"
Mr. Mate: "Pssst! Over here..."
Mejson: "But?... But?... How?!"
Mr. Mate: "I'm like a shadow..."
Mejson: "Suuure..."
Mejson: "What about me?"
Mr. Mate: "Hold on a sec"
Mr. Mate: "Ready?"
Mr. Mate: "Like a cheetah!"
Mejson: "Fuck off!"
Steve: "You busy?"
Mejson: "No, it's cool. What's up?"
Steve: "Is that your new boyfriend?"
Mejson: "Very funny..."
Steve: "Cheer up, old friend! It's a lovely day!"
Mejson: "Uh-huhm..."
Mejson: "What do you want?"
Steve: "This guy's good"
Mejson: "Yea... so?"
Steve: "Don't loose him like you lost me..."
Mejson: "I..."
Mr. Mate: "Are you listening to me?!"
Mejson: "Yea, sure..."
Mr. Mate: "Yeah? What did I say?"
Mejson: "Ummm..."
Mr. Mate: <sighs>
Mr. Mate: "What I'm trying to say is..."
Mr. Mate: "I'm sorry for hurting you..."
Mejson: "Hmmm?"
Mr. Mate: "Forgive me for what I said before..."
Mejson: "Ohh... that..."
Mejson: "It's cool, nothing happened"
Mr. Mate: <grunt>
Mr. Mate: "Alright, let's get out'a here"
Mr. Mate: "Shoo! Shoo!"
Mr. Mate: "Fucking bugs..."
Mejson: "Is it just me, or are there a lot of spiderwebs?"
Mr. Mate: "Yeaaa, I agree..."
Mr. Mate: "I don't like this... stay alert..."
Mejson: "Damn, how far did we go? My back's killing me!"
Mr. Mate: "You can do it Grandpa!"
Mejson: "Sure!"
Mejson: "Wait... what did you call me?!"
Mr. Mate: "Shhh... quiet!"
Mejson: "What do we got?"
Mr. Mate: "We got two beetles up ahead..."
Mr. Mate: "I don't think we can pass through them unnoticed..."
Mejson: "Any suggestions?"
Mr. Mate: "Let's take'em out"
Mejson: "Alright. You taking the left beetle or right?"
Mr. Mate: "I'm taking both..."
Mejson: "Wait, what?!"
Mr. Mate: "You heard me. Sit back and enjoy the show"
Mejson: "Oh shit... I've never seen anything like that!"
Mr. Mate: "Yeah... I practiced!"
Mejson: <chuckles>
Mejson: "I've seen enough, shall we have breakfast?"
Mejson: "You're right..."
Steve: "Right about what?"
Mejson: "About him..."
Steve: "Hahaha, sure I am!"
Mejson: <sighs>
Mejson: "Mr. Mate..."
Mejson: "If anyone was going to save us from this hellhole, it would be him..."
Steve: "I told you!"
Mr. Mate: "You seeing things again?"
Mejson: "What are you talking about?"
Mr. Mate: "Really?... You're gonna pretend like nothing's wrong?"
Mr. Mate: "I specialize in human psychology"
Mr. Mate: "And you look like you're dead inside"
Mejson: "Well... yeah"
Mejson: "I think I'm going crazy"
Mr. Mate: "Something from the past?"
Mejson: <sighs>
Mejson: <takes a deep breath>
Mr. Mate: "It's ok, you don't need to talk about it..."
Mejson: "Steve... returned. To call my head his home"
Mr. Mate: "What does he say in there?"
Mejson: "He advises me..."
Mr. Mate: "This looks like a mind's way of dealing with trauma..."
Mejson: "Thank you for the diagnosis, Doc Mate"
Mr. Mate: "You have people to look over, don't let that slip out of your mind"
Mejson: "Okay, let's get going"
Mr. Mate: "What a mess..."
Mejson: "What the hell happened here?"
Mr. Mate: "Isn't it obvious?... Mother nature took back her land…"
Mr. Mate: "We gotta take’em down"
Mejson: "Sure..."
Mr. Mate: "Eyes open!"
Mr. Mate: "Well... eye"
Mejson: "Very funny"
Mejson: "Let's go..."
Mr. Mate: "Shhh..."
Mejson: "Sorry..."
Mr. Mate: "Follow me..."
Mejson: "What?"
Mr. Mate: "This isn't some picnic!"
Mr. Mate: "Let's keep going..."
Mr. Mate: "Ok, you ready?"
Mejson: "Right behind you..."
Mr. Mate: "Targets neutralized"
Mejson: "Eee... what?"
Mr. Mate: "Sorry, habit from my previous job"
Mejson: "Was that backflip really necessary?"
Mr. Mate: "Of course! It was extremely necessary!"
Mejson: "Maybe not extremely, but… how are we gonna get there?"
Mr. Mate: "Don't worry, I have an idea"

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Posted by Mejson - October 27th, 2021


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Welcome everyone!


First things:

I wanted to ask @Animetion24. Did you read in the previous Poster or PM that I was asking you regarding the text to the narrator? I asks again because I didn't get an answer if it's okay for you to write something like this.


Going back to the current Poster:

With my brother (@MariogD) we came to the conclusion that it would be most convenient and efficient to ask you to record the voices of the character (VA) after each part (here: Part I). Certainly, such a solution ensures order and guarantees division into smaller parts (preventing the necessity to record many dialogues at once).


The division of dialogues:

@Cyberdevil - MariogD (30)

@Cyberdevil - Candy (2)

@Cyberdevil - Diablo (3)

@Animetion24 - Delsin (22)

@ChordC - Mr. Mate (11)

@SayMeBott - Bott* (6)

@Plasmarift - Mejson (33)

@Plasmarift - Bill (38)


*numbers in parentheses - this is the number of sentences for a specific hero.


I will send files (scripts) and additional information (materials) to you today on PM (private message). I can't wait to see the results. :D Thank you in advance for your help!


What do you think about it, @Cyberdevil@Animetion24@ChordC@MariogD@SayMeBott?


Regards,

Mejson


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Posted by Mejson - October 17th, 2021


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Welcome everyone!


It's been 12 days since the last Poster. It's been quite a long time, but I had a lot of work to do (office) and the birthday party... and aftermath. It's been 35 years now. Planning Scene 7 took me 3 days, so it's was a little longer... So many dialogues in this scene, almost like a Netflix movie. xD


First, clarify a few things...

