It's a next scene planning/draft - this time it's: Scene 2 - Our "friend" to Reduce 2 - Pass of Time - the first and also only addition to Reduce 2 :)
Scene 1 - Run and hide! - Approved!
However, the latest information for the project Reduce 2 - Pass of Time:
- main menu - OK,
- nature effects - OK,
- extras - OK,
- new quality - OK.
If you want, you can see the project overview - I have already added.
Scene 2 - Our "friend"
Inscription (on black background):
(~1 hour later)
1. Keni, Mazurek and Zip are breathing hard over the muddy cliff; Keni stands hunched, Mazurek crouched on his knee, Zip is sitting on a stone.
2. Zip speaks / screams first, he looks at the ground: "What the fuck was that ?!".
3. Mazurek glances at Zip, then at Keni, then down to the ground and says in a gasping voice: "Calm down... we need to hide... and rethink the next steps".
4. Keni looks at Mazurek and starts the sentence: "You have no idea..." and at this moment the camera on Zip, followed by God-DL Zombie and pushes him to the ground (Zip is lying on his stomach).
5. Zip is bitten on the neck. Mazurek jumps up and hits God-DL Zombie, who wants to hit him back, but Zip attacks him with the back of his head.
6. Mazurek attacks again and this time God-DL hits him and Mazurek flies backwards.
7. Camera close-up on God-DL Zombie and Zip - he wants to bite him again, but suddenly Keni runs up and breaks his neck.
8. God-DL Zombie slides down, Zip who is panting heavily and whispering, "Fuck, it hurts like hell!".
9. Keni gets up and goes to the left - the camera follows him (looks into the distance, with his back to the others) and says in an irritated but calm voice: "You are useless..." then turns and says already more agitated: "Fuck you cannot be left alone for a moment ".
10. Camera on Mazurek, who picks up (helps to get up) Zip and ignores Keni's words.
11. Mazurek says with an worry voice: "We shoud treat this wound", and Zip (at the lift): "hisses".
12. Suddenly, God-DL Zombie's growl is heard. The camera on him (starts slowly to rise), then on Keni, who is initially surprised and then frosts his eyes a bit, and he walks over and smashes the head of God-DL Zombie with his foot (you can't see the crushed head, but a little over - Keni - his leg a black blood gushing around her). Keni says firmly with a serious face, "Stay down!" Blackout.
Yellow (early morning).
Zip: "What the fuck was that?!"
Mazurek: "Calm down... we need to hide... and rethink the next steps"
Keni: "You have no idea..."
Zip: "Fuck, it hurts like hell"
Keni: "You are useless..."
Keni: "Fuck you cannot be left alone for a moment"
Mazurek: "We shoud treat this wound"
Keni: "Stay down!"
What do you think about this scene? Do you have any ideas?