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Reduce 3 - Scene 10 (Planning/Draft)

Posted by Mejson - December 14th, 2021


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Welcome everyone!


Damn... it took us two weeks again XD. Well, this time it was actually not easy to design the scene (although it's not at all long)... Thank you for your help @MariogD and @SayMeBott. It was an indispensable help.


First, let me start with the most interesting information. Holiday gifts! As a thank you for great work, I awarded premium accounts: @Plasmarift, @ChordC and @Animetion24. :D Happy Christmas! (I don't know if I will have time or opportunity to add another poster before Christmas).


Update of important information:

  • we have all - prepared voices (from VA) for the characters for Part I,
  • my brother (@MariogD) and I chose a voice for the narrator - Plasmarift gave us such an amazing opportunity to do this. Probably soon it will be ready for Part I,
  • one film inspired me to come up with an interesting monologue. Mejson - the end of season 3 (during the end credits) says the words in the monologue: https://www.newgrounds.com/dump/item/613d8ba51534d050dee535ab71345be9 (how do you like it? @Animetion24, I'm asking for an opinion, PS. These are intentionally short statements),
  • we were able to officially connect and define the lapse of time in the animations - how much time passes between the animations (R2: Pass of Time vs Reduce 3), I've updated data everywhere.


Thanks for helping @ChordC & @MariogD to plan & improve this scene.


What do you think about it, @Cyberdevil@Animetion24@ChordC@MariogD@SayMeBott?


Regards,

Mejson


Scene 10 - Surprise

Inscription (on black background):

Episode 10
Day 30
(~1 hour later)
9:31 AM


Action:

1. The scene starts at a familiar location. Under a dome made of plant pot leaves, there are primitive beds and primitive rescue equipment. The camera is focused on - Bill is lying on one of the beds, with Bott* crouched right behind him (front body). Bott* finishes putting on a bandage on Bill's body chest (This is a new dressing). Bill is unconscious, but stable. Camera zoom out a little. On the right, Mejson is standing (he is leaning his back against some boxes). Bott* stands up (without taking his eyes off the bandage). Mejson comes up to him and during walking asks seriously (he has a worried face): "How’s Bill holding out?".

2. Bott* looks at Mejson (turns his body to him) and says calmly (without optimism): "I’ve done all I can...". Then looks down at the ground (for a moment), and then again at Mejson and says: "He seems stable for now, but damn, just look at him…". Mejson nods and asks (worried): "So we can only wait and pray?". Bott* turns his head towards Bill and says compassionately (looking at Bill): "If he wants to live, it's up to him now". Mejson looks worriedly at Bill. The camera moves slightly to the left. MariogD comes and stops behind Bott*.

3. MariogD asks (a bit concerned, but mostly curious): "Will he make it?". Mejson looks at MariogD and Bott* turns (whole body) and says (concerned): "We were just talking about that". Then he turns front and then crouches down (looking at Bill) and says (without turning) to both of them: "You gave him a chance". Then he says (with a forced smile) looking (turns his head) at Mejson and then at MariogD: "Great work". Both (Mejson & MariogD) smile a little. MariogD says (cocky): "I agree, we are awesome!". Mejson <sighs> and make disappointed face (Mejson is disappointed by MariogD in spoiling the sublime moment by him).

4. Mariogd says (suprised): "What? We really tried our best". Bott* says (firmly): "Quiet down! Bill needs his rest". Mejson ignores MariogD and say seiously to MariogD: "He's right". MariogD is little embarased and sayd to himself (looking down at the ground): "Well, I got things to do, ciao..." and leaves. Candy walks in when MariogD leaves (the same time). MariogD looks with intereted at Candy during leaving. Candy go to Bott* ad then bends over Bott*, shakes his shoulder and says (firmly but gently): "Come here!". Then Candy quickly walks away (walks at a faster pace to the left). Bott* shuddered in surprise, then calmly says as he watched Candy walk away: "I'm on my way". Bott* then looks at the sleeping Bill (for a moment), then gets up and follows Candy.