In Reduce 3 there will be improved time saving - timeline. Due to the fact that 6 minutes for 6 scenes may not be enough (damn long scenes XD). We need these 4 minutes, which are in: Main Menu, Subtitle, Credits and similar. Solution: stop the timeline and use ActionScript 3.0 to navigate objects in MovieClips (for Main Menu, Subtitle, Credits).


As you have noticed, Reduce 3 will be divided into: Part I, Part II and Part III. And each part will contain 6 long scenes, 18 scenes in total, thus 30 minutes of the movie.


I regret to inform you @Cyberdevil that we are unable to put the character - Cyber in Reduce 3... due to the storyline. However, many characters are killed in Reduce 4, and Cyber will appear and survive, so it won't be bad :) Hope you're not angry.


How should the nickname - Bott* be read? I think <Bot>. What do you think of this, @SayMeBott?


Thank you @ChordC for your help with dialogues!

What do you think about it, @Cyberdevil@Animetion24@ChordC@MariogD@SayMeBott?


Regards,

Mejson


Scene 7 - Illness

Inscription (on black background):

Episode 7
Day 30
(~16 hours later)
7:16 AM


Action:

1. The base elements, such as fences, beds and other elements, were built within a few hours. Under a dome made of plant pot leaves, there are primitive beds and primitive rescue equipment. Camera zoom in. Bill is lying on one of the beds, with Bott* crouched right behind him (front body). Bill has an exposed cage with a bandage on the wound site and some green healing goo.

2. Suddenly, Bill starts squirming and Bott* yells: "Stop moving!". Bill responds weakly: "Screw you!". Bott* raises his eyebrows and narrows his eyes a little, concerned: "The more you squirm, the worse it gets!". Bill replies indifferently: "I'm fine", and then adds: "I just need some rest... Then I'll be good".

3. Bott* smiles fake and replies sarcastically: "Yeah, sure..." or "Tsaa, sure...". Bill doesn't understand that this is sarcasm and starts to stand up. Bott* gently presses him against the bed and shouts: "Are you insane? Stay in bed!". To this Bill reacts impatiently: "Don't tell me what to do!". Bott* looks angry for a moment. Bill calms down, looks away, and doesn't speak anymore.

4. Camera a little zoom out. Mejson walks over from left and stops right next to him and jokingly says: "Still stubborn as usual, huh?". Bott* straightens up and looks at Mejson and smiles sadly. Bill glances at both of them and says quietly to himself: "Assholes...". Suddenly Mejson turns around and says seriously looking at Bott*: "Come here for a sec".

5. Mejson goes to the left and Bott* gets up and follows him. The camera follows them. The heroes walk left in silence for a while, and then Mejson stops (between the firecamp and the previous place). He turns to Bott* and asks seriously, looking into his eyes: "How’s Bill?". Bott* looks sadly at the ground and then at Mejson and says sadly: "He’s seen better days...".

6. Mejson makes a sad face and also look down. Suddenly, MariogD comes up from the right side and asks, stopping near Bott*: "You got some news?". Mejson doesn't react. Camera zoom in (Bott* and MariogD). Bott* turns his face towards MariogD and says: "Bad news... Bill...". MariogD is shocked (as usual): "What about him?" and adds: "He doesn't look so bad...".

7. Bott* replies seriously: "Are you sure about that?". MariogD reacts not sure: "Well...". Camera zoom out. Unexpectedly, standing Mr. Mate, who asks: "What are you discussing?". Everyone else instinctively shudders and looks at Mr. Mate. MariogD responds: "Where’d you come from?!". Mr. Mate shrugs. The moment of silence is interrupted by Mejson: "Bill's sickness is progressing".

8. Mr. Mate turns to Mejson and says sadly: "I see...". Mr. Mate looks down (at the ground) and scratches his head, straightens up and asks: "When are we heading out?". Everyone looks at him in surprise and then squint one's eyes. MariogD reacts angrily: "What are you talking about?!". Mr. Mate is surprised by MariogD's reaction and says in his defense: "Well, since Bill’s condition is...".

9. Mejson says firmly but calmly: "Nobody gets left behind". Mr. Mate responds: "I didn't mean..." and then adds: "I thought since... he’s in such a bad shape... so...". Mejson interrupts him: "Yeah, we get it". Surprisingly, MariogD turns his head and asks Bott*: "What should we do with him?".

10. Bott* starts to reply: "Well...", but Mr. Mate suddenly asks out of curiosity: "How many men have you lost?". MariogD and Bott* look at him in shock. Mejson freezes for a moment, then turns and walks off to the left (off the screen). The others watch Mejson until he was walk away. MariogD yells at Mr. Mate: "The fuck is wrong with you?!".

11. Mr. Mate is surprised: "What did I do?". MariogD lowers his head, closes his eyes and puts his hand to his face. Then he <sighs> and says calmly: "That’s a touchy subject...". Mr. Mate looks down at the ground. Bott* watched the whole situation silently. The camera moves to the left. Mejson sits on a pile of stones (building materials, with a resource yard nearby and a workbench) and scrape stick with angrily (carelessly) using his knife.

12. Suddenly he cuts himself with a knife. Mejson shudders and curses: "Goddammit!". He gets up and drops the knife, which stick in to the floor. He shakes his cut hand. Suddenly you hear a foreign voice: <laughter>, followed by: "Really?! What an amateur!". Mejson shudders, jumps off the stones then grabs the knife and waves it from side to side looking around and yells: "Who's there? Show yourself!".

13. Camera zoom in. Silence. Mejson calms down. He looks left - no one. He looks to the right - Steve is standing close to him, who says smiling: "Over here old friend...". Mejson shudders and screams: <gasp> "Steve...". Steve leans back, puts his hands on his hips and <laughs>. Mejson is clearly shocked / scared. Mejson says: "But... But... you are dead...".

14. Steve straightens up (returns to his normal position) and replies: "So what?". Then adds maliciously smiling: "Aren't you glad to see me?". Camera zoom in. Mejson leans forward, covers his face with his hands and says to himself, "No! It’s impossible... This isn’t happening!". Silence. Mejson straightens up and lowers his hands. Nobody is standing in front of Mejson.

15. Mejson calms down. Camera zoom out. Steve stands behind Mejson, leans down and says in his ear: "I’m always here... friend..." then smiles. Mejson shudders and turns away, then, already irritated with a firm voice, says: "What do you want from me?!". Steve straightens up and says seriously: "Calm down" then adds: "I'm here for you". Mejson reacts calmly scratching his head: "Really?". Steve nods.

