Welcome everyone!
It's a another scene planning/draft - this time it's: Scene 8 - "Wrong Number" to Reduce 2 - Pass of Time - the first and also only addition to Reduce 2 :)
I know there has been no Poster for 10 days, but my brother (@MariogD) was busy (more that usually) and on the last occasion he helped me with Reduce 2 - Summary. Also, I apologize to you for waiting so long. :/
Scene 1 - Run and hide! - Approved!
Scene 2 - Our "friend" - Approved!
Scene 3 - A New Hope - Approved!
Scene 4 - A New Beginning - Approved!
Scene 5 - Still Alive! - Approved!
Scene 6 - Opposite Emotions - Approved!
Scene 7 - Brutal Ambush - Approved!
However, I want to say: I'm finish working on puzzle system and all the necessary elements. :) Now I create new images and cut them into puzzles and insert them into the project. :P
Scene 8 - "Wrong Number"
Inscription (on black background):
Episode 8
Day 16
(~2 hours later)
9:03 AM
Action:
1. The camera shows Mazurek (for 5s), who is making armor - he hits with a hammer (there are other tools on the workbench).
2. The camera slowly moves to the Zip (getting closer), the hammer sounds become more indistinct (echo). The camera is now very close to Zip's face.
3. RETROSPECTIVE (sepia shades). The camera shows Havoc's office, who is on a phone call: "...everything is ready..." and after a while he replies: "No problem...".
4. As Zip and Mazurek enter (carrying new lab equipment) as he says this, Zip smiles at Havoc.
5. Havoc looks at them in surprise and hangs up the phone without saying a word. Mazurek looks at him suspiciously and squint eyes, and after a while he asks: "Who was it?", And Havoc replied impassively (after a second he regained his composure): "Wrong number".
6. Zip puts the package on the table and says (he's in good humor): "They've delivered the tools that you ordered".
7. Havoc says (smiling a bit): "Excellent!"
8. Mazurek asks curiously: "What do you intend to do with this gear?". Havoc looks indifferently at the Mazurek, then looks straight ahead and replies (as if to himself): "I would like to check something more in my project."
9. Mazurek raises an eyebrow and asks: "You mean 'our' project?" Havoc looks at Mazurek and corrects quickly: "Yeah, our project." Zip watched the situation without saying a word (somewhat surprised).
10. Zip slowly opens his eyes and starts to rise, Mazurek rushes to him and says firm but gently: "Don't get up!".
11. Zip obediently lies down and smiles (a bit distractedly - his eyes are gently closed), and the Mazurek reciprocates the smile and adds amiably: "Everything will be alright".
Light effect:
Normal (torch light).
Dialogues:
Havoc: "...everything is ready..."
Havoc: "No problem..."
Mazurek: "Who was it?"
Havoc: "Wrong number"
Zip: "They've delivered the tools that you ordered"
Havoc: "Excellent!"
Mazurek: "What do you intend to do with this gear?"
Havoc: "I would like to check something more in my project"
Mazurek: "You mean 'our' project?"
Havoc: "Yeah, our project"
Mazurek: "Don't get up!"
Mazurek: "Everything will be alright"
AzureDragoonGX
Nice to be back, eh? :)
Before we get into Zip's reminiscence perhaps a small comedic moment in which Keni and/or Rash are trying on the new equipment that Mazurek is making. Perhaps Keni is less than pleased with one of them and tosses it at Mazurek, who flawlessly dodges and looks disappointed with him.
Perhaps there might be a better transition for Zip opening his eyes and returning to the present, too? For instance, maybe Zip or Mazurek asks Havoc what he might be planning on using the newly-ordered equipment for, in which Havoc presents a binder to them. As Zip bows forward to focus on the writing (with Havoc's unintelligible explanations fading out in the audio), it zooms in on his face and then zooms out to show him again in the present.
And if you will take me up on the armor antics, perhaps one more tossing of gear lands close to the two of them, which they will notice with exasperation.
Mejson
I'm also happy! :)
Great ideas, but my brother is going on vacation and only on Monday he will be able to design it with me... I won't do it mself, because I will overkill XD @MariogD, he always 'pulls' me down because I'm flying into space / I exaggerate / I'm trying too much. Hehehehe. :P
@Animetion24, would you like to present me with detailed corrections? Change this scene as you see fit?