5. Mejson says to himself (pensive) when scratch on his head: "Strange, Candy never behaves like that... He found a new friend". Camera zoom in on Mejson, he squint one's eyes. After a while, the camera goes left (catches up with Bott*), which approaches the pile of stones (near the workshop). Bott* goes (on the line of stones) and looks around (he can't see Candy yet) and says: "Where are you, buddy?". Candy calls out (not too loudly): "Over here!". Candy is sitting behind that pile of stones (you can't see him - it's his hideout, apparently). Camera zoom in and 50% transparency. Candy squatted on his knee next to a large open bag. Bott* squats (but with a distance) and asks the interested person: "What have you got there?". Candy smiles in response.

6. He then gets up and reaches into the bag, a white spider jump to his arms (same spider as in scene 8). The spider is as calm as a pet. Bott* gets up quick in surprise and says: "Wow... a magnificent creature!". Candy says: "It's white". Then Bott* puts his hand to his chin, looks at it and says: "And it won't hurt us?". Candy smiles in response. Bott* lowers his hand and says: "Can I examine it?". Candy stops smiling and says (anxiously): "What?". Bott* replies (reassuringly): "Don't worry, I won't hurt it...". Then he continues (more quietly, more to himself and crazy voice): "At least... I'll try not to". Then Bott* make small, crazy smile. Candy nods. Camera zoom out a little. Mejson comes up and suspiciously asks: "What's going on here?".

7. Bott* shudders in surprise (shudders and his eyes pupils narrow) for a moment, then looks (turns his head towards Mejson, but doesn't say anything). Mejson squint one's eyes and walks over - walks by, then notices the spider and shudders disgusted , and takes a step back (remembers the spiders from the last trip): "UGHH... Fuck!". Then Mejson sees that the spider is calm. Mejson takes two steps forward and looks at the spider worriedly (he has a stern face). Then he stands in front and looks (angry & firmly) and asks Bott*: "What are you guys doing with that damn thing?!". Bott* trying to calm Mejson down says (reassuringly): "Easy, I just found out moments ago". Then he continues: "It seems harmless, too". Mejson replies (already a bit calm): "It can be extremely poisonous you know!".

8. Then he adds, concerned: "Have you seen what happened to Bill?!". Bott* replies (excitedly): "We can use it, for research". Mejson squint one's eyes and raises his eyebrows, says (doesn't know what's going on): "'Research?'". Bott* looks at the spider and then at Mejson and says calmly: "We have an opportunity to do something more than just, 'wait and pray'". Then Bott* adds (excited): "Thanks to this specimen, we could make an antidote for Bill". Mejson's face expresses understanding (enlightenment) and he says: "Ooh". Then he adds curious: "Great idea, Bott*". Mejson looks at the spider, then scratches his head, then at Bott* and says: "But can we do something about those fangs first?". Bott* raises his hand to his chin, staring at the spider.

9. He then looks at Mejson and says (mad & happy): "Shevy and I can come up with something!". Mejson raises an eyebrow, squint one's eyes (reconciled with fate), and says nothing. Then he closes his eye for a moment (his face softens), <sighs>, then says: "Give me a moment, I need to think". The camera zooms in on Mejson (Mejson's mind). Mejson (front face) looks up and to the right, then thinks: "Hey, man". Silence. Mejson looks around (moves his eyes) and thinks: "You still here, Steve?". Mejson looks forward, raises his eyebrows and thinks: "He's… gone?". Next Steve appears (with offset & transparency) behind Mejson (also front face) and says: "What's up?" and adds: "I was in the memories sector". Steve disappears. Mejson squint one's eyes, makes an angry face and thinks: "What?!".

10. Steve appear on the right side (side face) indifferent and says: "I saw your memories... The comrades that you've lost... Jimmy, Jason... even myself!". Mejson looks to the right and angrily thinks: "How dare you?!". Steve answers: "You know, I even saw your death!". Steve disappears. Mejson is suprised and little scared and thinks: "The Fuck?!". Steve comes up from the left side (side face) and says (amused): "Relax... I was just messing with you...". Mejson's expression returns to normal, he thinks: "Enough chit-chat! What do you think I should do with this spider?". Steve comes up from the left side (side face) and says: "That really a question?". And then adds: "Raise it like yours". Mejson looks left (at Steve) and says nothing. Next Mejson looks down (confused & sad). 