16. Suddenly the camera moves a little to the right. MariogD goes on the left side, he comes closer to Mejson. He stands behind him, squint one's eyes and asks suspiciously: "Who are you talking to?". Mejson shudders and turns to MariogD and says: "What? Nobody...". Then he turns his head to the left for a moment. There is nobody there.

17. MariogD changes his expression to a concerned one and asks: "Are you okay?". Mejson blinks twice quickly and replies: "Yeah, I'm okay". MariogD raises his eyebrows and replies (doesn't believe): "Riiight...". And then, seriously, MariogD informs Mejson: "Come on! You need to hear this". They both go together. The camera moves to the right (to the previous location).

18. Delsin is sitting on the supply crate a little deeper to the background (he doesn't say anything and just watches). Mr. Mate is sitting on the stone (is used to sit close to the fire). He's back side to the campfire. Mr. Mate finishes the sentence: "...and that will actually help him?". Bott* rests against the side of the hospital dome.

19. Bott* wonders - he has a hand to his chin, then lowers his hand and look at Mr. Mate and replies: "It's a unique poison, but..." and then adds: "This'll have to do". Mr. Mate nods. From the right side MariogD and Mejson is coming. Mr. Mate and Bott* look at them. MariogD stops next to Bott* and turns to face everyone.

20. Mejson stops a bit back next to Mr. Mate. MariogD says: "Okay, everyone’s here", then he turns his head towards the Bott* and says: "Can you say that again, Bott*?". Bott* turns his head towards MariogD and replies: "Of course". Then he looks at Mejson and says: "Maybe we can save Bill". Mejson raises his eyebrows and says optimistically: "That's great news!". 

21. Bott* continues: "Yes, but... it won't be easy". Mejson grows serious. Bott* continues: "In addition to some ingredients here, I need some other things to produce an antidote". Mejson asks: "What things?". Bott* says: "Clean water, priority number one". Mejson puts his hand to his chin and says as if to himself: "Right...".

22. Suddenly, Delsin (everyone is looking at him) says: "There's water from condensation near our old camp" and continues as if putting his hand to his chin and look down: "The door probably has some leaks to it". Mejson looks at Bott* and asks: "What else?". Bott* says: "A healing herb like Dandelion, St. John's Wort, Aloe...".

23. Delsin interrupts him: "Aloe... Ah!" And adds, unfolding the map and looking at it: "Yes, that's right. I saw one in a pot while scouting". Delsin hides the map. Mejson says: "Excellent!". Bott* says looking down at the ground: "Yes, but..." then looks at Mejson sadly and continues: "Bill doesn't have long".

24. Then MariogD says: "We shoud split up to get what we need fast". Suddenly Mr. Mate says: "I can go solo". Mejson looks at him and flatly denies: "No way, this place is too dangerous. No one goes alone". MariogD scratches his head, squint one's eyes and says without looking at anyone: "With Bott* looking after Bill, who's going to protect the base?".

25. Everyone looks at MariogD and then down to the ground or ahead, wondering. Mejson squint one's eyes. Camera zoom in (on Mejson's face). The background changes to black, and Mejson's head (front) has glow effect (or something like that - I will experiment on the effects, for the sake of simplicity I will call (this moment) - mind moment). Mejson thinks (sound effect of "Well". For simplicity - instead of "says" it "thinks"): "What to do?". Suddenly, Steve (front face) appears on the left behind Mejson's head (movement and transparency), saying: "You called?".

26. Then he smiles and then disappears (the transparency effect). Mejson raises his eyebrows and looks straight ahead (his pupils narrow in surprise). Mejson opens his mouth because he is about to say something, but Steve appears from the right side (face side) and cuts him off: "Shhh, don't say a thing" and adds: "I hear your thoughts". Mejson blinks as his eyes wander to Steve.

27. Mejson squint one's eyes a little, he lowers one eyebrow (the other is still up) and thinks: "Okaaay...". Mejson's expression returns to normal. Mejson thinks: "What are we supposed to do?". Steve replies: "Isn't it obvious?". And then disappears. Mejson raises his eyebrows and thinks: "Hm?". Steve appears on the left side (face side), squint one's eyes a little, and says: "That boy, Candy...".

28. Mejson lowers his eyebrows and thinks: "What about him?". Steve has a serious look on his face and says: "He'll stay and watch over the base". Mejson raises his eyebrows in surprise: "Are you serious?! He can't even fight!". Steve squint one's eyes a little and says: "Then why don't you teach him?".

29. Mejson raises his eyebrows even more, and his eyes move left and then right at the bottom edge of his eye sockets, and at the same time he thinks: "He... He is so helpless and young". Steve disappears. Mejson looks to the left. Steve appears on the right (face side), raises an eyebrow, and says: "None of that will change until you let him grow up".

30. Mejson looks at him, raises his eyebrows, squint one's eyes, then looks down and thinks: "Yes, I know... I understand". Suddenly is hearing dimly MariogD: "Mejson! Can you hear me?!". Mejson's expression returns to normal, he stares straight ahead. Steve disappears. Camera zoom out. The background is changes to normal.

31. Everyone is looking at Mejson, and in front of him is standing an irritated MariogD. Mejson says: "What?". And MariogD replies: "I just asked you if you had any ideas". Mejson looks at him seriously and says: "Yes... Candy and his pet will keep an eye on the base". MariogD tilt his back in shock: "Whaaat?! You must be joking!". Others are also shocked.

32. Bott* suddenly says: "Not a problem. Shevy can protect us!" then smiles. Nobody reacts to the words of Bott*. Mejson squint one's eyes and replies: "Well... why not?". MariogD straightens up, waves his arms and says irritated: "Why not?!... He can't even fight!". Mejson looks firmly and says: "That's why I will teach him!".

33. Then puts his hands on his hips and says: "It's been decided!". MariogD looks angry at Mejson, then turns to the right and says as he leaves: "Do whatever you want...". And then he adds to himself: "Total stupidity...". Mejson lowers his hands and says aloud: "We're leaving in fifteen minutes!". Then turns and goes to the left. Delsin asks him: "Where are you going?". Mejson look at Delsin when walks and replies: "I'm going to talk with Candy". Blackout.


Light effect:

Yellow (morning).


