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Reduce 3 - Scene 12 (Planning) - Part I

Posted by Mejson - January 30th, 2022


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Welcome everyone!


What's up? How's the new year? New Year's resolutions / customs? My guys and I decided to divide this scene into two Posters - not only because it's it takes a long time, but also because the content will contain more characters than the allowed limit (per Poster). Well, the scene is certainly interesting and unpredictable, and most of all exciting. Especially thanks to the conflicts between the heroes and the fight... quite unusual, as I have never animated any fight on such a scale. Who would you bet in the match: Mejson vs Keni? :P Is it easy to judge? Or is it obvious? Judge for yourself.


Thank you for helping me handle the whole big start of the scene - @MariogD@SayMeBott, Mazurek. Certainly we squeeze the full potential in this, but there will be more work than I thought XD But you know - more work means better results!


What do you think about it, @Cyberdevil@Animetion24@ChordC@MariogD@SayMeBott, Colizza, XavierDalton, TheAnotherMadnessFan?


Regards,

Mejson


Scene 12 - Versus

Inscription (on black background):

Episode 12
Day 37
(~4 days later)
9:38 AM


Action:

1. The scene begins by the fire with 2 figures sitting on stacked stones. They finish eating breakfast. Keni is on the right and Rash is on the left. After a while, Keni throws the rest of the food into the fire (the fire sparks). He then looks at Rash seriously (squint one’s eyes slightly) and says (not too loud for Rash to hear only): "Ok, let's do this". Rash also grows serious (squint one’s eyes slightly) and nods. Keni gets up and walks a little up and to the left.

2. Rash stands up without saying a word and follows him. The camera follows them. Keni stops a dozen steps before entering the tent (where Bill is lying). Rash goes up and stops next to the big crate (front side) - he stands comfortably as if he was waiting for something (crossing his hands on and props himself up with leg). The camera moves to the right. Right next to it (on the right - front side), MariogD is sitting on a smaller chest and is eating breakfast (a piece of meat).

3. And on the right (from MariogD), on the ground (front side), there is Mazurek (he is also eating breakfast). The camera focuses on Keni. Keni starts talking (firmly, a little louder) turning his head to the guys: "Alright, listen up!". MariogD and Mazurek stop eating and look (with interest) at Keni. Keni continues: "We’re sitting here like bumps on a log, we gotta move, now!". MariogD and Mazurek make surprised faces and then look at each other (neither of them knows anything about it).

4. After a while, the camera moves quickly to the left. On the left side, Bott* approaches (the camera show Bott* when he's close to Rash) and sits down on the crate (on the left side of Rash). The camera focuses on them. Bott* turns his head towards Rash and asks (curious): "What's going on?". Rash turns his head (to him), scolding Bott* a little angry face and says firmly: "Shhh!". Bott* makes a disgruntled face, then turns his head towards Keni.

5. The camera focuses on Keni. Keni says (loudly and firmly): "We're wasting time here!". Then he immediately continues: "You think loitering around like this is gonna help us survive?". MariogD squint one’s eyes slightly. Mazurek raises his eyebrows (surprised). Rash smiles ominously. Bott* smiles amused (takes it like a joke) and says (as if to himself): "Is this some kind of joke?". Nobody answers.

6. Keni continues (loudly and firmly): "Mejson daydreams all the time and he doesn't fucking do anything!". MariogD reacts first (concerned): "What about Bill?". Keni <sighs> when shrugs, then says (softer and calmer): "Losses are inevitable...". Then he continues (firmly and louder): "He's in a coma. Even he knows he wouldn't make it!".

7. Bott* stares at the ground, then looks straight ahead with an unsettling expression (his pupils narrowed) and says (to himself) in a slightly maddened voice: "There is no war without casualties...". They look at Bott*; Rash looks indifferently at him, MariogD is surprised (raises an eyebrow). Mazurek is off-screen (not shown).

