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It's a next scene planning/draft - this time it's: Scene 9 - Funny Situation to Reduce 2 - Pass of Time - the first and also only addition to Reduce 2 :)

Scene 1 - Run and hide! - Approved!

Scene 2 - Our "friend" - Approved!

Scene 3 - A New Hope - Approved!

Scene 4 - A New Beginning - Approved!

Scene 5 - Still Alive! - Approved!

Scene 6 - Opposite Emotions - Approved!

Scene 7 - Brutal Ambush - Approved!

Scene 8 - "Wrong Number" - Approved!

Someone (from the crew) saw the latest version of Reduce 2 - Summary? :P

Scene 9 - Funny Situation

Inscription (on black background):

Episode 9

Day 20

(~4 days later)

7:21 PM

Action:

1. The camera shows the exit from the hideout (illuminated by lights). At the threshold, Zip is leaning against the wall, looking thoughtfully into the distance.

2. The camera slowly scrolls to the right as Zip stands up and walks over to Mazurek's workbench.

3. Mazurek is working on something - but you can't see it (with his back to the viewer).

5. When he spots Zip, he smiles at him, and Zip does the same and asks, "How's our genius doing?" And smiles heartily (even more).

6. Mazurek raises an eyebrow and smiles, then replies, "Give me one more minute". Suddenly you hear a piece of armor falling on flor in the distance, and a moment later Keni screams "Fuck, what are you doing?!"

7. Mazurek and Zip look curiously in that direction, and then knowingly at each other (both eyes frost and smile).

8. The camera moves in right direction - Keni is sitting on a rock and massaging her foot (he has a angry face and squint eyes).

9. Rash hesitantly says, "I'm sorry, it was an accident..." and then adds "...it's hard to put on" and smiles uncertainly at Keni.

10. Keni looks at him (still grimacing) and says, "It's fine..." then <hiss> and adds, "...put it on far away from me!"

11. Keni then gets up and says to Rash, "Can you give that to me?" and shows him the armlet (armor) with his hand.

12. Rash hands him the indicated item without a word, which Keni is trying to put on (but it's too small).

13. After a while he makes an annoyed face and says as if to himself: "Fuck, too tight!", and after a while he straightens up and looks ahead, then starts walking to the left and calls: "Mazurek!".

14. Keni walks up to Mazurek (Zip is sitting on the table watching Mazurek and Keni) and says irritated: "Why are you making it so small?!".

15. Mazurek immediately turned to Keni (when he heard his name) squint eyes and says: "Rash was the model", and after a while he smiles and adds: "It isn't my fault you ate so many steroids that you can't fit in anything" (Mazurek has red eyes - he looks tired and is malicious).

16. Mazurek makes a slightly worried face (because he said too much).

17. Zip bursts out laughing spontaneously, then covers his mouth after a while and quietly chuckles. Rash laughs in the distance.

18. Keni looks surprised (he didn't expect such an answer), and after a while he says a bit maliciously, (but smiling to Mazurek): "Very funny, smartass...", (Mazurek smiles and relaxes).

19. And after a while he adds (turning back to Rash): "...and what are you laughing at, skinny?!" (Rash stops laughing), and then he embarrassed say: "It's because of my muscles!" Blackout.

Light effect:

Normal (torch light).

Dialogues:

Zip: "How's our genius doing?"

Mazurek: "Give me one more minute"

Keni: "Fuck, what are you doing?!"

Rash: "I'm sorry, it was an accident..."

Rash: "...it's hard to put on" 

Keni: "It's fine..."

Keni: <hiss>

Keni: "...put it on far away from me!"

Keni: "Can you give that to me?"

Keni: "Fuck, too tight!"

Keni: "Mazurek!"

Keni: "Why are you making it so small?!"

Mazurek: "Rash was the model"

Mazurek: "It isn't my fault you ate so many steroids that you can't fit in anything"

Zip: <burst of laughter>

Zip: <giggles>

Rash: <laugh>

Keni: "Very funny, smartass..."

Keni: "...and what are you laughing at, skinny?!"

Keni: "It's because of my muscles!"