11. Steve asks Mejson (curious): "What?". Mejson without looking at Steve thinks: "Candy was hiding it from me". Mejson <sighs>. Steve makes a sad face and says: "But he took the initiative". Mejson looks at Steve. Then he looks in the opposite direction and thinks: "Yes, I know... he's growing up". Steve (calmly & firmly) says: "So do as I say!". Steve disappears. Mejson looks firmly ahead. Back to reality. Mejson looks at Bott*. Bott* says (impatiently): "And? Did you decide?". Next Mejson replies (calmly) scratching his head and looking at the spider: "Yes, but...". Candy says: "Yayyy! thank you thank you thaankk youu!!!", <sounds of joy> and smiles. Then Mejson looks at Bott* and continues: "Just put it in a safe cage". Bott* nods and says (seriously): "Of course".

12. Suddenly, Bott* looks up and left and then only to the left, in the process he says (surprised & puzzled): "What's that?". Mejson asks (interested): "What?". Bott* is not responding. Mejson looks to the left too, then says (in shock): "Who would have expected?". Candy (continues smiling) ignores this. The camera moves to the left. The workshop and materials are passes by camera. Then it also passes Mazurek (slightly higher and in the front) and Zip (slightly lower and behind). Then it approaches a fairly large butterfly (it has a harness and 4 habitats and a chitin armor). Two huge bags (made of chitin) are already on the ground. Rash is standing by the luggage (backwards) - he is checking something, and Keni is standing on the right (sideways), he is stroking the butterfly (calming him down) - the butterfly moves its wings nervously.

13. The camera then pan to the right and focuses on Mazurek and Zip. Mejson comes up from the right (slightly lower and to the front), and then Bott* (a little higher and behind). Mejson says (cheerfully): "You made it. You survived!". And then adds: "You guys surely are a sight for my sore eye!". Then he smiles. Zip replies sadly and a little tired: "Yes,... we survived". Then to himself (more quiet) looking into ground: "Not all of us, though...". Mejson reacts grimace on his face. Candy is walking from the right (between the heroes) with a spider in her arms. Bott* and Mazurek, who were watching the interlocutors, took the floor now. Mazurek asks (cheerful): "How are you holding up, madman?". Bott* has an amused look: "In the mind?". They both <laugh> briefly.

14. After a while, Bott* says more seriously: "I'm doing juuusst fiiinnee..." and then asks: "And how are you?". Mazurek also says (seriously): "Stuff's been rough, but we can manage". Candy walked over and stopped between the characters (smiling). Zip says (hesitantly & worried): "What is this?!". Nobody had time to say anything else, as the spider breaks free from Candy's hands and runs quickly to the left. Candy notices this and runs (after the spider) screams: "Wait!". Zip shudders and reacts with disgust: "UGHH, nasty!". Mazurek also flinches a little. Mejson says firmly leaning forward sharply: "Catch it!". Mazurek and Zip turn left. Camera go to the left, passes Candy running. The camera then stops at the butterfly and the heroes. 

15. The spider jumps to the butterfly (doesn't reach it), but it scares away and butterfly flies away. Keni shudders in surprise and reacts (surprised): "What the fuck?!". Rash stands up and says (surprised): "What's going on?". Then looks at the butterfly flying away and adds (disappointed): "Shiiit...". Then Keni takes a few steps with his hand up screaming: "Hey! Come back here!". Meanwhile, Candy catches the spider. Keni looks at Candy, then he squint one's eyes and says to Candy: "The fuck is this?!". Candy looks at Keni seriously and says nothing. Blackout.


Light effect:

Normal (midday).


Dialogues:

Mejson: "How’s Bill holding out?"
Bott*: "I’ve done all I can..."
Bott*: "He seems stable for now, but damn, just look at him…"
Mejson: "So we can only wait and pray?"
Bott*: "If he wants to live, it's up to him now"
MariogD: "Will he make it?"
Bott*: "We were just talking about that"
Bott*: "You gave him a chance"
Bott*: "Great work"
MariogD: "I agree, we are awesome!"
Mejson: <sighs>
MariogD: "What? We really tried our best"
Bott*: "Quiet down! Bill needs his rest"
Mejson: "He's right"
MariogD: "Well, I got things to do, ciao..."
Candy: "Come here!"
Bott*: "I'm on my way"
Mejson: "Strange, Candy never behaves like that... He found a new friend"
Bott*: "Where are you, buddy?"
Candy: "Over here!"
Bott*: "What have you got there?"
Bott*: "Wow... a magnificent creature!"
Candy: "It's white"
Bott*: "And it won't hurt us?"
Bott*: "Can I examine it?"
Candy: "What?"
Bott*: "Don't worry, I won't hurt it..."
Bott*: "At least... I'll try not to"
Mejson: "What's going on here?"
Mejson: "UGHH... Fuck!"
Mejson: "What are you guys doing with that damn thing?!"
Bott*: "Easy, I just found out moments ago"
Bott*: "It seems harmless, too"
Mejson: "It can be extremely poisonous you know!"
Mejson: "Have you seen what happened to Bill?!"
Bott*: "We can use it, for research"
Mejson: "'Research?'"
Bott*: "We have an opportunity to do something more than just, 'wait and pray'"
Bott*: "Thanks to this specimen, we could make an antidote for Bill"
Mejson: "Ooh"
Mejson: "Great idea, Bott*"
Mejson: "But can we do something about those fangs first?"
Bott*: "Shevy and I can come up with something!"
Mejson: <sighs>
Mejson: "Give me a moment, I need to think"
Mejson: "Hey, man"
Mejson: "You still here, Steve?"
Mejson: "He's… gone?"
Steve: "What's up?"
Steve: "I was in the memories sector"
Mejson: "What?!"
Steve: "I saw your memories... The comrades that you've lost... Jimmy, Jason... even myself!"
Mejson: "How dare you?!"
Steve: "You know, I even saw your death!"
Mejson: "The Fuck?!"
Steve: "Relax... I was just messing with you..."
Mejson: "Enough chit-chat! What do you think I should do with this spider?"
Steve: "That really a question?"
Steve: "Raise it like yours"
Steve: "What?"
Mejson: "Candy was hiding it from me"
Mejson: <sighs>
Steve: "But he took the initiative"
Mejson: "Yes, I know... he's growing up"
Steve: "So do as I say!"
Bott*: "And? Did you decide?"
Mejson: "Yes, but..."
Candy: "Yayyy! thank you thank you thaankk youu!!!"
Candy: <sounds of joy>
Mejson: "Just put it in a safe cage"
Bott*: "Of course"
Bott*: "What's that?"
Mejson: "What?"
Mejson: "Who would have expected?"
Mejson: "You made it. You survived!"
Mejson: "You guys surely are a sight for my sore eye!"
Zip: "Yes,... we survived"
Zip: "Not all of us, though..."
Mazurek: "How are you holding up, madman?"
Bott*: "In the mind?"
Bott*: <laugh>
Mazurek: <laugh>
Bott*: "I'm doing juuusst fiiinnee..."
Bott*: "And how are you?"
Mazurek: "Stuff's been rough, but we can manage"
Zip: "What is this?!"
Candy: "Wait!"
Zip: "UGHH, nasty!"
Mejson: "Catch it!"
Keni: "What the fuck?!"
Rash: "What's going on?"
Rash: "Shiiit..."
Keni: "Hey! Come back here!"
Keni: "The fuck is this?!"

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Mejson: "How is Bill doing?"==> “How’s Bill holding out?”

Bott*: "I did what I could..." ==> “I’ve done all I can…”

Bott*: "He's stable but poison caused a lot of damage" ==> “He seems stable for now, but damn, just look at him…”

Mejson: "So we can only wait and pray?"

Bott*: "It's all up to his will to survive now" ==> Only time will tell…” or “Only fate can save him now…”

MariogD: "Will he be alright?" ==> “Will he make it?”

Bott*: "Well... that was the last moment" ==> “We were just talking about that”

Bott*: "You gave him a chance" ==> "The herbs that you two gave seems to have an effect"

Bott*: "You did a great job" ==> "Great job on your part"

MariogD: "I agree, we are awesome!" ==> "Of course! We're brothers after all!"

Mejson: <sighs>

MariogD: "What? We really tried our best"

Bott*: "Please be quiet, Bill needs some peace"

Mejson: "He is right" ==> "He's right"

MariogD: "I have more things to do..." ==> "Well, I got things to do, ciao..."