Dialogues:

Bott*: "Stop moving!"
Bill: "Screw you!"
Bott*: "The more you squirm, the worse it gets!"
Bill: "I'm fine"
Bill: "I just need some rest... Then I'll be good"
Bott*: "Yeah, sure..." or "Tsaa, sure..."
Bott*: "Are you insane? Stay in bed!"
Bill: "Don't tell me what to do!"
Mejson: "Still stubborn as usual, huh?"
Bill: "Assholes..."
Mejson: "Come here for a sec"
Mejson: "How’s Bill?"
Bott*: "He’s seen better days..."
MariogD: "You got some news?"
Bott*: "Bad news... Bill..."
MariogD: "What about him?"
MariogD: "He doesn't look so bad..."
Bott*: "Are you sure about that?"
MariogD: "Well..."
Mr. Mate: "What are you discussing?"
MariogD: "Where’d you come from?!"
Mejson: "Bill's sickness is progressing"
Mr. Mate: "I see..."
Mr. Mate: "When are we heading out?"
MariogD: "What are you talking about?!"
Mr. Mate: "Well, since Bill’s condition is..."
Mejson: "Nobody gets left behind"
Mr. Mate: "I didn't mean..."
Mr. Mate: "I thought since... he’s in such a bad shape... so..."
Mejson: "Yeah, we get it"
MariogD: "What should we do with him?"
Bott*: "Well..."
Mr. Mate: "How many men have you lost?"
MariogD: "The fuck is wrong with you?!"
Mr. Mate: "What did I do?"
MariogD: <sighs>
MariogD: "That’s a touchy subject..."
Mejson: "Goddammit!"
Steve: <laughter>
Steve: "Really?! What an amateur!"
Mejson: "Who's there? Show yourself!"
Steve: "Over here old friend..."
Mejson: <gasp>
Mejson: "Steve..."
Steve: <laughs>
Mejson: "But... But... you are dead..."
Steve: "So what?"
Steve: "Aren't you glad to see me?"
Mejson: "No! It’s impossible... This isn’t happening!"
Steve: "I’m always here... friend..."
Mejson: "What do you want from me?!"
Steve: "Calm down"
Steve: "I'm here for you"
Mejson: "Really?"
MariogD: "Who are you talking to?"
Mejson: "What? Nobody..."
MariogD: "Are you okay?"
Mejson: "Yeah, I'm okay"
MariogD: "Riiight..."
MariogD: "Come on! You need to hear this"
Mr. Mate: "...and that will actually help him?"
Bott*: "It's a unique poison, but..."
Bott*: "This'll have to do"
MariogD: "Okay, everyone’s here"
MariogD: "Can you say that again, Bott*?"
Bott*: "Of course"
Bott*: "Maybe we can save Bill"
Mejson: "That's great news!"
Bott*: "Yes, but... it won't be easy"
Bott*: "In addition to some ingredients here, I need some other things to produce an antidote"
Mejson: "What things?"
Bott*: "Clean water, priority number one"
Mejson: "Right..."
Delsin: "There's water from condensation near our old camp"
Delsin: "The door probably has some leaks to it"
Mejson: "What else?"
Bott*: "A healing herb like Dandelion, St. John's Wort, Aloe..."
Delsin: "Aloe... Ah!"
Delsin: "Yes, that's right. I saw one in a pot while scouting"
Mejson: "Excellent!"
Bott*: "Yes, but..."
Bott*: "Bill doesn't have long"
MariogD: "We shoud split up to get what we need fast"
Mr. Mate: "I can go solo"
Mejson: "No way, this place is too dangerous. No one goes alone"
MariogD: "With Bott* looking after Bill, who's going to protect the base?"
Mejson: "What to do?"
Steve: "You called?"
Steve: "Shhh, don't say a thing"
Steve: "I hear your thoughts"
Mejson: "Okaaay..."
Mejson: "What are we supposed to do?"
Steve: "Isn't it obvious?"
Mejson: "Hm?"
Steve: "That boy, Candy..."
Mejson: "What about him?"
Steve: "He'll stay and watch over the base"
Mejson: "Are you serious?! He can't even fight!"
Steve: "Then why don't you teach him?"
Mejson: "He... He is so helpless and young"
Steve: "None of that will change until you let him grow up"
Mejson: "Yes, I know... I understand"
MariogD: "Mejson! Can you hear me?!"
Mejson: "What?"
MariogD: "I just asked you if you had any ideas"
Mejson: "Yes... Candy and his pet will keep an eye on the base"
MariogD: "Whaaat?! You must be joking!"
Bott*: "Not a problem. Shevy can protect us!"
Mejson: "Well... why not?"
MariogD: "Why not?!... He can't even fight!"
Mejson: "That's why I will teach him!"
Mejson: "It's been decided!"
MariogD: "Do whatever you want..."
MariogD: "Total stupidity..."
Mejson: "We're leaving in fifteen minutes!"
Delsin: "Where are you going?"
Mejson: "I'm going to talk with Candy"

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Posted by Mejson - October 5th, 2021


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Welcome everyone!


Recently I had a lot of activities and I'm also trying to find time to ride a bike: P Well, to the point... it's time for another Poster! <fanfares> This is quite an important scene because two new characters appear in it! :)


Thank you @ChordC for your help with dialogues!


What do you think about it, @Cyberdevil@Animetion24@ChordC@MariogD@SayMeBott?


Regards,

Mejson


Scene 6 - Salvation

Inscription (on black background):

Episode 6
Day 29
(~3 hours later)
3:04 PM


Action:

1. The camera shows the left side of the plant pot (as the previous scene ended), but instead of Bill, a spider cocoon is leaning against the pot. And another one is on the ground a little to the left. Then Bill and Mejson come from the right (camera zoom on heroes). They are carrying the third cocoon. Bill walks backwards on the left.

2. Bill says first: "This is heavy". Mejson scolds him - he has a serious face and is in a bad mood (Bill is sloppy): "Watch out!". Bill looks at him and squint one's eyes, but he's afraid to swear and just says (as if to himself) without looking Mejson in the eye: "Okay, okay...". The heroes walk up and put a cocoon between the other two.

3. Mejson says prophylactically: "Careful!". Bill shrugs (he has the same expression) and then crosses him arms over his chest. Mejson squint one's eyes and looks around at the cocoons then approaches the cocoon leaning against the plant pot. Mejson pulls out a knife (held on his forearm) with the intention of cutting the cocoon.