8. The camera moves quickly to the right. Unexpectedly, Mejson comes out and asks (interested): "What’s all the racket?". Mazurek, MariogD, Rash look in his direction. Keni ignores him and says (firmly): "There are dead bodies following Mejson!". Mejson squinted one’s eyes. They back looking to Keni. The camera quickly goes to Bott* and zooms in. Bott* looks at Keni with crazy eyes (his pupils are narrowed) and says (crazy voice): "He’s right… and that’s what I like most about Mejson…".

9. Camera moves right to MariogD and Mazurek (also zoom). They both look at Bott*. Mazurek looks calmly (squint one's eyes slightly) and says (calmly): "Bott*'s going nuts again…". MariogD is shocked and only turns his head towards Mazurek. After a moment Mazurek (still looking at Bott*) <sighs> and says (depressed): "Bott* for God's sake calm down...". The camera rapidly go to the right and focuses on Mejson. Mejson is already standing a bit closer, he turns his head towards the boys (MariogD and Mazurek) and asks (anxiously): "Do you think so, too?".

10. The camera moves and zooms in on MariogD. MariogD makes an embarrassed face when he scratches his head and says (thoughtful): "Well, a lot of people have died... but...". The camera quickly moves to Keni, he interrupted MariogD. Keni (shouting firmly): "See!?". Then he adds (firmly): "Even his brother lost faith in him!". The camera returns to MariogD (it brings him closer). MariogD rebels (denies) with an angry face and starts saying (angrily): "That's not what I…".

11. The camera quickly go to Rash (a little to the left), who interrupts him. Rash says (firmly and loudly): "What do the others think?". The camera moves slowly to the right. MariogD has a shocked expression on his face - (pupils are slightly reduced, eyebrows are raised), he raises his hands for a moment in disbelief and says (disbelief): "Dicks…". The camera stops at Mazurek. Mazurek has his eyes closed and his hand to his face, next he says: "Ughh, people these days…".

12. The camera goes to Keni and Mejson. Keni turns his head to Mejson and says directly to him (firmly, calmly and insolently): "Huh! In their eyes you are not as cool as you think". Everyone is looking at Mejson expectantly with curiosity / anxiety without Kani - he smiles maliciously. The camera zooms in on Mejson's head (Mejson's mind). Mejson (side profile) - he looks straight ahead and a little squint one's eyes.

13. Steve's head (front side) appears behind Mejson's head and start moving from behind Mejson's head to the left. Steve has an angry expression (eyebrows down and squint one's eyes) and says (angrily): "Do something! You're out of control!". Mejson looks down with uncertainty face. Steve disappears. Suddenly, he hears Steve's voice (scream): "Now!". Next Mejson looks straight ahead (squint one's eyes so much) and shows his teeth angrily (in his mind). Back to reality.

14. Camera focuses on Mejson. Mejson begins to say (firmly, with concealed anger): "You...". Suddenly he's interrupted by a shout of Delsin (emphatic - off-screen): "Listen up, all of you! I have something to say!". The camera zooms out a bit. From the right side (from behind the tent) comes Delsin, then he stops and turns (with his whole body) to the others and says (firmly, but calmly, confident): "I support our leader!". The camera zooms out and shows most of the characters. Everyone is looking at Delsin with curiosity (except for Rash and Keni because they look with contempt / indifference).

15. The camera quickly zooms in on Rash. Rash quickly breaks the silence and says (firmly and loudly, but indifferently): "Who the fuck are you?!". Delsin's position changes (apart from the camera) - he's leaning against the tent below (supported with his leg, arms crossed - he's looking at the others). The camera quickly moves to Mejson. Mejson says (firmly but solemnly - almost screaming): "Leave him alone, he's also one of us!". The camera focuses on Keni and Mejson. Keni wants to say something, he starts saying (firmly): "Do you even...".

16. Mejson loses his patience and silences Keni - Mejson shudders angrily, leaning forward for a moment and shouting: "Shut up!". Everyone looks at him surprised, also a bit Keni. The camera zooms much more (only on Mejson and Keni). Mejson closes his eyes by bending down a little (more his head), <sighs>, then straightens up, lifting his head up and slowly opening his eyes. Then he says (firmly and firmly, but composure): "Do you want to be a leader?".