Candy: "Come here!" ==> "Hey! Come here! I have a surprise for you!"

Bott*: "I'm on my way"

Mejson: "Strange, Candy never behaves like that... He found a new friend" ==> "Strange, I've never seen Candy so excited like that... What's he up to now?"

Bott*: "Where are you, buddy?"

Candy: "Here!" ==> "Over here!"

Bott*: "What have you got there?"

Bott*: "Wow... amazing specimen!" ==> "Wow... a magnificent creature!"

Candy: "It's white" ==> "It's... it's white and fluffy!"

Bott*: "He won't hurt us?" ==> "Does it bite?"

Bott*: "Can I examine it?" ==> "Can I touch it?"

Candy: "What?"

Bott*: "Don't worry, I won't hurt it..."

Bott*: "At least I will try" ==> "At least... I'll try not to"

Mejson: "What's going on here?"

Mejson: "UGHH... Fuck!" ==> "UGHH... The fuck is that?!"

Mejson: "What are you guys doing with this damn thing?!" ==> "What are you guys doing with that damn thing?!"

Bott*: "Take it easy, I found out a moment ago" ==> "Calm down..."

Bott*: "It seems to be harmless"

Mejson: "But it still can be highly poisonous" ==> "It can be extremely poisonous you know!"

Mejson: "You know best what happened to Bill..." ==> "Have you seen what happened to Bill?!"

Bott*: "We can do the research" ==> "We can use it, for research"

Mejson: "What are you suggesting?" == "What do you mean?"

Bott*: "We have a unique opportunity to do something more than 'ironically' wait and pray" ==> "We have an opportunity to do something more than just, 'wait and pray' "

Bott*: "With this spicemen, andtidote for Bill is feasible!" ==> "With this specimen, an antidote for Bill is feasible!"

Mejson: "Ooh"

Mejson: "Great idea, Bott*"

Mejson: "Can you at least get those fangs secured?"

Bott*: "Me and Shevy are going to come up with something!"

Mejson: <sighs>

Mejson: "Give me a moment, I need to think"

Mejson: "Hey, man"

Mejson: "Are you still here, Steve?" ==> "You still here, Steve?"

Mejson: "I'm... free?" ==> "Are you free?"

Steve: "What's up?"

Steve: "I was in the memories sector"

Mejson: "What?!" ==> "What are you talking about?!"

Steve: "I was watching memories when your people have died... Jimmy, Jason,... and even me!"
==> "I saw your memories... The comrades that you've lost... Jimmy, Jason... me..."

Mejson: "How dare you?!" ==> "Please... Stop!!"

Steve: "Relax, I saw even your death!" ==> "You know, I even saw your death!

Mejson: "The Fuck?!"

Steve: "I'm kidding!" ==> "Relax.. I was just messing with you..."

Mejson: "What are we going to do with this spider?" ==> "Enough chit-chat! What do you think I should do with this spider?"

Steve: "What do you mean?"

Steve: "Raise it like yours"

Steve: "What?"

Mejson: "Candy was hiding it from me" ==> "He hid it from me"

Mejson: <sighs>

Steve: "But he took the initiative"

Mejson: "Yes, I know... he's growing up"

Steve: "Exactly!" ==> "So do as I say!"

Bott*: "And? Did you decide?" ==> "Hey, Mejson, you made up your mind yet?"

Mejson: "Yes, but..." ==> "Fine, you can keep it, but..."

Candy: "Yes! Thank you!" ==> "Yayyy! thank you thank you thaankk youu!!"

Candy: <sounds of joy>

Mejson: "Put it in a safe cage" ==> "Just put it in a safe cage"

Bott*: "Of course"

Bott*: "What's that?" ==> "Wait, who's that over there?"

Mejson: "What?"

Mejson: "Who would have expected?" ==> "<gasp>... Mazurek? Zip? "

Mejson: "You made it. You survived!"

Mejson: "I'm glad to see you, folks!"

Zip: "Yes,... we survived"

Zip: "But not all of us..." ==> "Not all of us though"

Mazurek: "How are you holding up, madman?"

Bott*: "On the mind?" ==> "In the mind?"

Bott*: <laugh>

Mazurek: <laugh>

Bott*: "I'm fine" ==> "I'm doing juuusst fiiinnee..."

