@Animetion24, maybe on the following pages of pagination you have unopened (not clicked) messages from me that I may have sent a long time ago - when you didn't have much time.
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@Mejson That would make sense. No offense for not taking a look at them; the news posts and movie submissions have told me what the inbox is referring to anyways :)
I doubt I have anything revolutionary for this scene, unlike the past two. Perhaps Mazurek would be more reflective of the current situation and say that the hiding spot "it will have to do" rather than "it might be useful", since he's taking Zip heavily into consideration.
And if the final line by Mazurek is a little in-joke between the three of them, perhaps the levity can be confirmed with Zip also giving one chuckle/grin to it as well. Who knows - it might be the last one he'll ever give as a living being. :J
@Animetion24, cool, no problem. Now it should be ok.
This is the second situation (described by you) - Mazurek with Keni are joking a bit, but without Zip - he is too tired and he doesn't listen to them at all. He's not involved in this conversation. No wonder - he's injured.
I don't know what can be changed here, maybe with @MariogD (my brother) we will arrange something to change based on your comment.
Thanks for the ideas!
PS. Planning/Draft a new scene every two days!
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- first paragraph -> good idea we will change that, thank you for this text 'it will have to do'
- second paragraph -> your logic is good. but Zip will not die, in 'Reduce logic' bitting does not infect only this strange mushroom thing (I do not know how to call it)
First paragraph - Mazurek dialogue and behavior corrected.
Second paragraph - Ophiocordyceps unilateralis (a fungal species of the Ophiocordycipitaceae family) requires spore release when the buds (emerging from the host) burst to infect. :P
I think we finish here!
Scene corrected and approved.
Next scene planning is tonight (CEST).
Mejson
@Animetion24 when I try send PM to you then:
"The recipient (Animetion24) has the maximum number of unread messages from you."