MariogD 2022-10-04 07:22:48

Awesome action scene! Cannot wait to see it! Every day we are closer to the end of planning!

AzureDragoonGX 2022-10-04 09:53:37

73-75. - Think Bott* could have a close call while crafting (like any Apex player can attest when making new weapons in the Battle Royale :J), like say a spider spits venom towards MariogD, only for the latter to dodge, so that the venom instead lands a foot away from Bott*. He then says "Hey, watch it!" and continues working.

Alternatively, Bott* hears footsteps approaching him, a spider ofc locking onto him. But MariogD manages to flank it and stab the distracted head dead. Its blood splatter lands close to Bott*, who says too "Hey, watch it!" Then the scene continues from there.

MariogD: "Bloody hell! More is coming!" -> "Bloody Hell! More are coming!"

Bott*: "Interesting... they're furious!" -> "Fascinating - They're quite furious!"

MariogD: "Bott*, give me more jars!"

Bott*: "I don't have more" -> "I don't have any more."

MariogD: "Really?!" -> "Seriously?!"

MariogD: "Retreat!"
MariogD: "They're so close!"
MariogD: "Ughhh... shit!"
MariogD: <groan of pain>
MariogD: "Fuck me..."

MariogD: "Come here, son of a bitch!" -> "Come on, you son of a bitch!"

Mejson: "Just die, asshole!" -> "Die, asshole, die!!"

Mejson: "And stay there!" -> "And stay down!"

Mejson: "Fuck! I'm out!"
Mejson: <groan of pain>
Mejson: "Fuck me!"
Mejson: "Let me go, bastard!"

Mejson: "Yeah! Show him who's the boss!" -> "Yeah! Show him who's boss!"

Mejson: <sighs>

{Bott*: "Hey, watch it!"}

MariogD: "How much longer?!"
Bott*: "Just a moment!"
MariogD: "I don't think we have that much time..."
MariogD: "Fuck it!"

MariogD: "Leave it alone!"
Bott*: "What?! Why?"
MariogD: "It's too late to experiment!"
MariogD: "Help me with this"
MariogD: "You know what to do!"
Bott*: "Are you mad? We will burn too!"

Bott*: "I like that!" -> "I love it!"

Bott*: "Let's burn everything!"
MariogD: "Calm down, Bott*!"
Bott*: "Party pooper..."
MariogD: "Stop them!"
Bott*: "Sure"
MariogD: "Just in time!"

MariogD: "It will stop them!" -> "That'll stop them!"

Bott*: "For a while..."
Mejson: "Great! His friends have come..."
Mejson: "What the...?!"
Mejson: "Zoologist Cyber..."

Cyber: "You guys really pissed off those spiders" -> "We haven't even mass produced, and we already got angry customers?" (Unsure of Cyber's personality ofc. First line works fine, this one maybe if he's a jester)

Mejson: "Yeeeah... welcome to the party"
Bott*: "We're going to bake ourselves alive..."

MariogD: "Don't worry, the fire dies down... we'll be eaten alive soon!" -> "Worry not - when the fire goes out, we'll be eaten alive instead!"

Bott*: "I wanted to die in my lab... accidentally infected by a deadly disease"-> "I was hoping I'd be in my lab - succumbing to a new and deadly disease."

Bott*: "Wait! I have something for that occasion!" -> "Hold on! I have something just for situations like this!"

MariogD: "Wait... have you just remembered this now?!" -> "What? What the Hell is it?!"

Bott*: "Come on! Help me find it!"
MariogD: "What are we actually looking for?"
Bott*: "Boxes"

MariogD: "Really?! There are boxes everywhere!" -> "Which boxes? There's so many!"

Bott*: "Ahh! Here it is!"

MariogD: "Fireworks? When you..." -> "Fireworks? When did you?"

Bott*: "Set it on fire!"
MariogD: "Wow! Cool!"
MariogD: "When did you have time for this?"

Bott*: "When you slob around I'm hard working" -> "While you were lazing about, I was hard at work!"

Bott*: "Keep going. Now for another ones" -> "Keep it coming. Now for some more."