17. Then he continues after a small pause (angrily, firmly, and solemnly): "Look at yourself!". Keni squint one's eyes slightly when he reflexively looks down (looks at himself). Then Mejson says firmly but calmly: "You aren't ready...". Keni squint one's eyes much more when he looks at Mejson. Then he continues after another small pause: "You impatient and hot-tempered and more importantly...". Mejson closes his eyes when he makes a pause. The camera zooms in on Mejson's face a little.

18. When Mejson opens his eyes, he squint one's eyes and says (darkly): "I'm better than you...". The camera moves to Mazurek and MariogD (focuses on them). They look at each other in shock. Bott* says excitedly off-screen (crazy): "Yea, my man!". The camera moves to Keni (she focuses on him). Keni is surprised for a moment and then reacts: "Hahahahaha..." (forced / pretend laughter - he shakes and looks up with his eyes closed and his hands on his hips). Then Keni grows serious and says ironically: "Oh, ya know something, my 'leader'?".

19. After a short pause, he adds (maliciously but composure): "At least I haven't lost anyone...". The camera zooms out and focuses on Keni and Mejson. Mejson shudders in anger (squint one’s eyes slightly) and says (angrily, a little provoked): "How dare you?!". Keni smiles extremely maliciously (he noticed that Mejson got pissed off / reacted). Keni crosses his arms (confident) and says especially maliciously: "I wonder, if Steve was here, would he turn his back on you too?". Delsin says (calmly but firmly): "Uncalled for...". Nobody reacts to these words.

20. Mejson points to Keni with his hand shaking (all body shaking a little) pissed off and shouting: "Don't you dare mention his name!". Keni grows serious (squint one's eyes slightly), lowers his hands, then walks over to Mejson without saying a word (at a faster pace). The camera zooms in on the characters (above the waist) as Keni approaches. Mejson lowers his hand as Keni starts to approach and looks at Keni (from up to down and down to up) with a slightly concerned look.

21. Keni stops in front of Mejson's face (close enough), even more squint one's eyes - Keni, then Mejson. Keni says (firmly, in a low voice and a little softer): "Or what?". Mejson shudders angrily (shakes) and yells (furiously): "Shut up!". Keni makes an indifferent face, then turns to the left and goes. Mejson stops shaking (calms down a bit) and watches Keni. Keni softly said to himself: "Heh...". After a while (walking) his eye wanders towards Mejson (does not turn his head) and smiles to himself (squint one's eyes slightly), then says to everyone but most to Mejson (loudly and firmly but without anger): "Fuck Steve!".

22. Mejson leans down, shaking, makes an angry face and screams: "You asshole!". Then, he quickly starts running and lunges at Keni. However, Keni knew perfectly well that it would happen (after all, he provoked it). Mejson, sliding on the ground (on the hands and legs), causing dust himself, curses to himself (quietly and furiously): "Damn!". During the dodge, Keni turned (his whole body towards the viewer - face side) and stepped back (to deeper).

23. Then (Keni) smiles gently for a moment looking at Mejson (down) and then says (loud and amused): "You're so predictable". And then he turns (head) towards the watching characters and says (maliciously): "This is our leader, everyone?!". Everyone is watching the situation in silence (squint one's eyes slightly), except for Rash, who smirks maliciously. And then Keni looks at Mejson rising from the ground and says (with pity): "Pathetic…". Mejson gets up from the ground and looks at Keni from under the bull (squint one's eyes), already composed but still furious. Mejson doesn't say anything.

24. Mejson turns his head towards the basket of spears. Then he comes over from them and pulls one out, then goes and stands in one line - in front of Keni. Bott* (still looking madly) grabs the nearest spear from the basket and tosses it towards Keni, screaming chaotically: "Time for the slaughter!". Keni grabs the spear and says (amused) , taking a fighting stance: "Now we're talking!". Mejson also takes the position. Mazurek says (concerned): "Is this really necessary?". Rash reacts (maliciously) to these words (without taking his eyes off Keni): "Ohh it’s veeerrryy fucking necessary!".

