MariogD 2022-11-02 14:57:40

Indeed I saw this scene as big summary of Reduce 3 and a little introduction to Reduce 4. I think we have achieved our goals. It was possible only because of @AzureDragoonGX wonderful speech. Chapeau Bas!

Cyberdevil 2022-11-02 16:49:58

Thanks indeed @AzureDragoonGX, and @MariogD! And for the unexpected plugs on my music @Mejson! :D I suppose you've been low on time too the last month - just so you know I am working on those remaining lines, now that this madness is over it shouldn't be too long before I can finally catch up here, with the Reduce song too, it's started...

As for the above it sounds great, one fix maybe:

what can I say good about him? > what good can I say about him?

ChordC 2022-11-06 12:08:35

Alright, I have made a couple of dialogue proposals for a few lines. But the ones made by @AzureDragoonGX… amazing, I have no words to describe how well made they are. Glad to have you on the team.

Mejson: "Well... I'm not very good at speaking at funerals... especially since I didn't know Bill very well... what good can I say about him?" ==> “Well… To be frank, this not my forte, but… what good can I say about him?”

Mejson: "He was one of us..."

Mejson: "That would be that" ==> “That’s all I can say…”

MariogD: <grunts>

Mejson: "Anyone wants to add
something?" ==> “Does anyone want to add something?”
Mejson: "Delsin! Maybe you?" ==> “Delsin! You’re good with words, right?”
Mejson: "Well? Did you think that I already lost my faith in you?" ==> “Well? You thought I lost faith in you?”

Mejson: "Everyone deserves a second chance"
Delsin: "Tragedy has dogged every step of our adventure for survival"
Delsin: "It has sicced terrible creatures upon us..."
Delsin: "Brought out the creatures inside ourselves"
Delsin: "Put us at odds on a fundamental level, forcing us to create dividing lines"
Delsin: "Taken many of our lives. Mejson informed me that before our teams merged, there were already losses..."
Delsin: "Jimmy... Jason..."
Delsin: "I cannot sing of their praises, having never met them, but I take it they fought like lions for most of our sakes. That does deserve mentioning"
Delsin: "And then there are those that have joined them soon after"
Delsin: "Rowny, who held Zip's anchor"
Delsin: "Steve, who used his strength to make us all stronger"
Delsin: "God-DL. Conrad - They both filled gaps in our strategy we won't soon fill back up Diablo, who could always put us back on track"
Delsin: "And- <sigh> Bill, where nothing stood in the way of the mission"
Delsin: "When push came to shove, they too stared death in the face for our survival, as we did for them"
Delsin: "Their only mistake, through no fault of their own, was chance. With their deaths, they've tortured the rest"
Delsin: "And it only seems to be the beginning..."
Delsin: "But we owe it to Bill. We owe it to all who have fallen"
Delsin: "We must weather this storm and slice off the head of the snake. We conquered this latest mountain - we're ready to annihilate the next"
Bott*: "Apes together strong!"

Mejson 2022-11-07 12:01:56

OK, these 10 dialogues that were to talk - already selected, thank you for the ideas. They are not terribly problematic, so we have already managed to choose, with @ChordC proposals we have exhausted the topic. I'm closing the wall, thank you again @AzureDragoonGX for a great monologue!