Bott*: "How about you?"

Mazurek: "It was hard at times, but we survived it" ==> "Stuff's been rough, but we can manage"

Zip: "What is this?!" ==> "Huh? What do you got there?"

Candy: "Wait!"

Zip: "UGHH, nasty!"

Mejson: "Catch it!"

Keni: "What the fuck?!"

Rash: "What's going on?"

Rash: "Shiiit..."

Keni: "Wait! Don't fly away!" ==> "Hey! Come back here!"

Keni: "What the fuck it is?!" ==> "The fuck are you doing?!"

Thank you for your help! Cool fixes!

It was hard scene to plan. Firstly seems to be easy, only little fight about spider and come back of another crew. But it turned out something more.
Talking about Bill's terrible condition
Kicking out Mariogd because of too many people in scene
Fight between @SayMeBott and @Mejson about spider -> we changed conception several times
Greeting of old comrades.

Now we are waiting for @ChordC (thanks!) and @Animetion24 and @Cyberdevil inputs and we can update dialogues

It was hard for me to plan the scene because the scene is not as exciting as usual and it didn't inspire me as much as it usually does.

MariogD flew out because he pisses everyone off - especially when he repeats that he flew out XD

Tweaking with @MariogD and @SayMeBott has binary well and improved the scene. :P

@MariogD yes, the devil is in the details

And remember respect is everyt... i mean... apes together strong!

But seriously, the more actively we participate in the Reduce project, the better quality we get!
Thank you all (and myself) :)
@Cyberdevil, @Animetion24, @ChordC, @Mejson

Well... and how to plan by force because the scene is not thrilling.

Well, we cover everything like in the planet of monkeys? :D

Thank you too, it's great in this scene that I could count on your help more. :)

Hey guys!

Wonderful scene. Right off the top of my head reading, I don’t see anything I can suggest for revisions. I guess the extra time put into making that scene post-worthy was well allocated. :)

As for dialogue:
Mejson: "How is Bill doing?"

Bott*: "I did what I could..."

Bott*: "He's stable but poison caused a lot of damage" -> "He's stable, but there's critical damage from the poison."

Mejson: "So we can only wait and pray?" -> "Is there really nothing else we can do?"

Bott*: "It's all up to his will to survive now" -> "If he wants to live, it's up to him now."

MariogD: "Will he be alright?"

Bott*: "Well... that was the last moment" -> "We might've just pulled him from Death's door..." (A bit confused by this statement; I'm assuming you're saying that the team just saved Bill at the nick of time?)

Bott*: "You gave him a chance."

Bott*: "You did a great job" -> "Great work."

MariogD: "I agree, we are awesome!"

Mejson: <sighs>

MariogD: "What? We really tried our best"

Bott*: "Please be quiet, Bill needs some peace" -> "Quiet down. Bill needs his rest."

Mejson: "He is right"

MariogD: "I have more things to do..." -> "I'll see to some other stuff..."

Candy: "Come here!"

Bott*: "I'm on my way"

Mejson: "Strange, Candy never behaves like that... He found a new friend"

Bott*: "Where are you, buddy?"

Candy: "Here!" -> "Over here!"

Bott*: "What have you got there?"

Bott*: "Wow... amazing specimen!" -> "Wow... What an amazing specimen!"

Candy: "It's white"

Bott*: "He won't hurt us?" -> "And it won't hurt us?"

Bott*: "Can I examine it?"

Candy: "What?"

Bott*: "Don't worry, I won't hurt it..."

Bott*: "At least I will try" -> "Try my best not to anyway."

Mejson: "What's going on here?"

Mejson: "UGHH... Fuck!"

Mejson: "What are you guys doing with this damn thing?!"

Bott*: "Take it easy, I found out a moment ago" -> "Easy, I just found out moments ago."

Bott*: "It seems to be harmless" -> "It seems harmless, too."

Mejson: "But it still can be highly poisonous" -> "It might still be poisonous."

Mejson: "You know best what happened to Bill..." -> "Like the one that attacked Bill..."

Bott*: "We can do the research" -> "I'll research further."

Mejson: "What are you suggesting?" -> "'Research?'"