4. Bill smirks spitefully (to himself). Mejson already holding the knife up to cut when he hears Bill's sarcastic voice: "Careful...". Mejson stops motionless for a moment, raising his eyebrow for a moment, and then carefully cuts the cocoon. Then he hides the knife, and then with both hands he opens the cut edges of the cocoon (the cut edges of the cocoon are shown).

5. Then Mejson straightens up and puts his hand to his chin (ponders), then looks at the contents of the cocoon (from top to bottom, then up). Then he says as if to himself: "I think that's the agent". Bill approaches with interest (his expression is cheerful). He stands behind Mejson and looks, then says, "Yes, that's him".

6. Suddenly, the new hero half leaps out of the cocoon (grabs his hands on his sides). Mejson and Bill react by natural flinch in surprise (they have shocked faces) and then watch in amazement. Mr. Mate takes a <deep breath> and then breathes in with his mouth open for a moment and blinks quickly. His eyes are narrowed and motionless.

7. After a while he curses: "Holy shit!" and adds: "EEKKK! That’s gross!". Then he calms down and looks at Mejson. Mejson sees that he have Mr. Mate's attention, so he asks: "What happened?". Mr. Mate replies, still irritated: "That asshole sent a dozen mercenaries to catch one guy!".

8. Then he continues: "I took out most of them before I was cornered". Bill says interested: "Not too shabby!" Mejson ignores Bill's words and continues: "How did you end up in that coffin?".

9. Mr. Mate is pissing off again: "It’s that fucking spider! The one he experimented on!". Mejson looks sad and looks down, then says sadly: "Yeah. We lost a good man to that abomination". Mr. Mate calms down and says: "My condolences". After a moment of silence, Mr. Mate asks: "Now, can you get this thing off of me?". Mejson cheer up and says: "Of course!".

10. Mejson helps Mr. Mate out of the cocoon. Mr. Mate grabs Mejson's hand and gets him out. Mr. Mate says: "Much appreciated". Then Mejson turns to Bill and says calmly: "Get him something to eat". Bill says indifferently: "Alright, come here". Bill goes to the left and is followed by Mr. Mate. Mejson calmly watches them both disappear behind the left edge of the screen.

11. Mejson approaches the second cocoon and crouches. While cutting the cocoon, Mejson says to himself: "Now who do we have here?". Mejson examines the contents of the cocoon and then says: "Are you alive?". Mejson make sad face. Next Mejson squint one's eyes and says to himself: "What might this be?". Then he bends over and pulls out a military shovel.

12. Suddenly, a hand from inside the cocoon grips the shovel tightly and Mejson hear a tired voice (of the hero from inside): "What are you doing with my Shevy?". Mejson shudders in surprise, releases the shovel and responds: "Whaaat?". Bott* sits down helped himself with the shovel. He looks quite weak (he's exhausted).

13. After a while, Bott* looks at the shovel and says: "Are you okay my darling?". He's smiling. Mejson raises his eyebrows, squint one's eyes and asks with worring: "Are you okay?". Bott* looks at Mejson and replies: "Yeah. Just need to catch my breath". Mejson responds: "Okaaay". Next Mejson reaches out to him and helps him stand up.

14. Then Bott* looks down at the spade, strokes it and says: "Shh, all is well my dear. Everything will be just fine". Mejson scratches his head and asks anxiously: "Are you sure... you're okay?". Bott* looks at Mejson suspiciously, squint one's eyes and asks: "Yea… why’d you ask?". Mejson looks down at the ground lowering his hand and says: "No reason".

15. The camera moves to the right (to the other side of the plant pot). There are only single fragments left of the spider's body (they had been used well). Right next to it (in front of the body) there is a small fire. And in front of the fire (on the right) there are spider fangs on a small leaf. And right next to it there is a small wooden mortar.

16. MariogD is kneeling in front of this (on one knee). He takes out an arrow and dips it in a mortar. Then he pulls it out and looks at it (the tip is purple). MariogD watches the poison drop (also purple) runs down over arrow, then smiles ominously and says, "It will be so tasty!". Right next to it (on the bow stand) there is a new (fancy) MariogD bow.

17. The camera go up (to the leaf). Delsin is standing on it, holding his big gun (spear gun). He looks around (because he keeps order) - he looks up and to the sides. After a while, the camera go to the starting location (this scene). There is no one for a moment (just a cocoon). Then Mejson comes from the left side to the cocoon.

18. He is crouching beside it. He cuts it carefully, he's excited. Mejson opens the cocoon and looks inside. Next he shudders and swears in disgust: "What the fuck?!". Mejson closes his eye for a moment and calms down. With a sad voice he says to herself: "This one wasn't so lucky...". Mejson puts his hand on the cocoon, lowering his head (bends a little) and closing his eye then he adds: "Rest in peace".

19. The camera goes to the left. There is a fire on which a spider's leg is baked. On the right, Mr. Mate is sitting with his back against the stone. He is eagerly eating a piece of meat. Bill is sitting on the rock on the left. He is smoking a cigar (as is his habit). In front of the fire, there is Bott* on the bed. He is asleep, and he is holding his shovel in his hands.

20. Suddenly he says in his sleep: "My beloved Shevy". Suddenly Bill squint one's eyes, then grabs his head with both hands. He releases the cigar from his mouth. A moment later he gets up and takes a few steps to the left, then faints. Mr. Mate asks in surprise: "Hey, you alright?".

21. The camera goes to the left. The ant is standing. By default, it reins are attached to a wooden pole that is stuck into the ground nearby. Started dialogue from other heroes in off-screen. Candy is crouched on one knee with an open (primitive) bag made of leaves in front of him. Candy looks around (from side to side and backwards).

22. He then reaches for the object next to his leg (the object was being hided by Candy). He gently picks up the object and watches it for a moment and smiles. It's a spider's egg. Then he puts it in the bag and closes the bag. Blackout.


Light effect:

Normal (midday).


