Welcome everyone!

It's a next scene planning/draft - this time it's: Scene 2 - Our "friend" to Reduce 2 - Pass of Time - the first and also only addition to Reduce 2 :)

Scene 1 - Run and hide! - Approved!

However, the latest information for the project Reduce 2 - Pass of Time:

• main menu - OK,
• nature effects - OK,
• extras - OK,
• new quality - OK.

If you want, you can see the project overview - I have already added.

Scene 2 - Our "friend"

Inscription (on black background):

Episode 2

Day 13

(~1 hour later)

6:57 AM

Action:

1. Keni, Mazurek and Zip are breathing hard over the muddy cliff; Keni stands hunched, Mazurek crouched on his knee, Zip is sitting on a stone.

2. Zip speaks / screams first, he looks at the ground: "What the fuck was that ?!".

3. Mazurek glances at Zip, then at Keni, then down to the ground and says in a gasping voice: "Calm down... we need to hide... and rethink the next steps".

4. Keni looks at Mazurek and starts the sentence: "You have no idea..." and at this moment the camera on Zip, followed by God-DL Zombie and pushes him to the ground (Zip is lying on his stomach).

5. Zip is bitten on the neck. Mazurek jumps up and hits God-DL Zombie, who wants to hit him back, but Zip attacks him with the back of his head.

6. Mazurek attacks again and this time God-DL hits him and Mazurek flies backwards.

7. Camera close-up on God-DL Zombie and Zip - he wants to bite him again, but suddenly Keni runs up and breaks his neck.

8. God-DL Zombie slides down, Zip who is panting heavily and whispering, "Fuck, it hurts like hell!".

9. Keni gets up and goes to the left - the camera follows him (looks into the distance, with his back to the others) and says in an irritated but calm voice: "You are useless..." then turns and says already more agitated: "Fuck you cannot be left alone for a moment ".

10. Camera on Mazurek, who picks up (helps to get up) Zip and ignores Keni's words.

11. Mazurek says with an worry voice: "We shoud treat this wound", and Zip (at the lift): "hisses".

12. Suddenly, God-DL Zombie's growl is heard. The camera on him (starts slowly to rise), then on Keni, who is initially surprised and then frosts his eyes a bit, and he walks over and smashes the head of God-DL Zombie with his foot (you can't see the crushed head, but a little over - Keni - his leg a black blood gushing around her). Keni says firmly with a serious face, "Stay down!" Blackout.

Light effect:

Yellow (early morning).

Dialogues:

Zip: "What the fuck was that?!"

Mazurek: "Calm down... we need to hide... and rethink the next steps"

Keni: "You have no idea..."

Zip: "Fuck, it hurts like hell"

Keni: "You are useless..."

Keni: "Fuck you cannot be left alone for a moment"

Mazurek: "We shoud treat this wound"

Keni: "Stay down!"

What do you think about this scene? Do you have any ideas?