Bott*: "We have a unique opportunity to do something more than 'ironically' wait and pray" -> "If I'm right, we could do more than twiddle our thumbs for Bill."

Bott*: "With this spicemen, andtidote for Bill is feasible!" -> "Thanks to this specimen, we could make an antidote for Bill."

Mejson: "Ooh"

Mejson: "Great idea, Bott*" -> "That's awesome, Bott*!"

Mejson: "Can you at least get those fangs secured?" -> "But can we do something about those fangs first?"

Bott*: "Me and Shevy are going to come up with something!" -> "Shevy and I can come up with something!"

Mejson: <sighs>

Mejson: "Give me a moment, I need to think"

Mejson: "Hey, man"

Mejson: "Are you still here, Steve?"

Mejson: "I'm... free?" -> "I'm... Available."

Steve: "What's up?"

Steve: "I was in the memories sector" -> "I was in your memories archive."

Mejson: "What?!"

Steve: "I was watching memories when your people have died... Jimmy, Jason,... and even me!" -> "Watching the tapes on the recent fatalities - Jimmy, Jason. Even myself!"

Mejson: "How dare you?!"

Steve: "Relax, I saw even your death!"

Mejson: "The Fuck?!"

Steve: "I'm kidding!"

Mejson: "What are we going to do with this spider?"

Steve: "What do you mean?" -> "That really a question?"

Steve: "Raise it like yours" -> "Raise it like any other pet!"

Steve: "What?"

Mejson: "Candy was hiding it from me"

Mejson: <sighs>

Steve: "But he took the initiative"

Mejson: "Yes, I know... he's growing up"

Steve: "Exactly!"

Bott*: "And? Did you decide?"

Mejson: "Yes, but..."

Candy: "Yes! Thank you!"

Candy: <sounds of joy>

Mejson: "Put it in a safe cage"

Bott*: "Of course"

Bott*: "What's that?"

Mejson: "What?"

Mejson: "Who would have expected?"

Mejson: "You made it. You survived!"

Mejson: "I'm glad to see you, folks!" -> "You guys surely are a sight for my sore eye!"

Zip: "Yes,... we survived"

Zip: "But not all of us..." -> "Not all of us, though..."

Mazurek: "How are you holding up, madman?"

Bott*: "On the mind?" -> "No more screws are loose in the head."

Bott*: <laugh>

Mazurek: <laugh>

Bott*: "I'm fine"

Bott*: "How did you do?" -> "And how are you?"

Mazurek: "It was hard at times, but we survived it" -> "The journey was treacherous, but we endured."

Zip: "What is this?!"

Candy: "Wait!"

Zip: "UGHH, nasty!"

Mejson: "Catch it!"

Keni: "What the fuck?!"

Rash: "What's going on?"

Rash: "Shiiit..."

Keni: "Wait! Don't fly away!"

Keni: "What the fuck it is?!" -> "The fuck is this?!"

Thanks for the dialogues! Amazing as always!

Along with @MariogD and @SayMeBott, we chose dialogues (sometimes ChordC's, sometimes Animetion24's, sometimes original). Thank you for all your help!

I will update the dialogs and it will be possible to close the scene.

PS. What do you think about those @Animetion24:
https://www.newgrounds.com/dump/item/613d8ba51534d050dee535ab71345be9

@Mejson @MariogD @SayMeBott Hey Mejson,

Below are my edits. Nothing big nor plentiful, just making each sentence flow a little more with the next one:

This isn't over.

<pause>

Not even close...

<pause>

We lost many people.

<pause>

And we don't know how it will end.

<pause>

But we survived...

<pause>

We're cured and ready.

<pause>

We've been given a chance.

<pause>

We will press forward.

<pause>

We will never give up.

<pause>

And remember...

<pause>

If you can fight, then fight.

<pause>

Help each other.

<pause>

Be prepared for anything.

<pause>

Our war has just begun...

Ok, thanks for the improvement.

Woo, Congrats @Plasmarift @ChordC and @Animetion24! :) Well worth the rewards there, and supporting NG at the same time! Nice incentive.

This scene looks/sounds great. Sorry I didn't get to this one earlier, came down with a cold just in time for Christmas, but looks like y'all managed as usual. :) Hope you have a good break too! Merry Christmas! Looking forwarsd to what the next year brings here.