Dialogues:

Bill: "This is heavy"
Mejson: "Watch out!"
Bill: "Okay, okay..."
Mejson: "Careful!"
Bill: "Careful..."
Mejson: "I think that's the agent"
Bill: "Yes, that's him"
Mr. Mate: <deep breath>
Mr. Mate: "Holy shit!"
Mr. Mate: "EEKKK! That’s gross!"
Mejson: "What happened?"
Mr. Mate: "That asshole sent a dozen mercenaries to catch one guy!"
Mr. Mate: "I took out most of them before I was cornered"
Bill: "Not too shabby!"
Mejson: "How did you end up in that coffin?"
Mr. Mate: "It’s that fucking spider! The one he experimented on!"
Mejson: "Yeah. We lost a good man to that abomination"
Mr. Mate: "My condolences"
Mr. Mate: "Now, can you get this thing off of me?"
Mejson: "Of course!"
Mr. Mate: "Much appreciated"
Mejson: "Get him something to eat"
Bill: "Alright, come here"
Mejson: "Now who do we have here?"
Mejson: "Are you alive?"
Mejson: "What might this be?"
Bott*: "What are you doing with my Shevy?"
Mejson: "Whaaat?"
Bott*: "Are you okay my darling?"
Mejson: "Are you okay?"
Bott*: "Yeah. Just need to catch my breath"
Mejson: "Okaaay"
Bott*: "Shh, all is well my dear. Everything will be just fine"
Mejson: "Are you sure... you're okay?"
Bott*: "Yea… why’d you ask?"
Mejson: "No reason"
MariogD: "It will be so tasty!"
Mejson: "What the fuck?!"
Mejson: "This one wasn't so lucky..."
Mejson: "Rest in peace"
Bott*: "My beloved Shevy"
Mr. Mate: "Hey, you alright?"


Dialogue (part with Candy) when the campfire (other heroes) is off-screen:

Mejson: "What happened?"
Mr. Mate: "I don't know... he just... collapsed"
Mejson: "Bill, what's going on?"
Mejson: "Bill?!"
MariogD: "What are you doing?"
MariogD: "Why is he on the ground?"
Mejson: "I don't know!"
MariogD: "Bill, can you hear me?!"
MariogD: "What's wrong with you?!"
MariogD: "Say something!"

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Posted by Mejson - September 26th, 2021


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Welcome everyone!


It's been quite a few days since the last Poster. Well, mainly why that I felt bad (health problems). I feel better already. Additionally, this scene (Scene 5) is quite big because it's quite long...


Thank you @ChordC for your help!


What do you think about it, @Cyberdevil@Animetion24@ChordC@MariogD@SayMeBott?


Regards,

Mejson


Scene 5 - Macabre

Inscription (on black background):

Episode 5
Day 29
(~5 hours later)
12:09 AM


Action:

1. The camera shows the moving heroes (from the left side of the entire area, then moves to the right). At the back of the march there is an ant on which they are sitting: Diablo on ant abdomen (looks closely), Mejson is asleep (he has a restless sleep and suddenly wakes up - he looks anxious), Candy holds the reins and looks ahead.

2. The said camera moves to the right. Delsin goes first, then MariogD (next to Delsin), followed by Bill. Camera zoom in on MariogD and Delsin. They're in the middle of a conversation (though it's more of bragging). MariogD proudly says: "I'm the fastest!" and continues, "I don't just shoot arrows..."

3. "I make it rain with arrows!" (MariogD means he shoots so fast his arrows look like a rain of arrows). Then he smiles. Delsin looks at him amused: "That's great and all, but..." (pauses), then adds: "That creepy-crawly's too dense to get your point across". Then he smile maliciously at MariogD. MariogD squint one's eyes, but quickly counters: "At least it doesn't take me all day to reload!".

4. Then he smile maliciously. Delsin looks up at him in surprise (shocked), then quickly replies: "Here we are!" and stops and points with his hand. The camera goes to the right (it passes the pot with the plant and the leaf on which you can get to the pot). You can see a wooden (old / moldy) wall (it's a large cabinet lying on the ground).

5. The camera moves up pretty quickly (along the wall). Then it stops at the top (on corner) of the cabinet. After a while, the camera goes back down to the flowerpot with MariogD (on a leaf). He is standing at the edge of a leaf holding a special (grappling arrow) arrow with rope that hangs down.

6. MariogD looks down happily and says, "Hold on, I can take care of this!". And then he looks seriously at his target, aims and shoots. The camera follows the arrow. The arrow flies and then lands on up cabinet. Unfortunately, it nudge the spider's web attached to the cabinet (the spider's thread is shaking).

7. Then it is jerked (possibly by MariogD), the arrow is blocks on cabinet's edge (with specific sound). The camera goes down to the heroes, they standing next to the rope. Bill approaches the rope with the intention of climbing first. On the left, however, he is overtaken by Diablo (he pushes him a bit).

8. Diablo is confident (his eyelids are slightly lowered). Bill is surprised for a moment and curse: "The fuck?!" and then squint one's eyes and says: "Yeah, you needed the head start anyways!" Diablo ignores these words and just smile (to himself). He's starting to climb. The camera switches to MariogD (he's standing in the same place).

9. He looks down (watched the situation) smiling for a moment. Then he looks up slowly, and after a while he squint one's eyes and says slow: "Holy shit....". Then he shudders with horror (he saw something terrible). After a while he regains his composure and realizes that the spider is going for Diablo (the rope is shaking and tempting the spider).

10. MariogD crouches down and screams down: "Look out!". Camera switches to Diablo. He's already at a certain height (on the rope). After a while, he stops and looks up. His expression changes dramatically. He starts descending the rope faster that he was climbing. The camera goes to Bill, he standing at the bottom.

11. He's turned towards MariogD and reacts loudly: "Huuuh?!". After that he looks up (at Diablo, who is still on the rope - quite high up) and reacts surprised: "Shiiit!". He then turns left and lunges (like a soccer goalie). He disappears behind the left edge of the screen. Diablo flies from above (rope in hand) and hits the floor with <groans upon impact>. 

12. After a while a large spider falls on him (a rope is tangled in one of the spider's legs - the spider broke the rope), crushes him to the floor, and a moment later it sticks its poison teeth into Diablo's body (torso). (This is not an ordinary spider found in this climate). Diablo immediately convulses (his body is shaking), and after a while white foam comes out of his mouth. 

13. In the next moment Diablo is already dead (the last time he has impulsively muscle contractions). The camera quickly switches to MariogD, who screams: "Nooo!!!" and then furiously pulls out an arrow and shoots. The camera follows the arrow that sticks into the spider. Then two more arrows, which also do not make much impression on the spider.

14. From afar (above), MariogD's disappointment can be heard: "Fuck! It’s not working!". Then the arrow flies from the left side and hits the spider in one of the larger eyes (the eye bursts and blood spurts out). The spider shudders and makes a hissing noise (pain). The camera moves quickly to the left (a little).

