"This project sums up all events that took place during the Reduce Saga" seems good to me?
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Took or take place, if it's past or present...
Ok, so: "This project sums up all events that took place during the Reduce Saga..."
Thanks! :)
My only little gripe is the varying tenses used in your credits, Mejson - Past for directed, and present for pretty much the rest. I think best case would be to make it all past, so it'll be "Directed, designed, animated, and programmed by Mejson." Put artwork/illustration along with style for design; could save some space, since we're working with little of it in the main menu.
Otherwise, I'm good with this. :)
Thanks for the proofreading and inspiration :P
Again, thanks to you, I added / changed something XD
Ultimately it's like this:
Welcome everyone!
This project sums up all events that took place during the Reduce Saga...
Directed, designed, animated and programmed by Mejson.
The text was created and proofread by Animetion24, Cyberdevil and MariogD.
Greetings from all the team...
Enjoy it!
Looks good to me. Though if the greetings are meant to sound positive maybe exemplification instead of ellipses? Like:
Greetings from the whole team!
Enjoy!
Okay, I fix it! Thanks! :P
*exclamation XD Friggin' spellcheck...
MariogD
I am not convinced with sentence: "This project sums up all events that took place after both parts of Reduce 2..." for me this project sums up all events that took place during Reduce Saga not after second part. Or it sums up current situation that took place after both parts of Reduce 2.
Mejson
All in all, you are right @MariogD... it should be a round-up during Reduce Saga. Guys, how best should it be?