25. Moments later, MariogD shudders and screams (irritated): "Are you out of your mind?!". Mejson (squint one's eyes), staring at Keni, replies (angrily): "Fuck this!". Mejson immediately rushes to Keni (running). Keni does the same (moment after Mejson). They collide with spears and wrestle. Mejson has an angry expression and Keni is amused. After a while, Mejson takes a swing with his head and hits Keni hard (with his head). Keni with <little groan of pain> is thrown back (takes a few steps back) and bleeds from his mouth (has a painful expression on his face).

26. Mejson shouts (firmly, but less angrily): "That's for Steve!". Bott* reacts (with his madness): "Yeah! Go, Mejson!". MariogD surprised (disgusted): "Ohh, shiiit!". Keni straightens up and wipes the blood from his mouth (with his hand), then smiles, then says (amused): "Not bad". Mejson doesn't answer anything. Immediately after Keni's words, Mejson furiously attacks with a spear - swing (from upper), but Keni easily blocks the attack with his spear.

27. Keni then strikes back immediately with a swing (from lower). Mejson blocks and then attacks with a spear - swing (from upper), and Keni jumps quickly back. Keni smiles maliciously, Mejson shows (in anger) clenched teeth, then runs and jumps (hard hit) with spear - swing (from upper). Keni blocks, but you can see in his face that he felt a punch (his smile fades and a hint of anger appears). Keni attacks with spear - thrust (to lower) in the foot (sharp tip of the spear) Mejson.

28. Mejson (starting to sweat on his forehead) makes a slightly concerned face as he fastback steps to avoid piercing the foot. Keni does not waste an opportunity and attacks with spear - thrust (to upper), Mejson again back steps and dodge. However, the spear cuts Mejson's cheek a bit. Mejson looks at the wound worriedly, and Keni smirks. Bott* reacts: "Ouuuu so sharp!". MariogD concerned: "Are you ok, bro?!". Mejson replies quickly (regaining his composure): "It's nothing!".

29. Then, after a short break, both (Keni and Mejson) attack practically simultaneously with his spear - swing (from upper). Their spears collide. Then Mejson charges in and makes a strong attack with a spear - swing (from upper). Keni quickly jumps back and then counterattacks with also strong attack with a spear - swing (from upper). Mejson blocks this blow, but after a while Mejson's leg (more back leg) bends at the knee (Mejson is sweaty on his face).

30. Keni smiles maliciously. Mejson (still with an angry look on his face) withstands the punch (pressure) of Keni. Then Mejson getting up strikes back immediately with a swing (from lower). Keni blocks the strike easily. Both heroes (Keni and Mejson) attack practically simultaneously with his spear - swing (from upper) but Mejson goes closer (Mejson tries to reduce Keni force) and Mejson uses two hands (Keni uses one like normal). Keni takes a step back instinctively.

31. Mejson furiously attacks (shows teeth furiously) with a spear (he uses two hands again) - swing (from upper), Keni steps back (stops smiling, makes a surprised face) under pressure from Mejson. Keni then strikes back immediately with a swing (from lower). Mejson blocks and then attacks with a spear - swing (from upper), and Keni blocks when he steps back again. Next Keni uses the same trick and attacks with a spear - thrust (to lower) in the foot (sharp tip of the spear) Mejson.

32. However, Mejson anticipated this and leaned back (his body), lifting his leg, leaning on his spear. In the next moment Mejson stepped on (stands on it with his leg) the spear of Keni (it’s blocked by Mejson). Mejson quickly puts his weight on the said leg and at the same time, with the energy of the whole body, he pushes his arm back. Observing the situation, Keni finds only time to manage to straighten a bit and look at Mejson's fist, and says (surprised): "What?!". Mejson with the energy of the whole body hit Keni with all his strength in the face while taking his leg off Keni's spear.