15. Bill is standing (with the bow he just fired) smiling (pleased with himself). However, his joy is short-lived. The spider jumps on Bill (presses the hero to the ground), Bill curses: "Fuck off!". The only thing he managed to do was cover himself with an arch. Then he says firmly: "I'm ready this time, asshole!".

16. (Bill has a reinforced bow, so that it does not break - he learns from his mistakes). Suddenly a bullet from the Spear Gun (fired by Delsin) flies and hits the spider in the head. The spider shudders and makes a roar noise of dead. Bill is relieved. He takes a <deep breath>. Then it quickly slides down and freezes motionless. Suddenly, MariogD jumps from above with a spear in his hand (he has a bow on his back or he has left it).

17. The hero land on the spider with a crouch (furiously), then sticks a short spear (into the spider's body) and shouts: "Die!". Bill is calmed. He's squint one's eyes. Then he says in an irritated voice, "It's dead already...". MariogD looks at him in surprise. Bill continues looking down at his body, squirming: "Help out already, idiot!".

18. MariogD squint one's eyes and says concerned: "Don't move or you'll hurt yourself". The camera go to the left and shows a crouched Delsin. Mejson is running by him (he has a worried face). Delsin puts the ammo into the gun and reloads, then stands up and runs to the right as well. The camera follows him. Mejson and MariogD straighten up because they were lifting a heavy spider. 

19. Bill is crouched on one knee and stands up. MariogD looks at him thoughtfully and asks: "You alright?". Bill replies maliciously: "Of course I'm alright", then turns left and walks away. Mejson and Delsin watch it without saying a word. Mejson turns to the right and walks. MariogD does the same. Mejson walks over to Diablo's body and crouches down close to it. MariogD stops after him. Mejson in a sad voice says: “We lost another one…”. MariogD says: "He was a good man". 

20. Mejson goes on to say: “I never knew the guy, but still…”. MariogD puts a hand on his shoulder and replies: "Don't blame yourself...". Mejson gets up and turns to MariogD and replies: "At least he's with his brother now...". MariogD says: "Yea, Jimmy and Diablo are in a better place now..." and looks at him sadly. The camera go to the leaf (where MariogD stood before). Delsin is standing on it, squinting one's eyes, and after a while he says: "Something's moving over there!" (to himself). 

21. After a while, looking down (to MariogD and Mejson), he says: "Do you see that, guys?”. The camera goes left to Bill (he's alone). He's leaning against the left side of the pot. After a while he squint one's eyes, and then pulls back a piece of his clothing / armor. There is a scratch there. Bill looks worried and say: "Fuck...". Then he looks at the viewer. Blackout.


Light effect:

Normal (midday).


Dialogues:

MariogD: "I'm the fastest!"
MariogD: "I don't just shoot arrows..."
MariogD: "I make it rain with arrows!"
Delsin: "That's great and all, but..."
Delsin: "That creepy-crawly's too dense to get your point across"
MariogD: "At least it doesn't take me all day to reload!"
Delsin: "Here we are!"
MariogD: "Hold on, I can take care of this!"
Bill: "The fuck?!"
Bill: "Yeah, you needed the head start anyways!"
MariogD: "Holy shit...."
MariogD: "Look out!"
Bill: "Huuuh?!"
Bill: "Shiiit!"
Diablo: <groans upon impact>
MariogD: "Nooo!!!"
MariogD: "Fuck! It’s not working!"
Bill: "Fuck off!"
Bill: "I'm ready this time, asshole!"
Bill: <Deep breath>
MariogD: "Die!"
Bill: "It's dead already..."
Bill: "Help out already, idiot!"
MariogD: "Don't move or you'll hurt yourself"
MariogD: "You alright?"
Bill: "Of course I'm alright"
Mejson: "We lost another one…"
MariogD: "He was a good man"
Mejson: "I never knew the guy, but still…"
MariogD: "Don't blame yourself..."
Mejson: "At least he's with his brother now..."
MariogD: "Yea, Jimmy and Diablo are in a better place now..."
Delsin: "Something's moving over there!"
Delsin: "Do you see that, guys?"
Bill: "Fuck..."

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Posted by Mejson - September 17th, 2021


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Welcome everyone!


A few days and another Poster! It took a while, but it's here! :P


We will be adding a spider's web to the background everywhere. Such an ornament and the keynote of Reduce 3!


What do you think about it, @Cyberdevil@Animetion24@ChordC@MariogD@SayMeBott?


Regards,

Mejson


Scene 4 - Trinity

Inscription (on black background):

Episode 4
Day 29
(~14 hours later)
7:12 AM


Action:

1. Bill, Delsin and MariogD stand slightly out of breath and sweaty, having just killed two earwigs. Behind the characters (and earwigs) you can see old dirty rubber boots - the right side (fingers) is a habitat of earwigs, their beginning was in 'Scene 2' (left side (heel) from which the earwig jumped down to Bill).

2. Here is also some dry dirt from boots (as in 'Scene 2'). The camera zooms in on Delsin, who approaches the head of a larger earwigs (the abdomen of this earwigs is beyond the left edge of the screen), and then pulls the projectile out with a specific force (it jerks a little because the bullet is deeply stuck).

3. He rests one leg on the ground and rests the other on the insect with all his strength. The spear (ammo) pops out of the insect's body spurting blood, Delsin lands on the ground (with his missile) and curses to himself with discontent: “Goddamn...” Delsin is splashed with this insect's blood.

4. He stands up, cleans his face and says in disgust (bug blood is on him): "Just what I need". The camera go to the right and shows MariogD breathing with his mouth open for a while. Suddenly the smaller earwig is moving (muscle spasm anfter death). MariogD (reflexively / automatically) draws (quickly) an arrow from his quiver and shoots the insect.

5. Bill comes up on the right (indifferent and squint one's eyes), goes to MariogD and asks, "The Hell are you doing?!", And after a while, adds, "It's dead already!". MariogD, a little embarrassed, scratches his head and replies: "It moved!" (passive-agressive). Bill shrugs.

6. Bill turns to the right, starts walking and says after a deep sigh: "Dumbass..." (quiet, not exacly to MariogD but MariogD heard that) and add: "We're moving, people!” (he's bored). MariogD squint one's eyes (for a moment) and starts walking. Camera go to left on Delsin, he writes something down in its notes (as before), hides it after a while.