SayMeBott 2022-10-04 11:28:39

I think that everyone knows any song with title "99 Problems"

- I mean 99 points of that scene (it's just a joke) :D

ChordC 2022-10-06 20:35:37

Here is my dialogue proposal:

MariogD: "Bloody hell! More is coming!" ==> “Bloody hell! They won’t stop coming!”
Bott*: "Interesting... they're furious!" ==> “Fascinating… they’re furious about something…”

MariogD: "Bott*, give me more jars!"

Bott*: "I don't have more" ==> “That was the last one”
MariogD: "Really?!" ==> “Are you kidding me?!”
MariogD: "Retreat!" ==> “Fallback!”
MariogD: "They're so close!" ==> “They’re getting closer!”

MariogD: "Ughhh... shit!"
MariogD: <groan of pain>
MariogD: "Fuck me..."
MariogD: "Come here, son of a bitch!"

Mejson: "Just die, asshole!" ==> “Die, asshole!”
Mejson: "And stay there!" ==> “And stay down!”

Mejson: "Fuck! I'm out!"
Mejson: <groan of pain>
Mejson: "Fuck me!"

Mejson: "Let me go, bastard!" ==> “Gaahhhh! Let me go you, bastard!”
Mejson: "Yeah! Show him who's the boss!" ==> “Yeah! Show him who’s boss!”

Mejson: <sighs>
MariogD: "How much longer?!"
Bott*: "Just a moment!"

MariogD: "I don't think we have that much time..." ==> “I don’t think we have a moment!”

MariogD: "Fuck it!"

MariogD: "Leave it alone!" ==> “Oi!
Leave it alone!”

Bott*: "What?! Why?"

MariogD: "It's too late to experiment!" ==> “This is no time for an experiment!”
MariogD: "Help me with this" ==> “Help me with this, will you?!”

MariogD: "You know what to do!"

Bott*: "Are you mad? We will burn too!"
Bott*: "I like that!"
Bott*: "Let's burn everything!"

MariogD: "Calm down, Bott*!" ==> “It’s nothing like that, Bott*!”

Bott*: "Party pooper..."
MariogD: "Stop them!"

Bott*: "Sure" ==> “Aye aye captain!”

MariogD: "Just in time!"
MariogD: "It will stop them!" ==> “that will stop them!”

Bott*: "For a while..."

Mejson: "Great! His friends have come..." ==> “Great! We’re outnumbered…”

Mejson: "What the...?!"
Mejson: "Zoologist Cyber..."

Cyber: "You guys really pissed off those spiders"
Mejson: "Yeeeah... welcome to the party"
Bott*: "We're going to bake ourselves alive..."

MariogD: "Don't worry, the fire dies down... we'll be eaten alive soon!" ==> “Don’t worry, the fire’s dying down… It’s better than being eaten alive”
Bott*: "I wanted to die in my lab... accidentally infected by a deadly disease" ==> “I’d rather die in my lab being infected by a deadly virus”

Bott*: "Wait! I have something for that occasion!"

MariogD: "Wait... have you just remembered this now?!" ==> “Wait… you what know?!”

Bott*: "Come on! Help me find it!"
MariogD: "What are we actually looking for?"
Bott*: "Boxes"
MariogD: "Really?! There are boxes everywhere!"

Bott*: "Ahh! Here it is!" ==> “Ahh! Here they are!”
MariogD: "Fireworks? When you..." ==> “Fireworks? Since when di you…”

Bott*: "Set it on fire!"
MariogD: "Wow! Cool!"

MariogD: "When did you have time for this?" ==> “Since when did you have time for this?”
Bott*: "When you slob around I'm hard working" ==> “When you’re slacking off, I was hard at work”

Bott*: "Keep going. Now for another ones" ==> “Now go for the other ones!”

Mejson 2022-10-10 11:28:06

@Azure, thank you for your great ideas, but if spiders could hook the heroes or spit acid, this scene would not take place properly. But thank you! Thank you all! Outstanding job! Outstanding dubs! I'm closing the scene!

AzureDragoonGX 2022-10-11 14:31:16

@Mejson Understood.

By the way, I think you might want to @ my whole name, I'm not getting notifications with just "Azure". Also, when I click on that @, it points to a very old NG user - older than either of us. >.>