Cyberdevil 2020-09-08 06:22:33

I like. :) Quick and concise for all too, if I'd suggest some minor changes...

Lost left eye has disturbed vision of the correct perspective. > Lost left eye, has distorted/limited visual depth as a result.
Received wounds resulted in an unexpected death. > Strange wounds resulted in an unexpected death.
Drastic experiences are curing autism (return to reality). > Drastic experiences are curing his autism (returning to reality).
Hard times has develop his valor and physical condition. > Hard times has developed his valor and physical condition.
Psychopathic and fearless mind until the last breath. > Psychopathic and fearless until the last breath.
Faithful to sociopathic beliefs until the end. > Faithfully sociopathic until the end.
increase in vanity. > increasing vanity.
The unexpected loss of the head > The unexpected loss of his head

Cyberdevil 2020-09-08 06:23:28

Whoops, suggested minor change on one of those minor changes: Hard times HAVE developed his valor and physical condition.

AzureDragoonGX 2020-09-08 09:09:00

Ah bios. I always loved writing out profiles for characters. Now then...

MariogD Phyiscal Condition
Hawk-eye has become a guarantee of excellent archer's birth. ->
Hawk's eyes have guaranteed the makings of an ace archer.

Rowny Physical Condition
Deep wounds caused slow death - no suitable equipment to heal. ->
Without supplies, a slow death from deep wounds was inevitable.

Mazurek Mental State
Development of creativity through workshop work ->
Innovation from workshop work has filled his mind.

Delsin Mental State
Steadfast willpower could be a powerful asset. ->
Strong nerves are needed to scout. Only braindeath can stop him.

Keni Physical State
Greatly developed muscles of the whole body - real gladiator. ->
Greatly developed muscles across his whole body. A true gladiator.