7. Delsin runs up / catches up next to MariogD (on the right). Camera zooms in on both. MariogD looks at Delsin and jokes: "That's not quite your color". Then he smiles maliciously. Delsin looks at him, then says, "You don't say". And then he looks straight ahead (indifferent and squint one's eyes).

8. The zoom camera out and three cockroaches jump from the old yellow raincoat (probably the presence of the heroes scared them off). One runs to the right and two to the left. The heroes aim at the worms, but they run away very quickly. Camera zoom in. MariogD shoots to one insect, but it didn't make a big impression.

9. The cockroach knocks MariogD over while escaping and stains it with green dust (possibly mold that was on the insect's legs). MariogD gets up quickly, cleans his face and looks at himself and says with disgust: "GAHH... Disgusting!". Delsin approaches him and says jokingly: "That's definitely your color" and smirks. MariogD squint one's eyes and next then smiles too.

10. Suddenly, Bill's malicious voice is heard (from the right edge of the screen): "Done over there, lovebirds?". Delsin and MariogD turn their heads towards Bill and they squint one's eyes. The camera moves to the right. Bill stand on a leaf (another plant in a pot, which it a little further).

11. He was climbed up on a withered leaf. Bill looks up and says, "Have you seen this?" He then turns his head and says, "Delsin, bring that map here!" He's looking up again. The camera moves slightly to the leaves of the plant. They are eaten because aphids (small insects) are sitting on them.

12. One aphid accidentally enters on Bill's head. He shudders in disgust and knocks down the aphid with his hand. <Sound of disgust>. Aphid fall under his feet, then Bill kicks it like a ball with disgusting. Bill curse loud raising his hands up: "Fucking bugs!". Blackout.


Light effect:

Yellow (morning).


Dialogues:

Delsin: "Goddamn..."
Delsin: "Just what I need"
Bill: "The Hell are you doing?!"
Bill: "It's dead already!"
MariogD: "It moved!"
Bill: "Dumbass..."
Bill: "We're moving, people!”
MariogD: "That's not quite your color"
Delsin: "You don't say"
MariogD: "GAHH... Disgusting!"
Delsin: "That's definitely your color"
Bill: "Done over there, lovebirds?"
Bill: "Have you seen this?"
Bill: "Delsin, bring that map here!"
Bill: <Sound of disgust>
Bill: "Fucking bugs!"

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Posted by Mejson - September 11th, 2021


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Welcome crew and NG people!


It was a moment of break, but sometimes a moment of rest is everything you need. :P


Happy birthday to everyone! It's the 150th Poster we have here! Congratulations to everyone who has contributed to this success!


What do you think about it, @Cyberdevil@Animetion24@ChordC@MariogD@SayMeBott?


Regards,

Mejson


Scene 3 - Family

Inscription (on black background):

Episode 3
Day 28
(~6 hours later)
5:07 PM


Action:

1. Camera zoomed on: Mejson and Candy are standing opposite each other (a bit further back in the camp). Candy acts like a spoiled kid, bursting with anger and adolescent frustration. Mejson has dark circles under his eye and is clearly tired (as you can see, these are the obvious causes of frustration and aggression).

2. Mejson (firmly and angrily): "This behavior will not be tolerated!", Candy shaking her head and hands angrily screams (still having autistic reflexes): "I want it back!" Mejson glares at him angrily and rests his hands on his hips, then says, "It's not your pet to take back!".

3. Candy sits down abruptly on the ground and hits the ground with her fists (repeatedly) screaming: "I wanna! I wanna! I wanna!". Then he grabs the stone and stands up quickly, then throws it angrily straight ahead. The stone passes Mejson's head and flies past the right edge of the screen.

4. Mejson shudders (instinctively) and freezes in stunned (his eye freezes for a moment). At the same time, you can hear MariogD in surprise (a bit quieter because he's off-screen): "What the Hell's going on here?". Candy is also shocked for a moment, then sits down on the ground and stares at the ground in embarrassment.

5. MariogD comes up with the stone in his hand and says in a raised voice (almost screams): "Is it now raining rocks?!" MariogD's words broke Mejson from his stupor (he turns his head towards MariogD): "What?". Meanwhile, Candy looks embarrassed (for a moment) at MariogD, then down again.

6. Mejson makes a worried face. MariogD quickly calms down (seeing Mejson's reaction) and smiles, then says: "Still trying to be his father again?". The camera zooms in on Mejson's face, who blinks (looks absent). Effect similar to Zip's dream (white effects) - Mejson remembers something.

7. The camera shows Mejson walking uphill (not too steep, some quiet route). He is wearing a backpack and accessories. Then he pauses for a moment, turns around, and waits. The camera moves to the right to the other person. This is Candy 's father (the viewer can only guess that). Also is wearing a backpack and accessories.

8. His skin color is similar to Candy. He walks over to Mejson and supports itself on his shoulder, breathes for a while (there are drops of sweat on his forehead), then straightens up. They both look at each other and smile. After a while, Mejson asks: "Ready?". Candy's father nods.

9. Next they continue to go up the hill together. After a while, Candy's father begins to slow down (he can't handle rate and sweats more and more). Then he falls to his knee, panting heavily. Mejson turns and runs to him and also crouches close to him and puts him hand on his shoulder (he's worried). White effect (return to reality).

10. MariogD shakes Mejson and asks anxiously, "Hey, you alright there?" Mejson blinks and regains focus and replies indifferently: "Yes". Mejson turns his head and looks at the seated Candy. His expression changes to indulgent and gentle.

11. He then crouches down (the camera zooms in on them) and puts his hand on Candy's shoulder and says: "You don't always get what you want..." and then adds: "...but you can always count on us... your family". Then smiles at Candy.

12. Candy, who had been watching Mejson attentively (from the moment he crouched down) nodded, then smiled to Mejson. Blackout.


Light effect:

Gray (evening).


Dialogues:

Mejson: "This behavior will not be tolerated!"
Candy: "I want it back!"
Mejson: "It's not your pet to take back!"
Candy: "I wanna! I wanna! I wanna!"
MariogD: "What the Hell's going on here?"
MariogD: "Is it now raining rocks?!"
Mejson: "What?"
MariogD: "Still trying to be his father again?"
Mejson: "Ready?"
MariogD: "Hey, you alright there?"
Mejson: "Yes"
Mejson: "You don't always get what you want..."
Mejson: "...but you can always count on us... your family"

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