33. Keni's head pops back a bit (his face expresses pain, and blood appears from his mouth) with <groan of pain>. On the other hand, Keni's entire body flies back, but after a while Keni regains her balance, leaning on the spear (dust appears) and absorbs the momentum of the blow. At the end, Keni squats on one knee (when he's almost stopped completely). Rash straightens up in surprise (he stretches his clasped arms and stands the other foot on the ground - the propped one before) and reacts (shocked): "Damn. Can hardly believe it...".

34. Also is hear (off-screen) Delsin (pleased): "Well-played, Mr. Mejson!". Everyone (who can be seen) has shocked faces, except Bott* who smiles in his madness, screams: "Impressive!". Mejson stands upright (he has an indifferent expression on his face due to fatigue), <breathing heavily> (a few deep breaths), and then breathing with his mouth closed, but still deep (his arms rise with each breath). Keni spits blood (on the ground), then wipes her mouth with her hand. Then he looks up at Mejson and says (amused): "Not bad...". Keni stands up and grows serious (his gaze is stern), then says (seriously and angrily): "But you have nothing left, old-timer!".

35. Mejson calms down (he's already breathing normally), his expression is angry again. Then he says (darkly and angrily, but tired): "It remains to be seen...". Keni runs to Mejson, after a while Mejson also starts moving, but a bit late (he only takes a few steps). The heroes collide with spears, wrestle for a moment, and then Keni strongly pushes Mejson away. Mejson loses his balance (surprised face) a bit as he (in the dust) slides back (under the impetus) backwards. Keni smirks and continues his charge.

36. Keni attacks (strong - two hands) Mejson with his spear - swing (from upper), Mejson only manages to block. Keni's attack is very strong and Mejson (for a moment) squeezes his eyes shut (in pain) and immediately knocks Mejson down on his knee. Then Keni attacks again (fast, medium attack) with spear - thrust (to upper) with the blunt side of the spear to Mejson's head (Keni is playing, not taking the opponent seriously). Mejson only managed to get up and look (with a moment of horror) at Keni.

37. Mejson's head flies back (in a painful grimace and blood) with <groan of pain>, and Mejson himself leans back (due to the impact) and takes a few steps back. Next Mejson straightens up, leaning on his spear, and then wipes his mouth by hand (with angry face). Bott* screams: "Brutal!". Rash reacts (maliciously): <laughter>. The rest of them look shocked (they are unable to say anything). Keni runs to Mejson. Keni attacks by jumping (strong - two hands) to Mejson with his spear - swing (from upper). Mejson jumps back (dodges the attack) and makes a slightly concerned face.

38. Is heard (off-screen) Delsin (motivating): "Don't give up, Mr. Mejson!". It's possible that Delsin's words fueled Mejson to fight, as Mejson (making a threatening face) runs towards Keni and attacks (strong - two hands) with a spear - swing (from above). Keni blocks the attack and withstands the force of the impact (does not pull back). Keni strikes back immediately with a swing (from lower). Mejson firmly blocks the attack, but then Keni puts his weight on his front (extended) leg and quickly moves forward and props himself with his spear while his other leg kicks Mejson (hard) into the torso (Spartan style).

39. Mejson was by no means ready for such an attack and only managed to look (surprised) at Keni's leg. Mejson flies backwards with great force (he has lost the ground under his feet), then falls to the ground (with a thud) with <groans of pain>. Keni grows serious and goes to Mejson. The camera quickly goes to Bott*, he screams, raising her hands: "This is Sparta!". Rash looks at him blankly (raises an eyebrow). Mazurek (off-screen) reacts - <sighs>, says (tired of Bott* behavior): "Bott*, please...". The camera returns to the fighting.

40. Mejson is rising from the ground (he is propped up with a spear). Behind his back (a few steps) there is a spider cage. Keni drops his spear (he has an angry and disappointed expression on his face). The camera shows the figures from the waist up. Keni walks quickly to Mejson (he's close). Keni stops in front of Mejson (he has just finished getting up). Without a word, Keni tears the spear from Mejson's hand and throws it to the ground. Mejson watches this with surprise. Then Keni grabs Mejson by the shoulders and pushes him hard, until Mejson slaps his back against the spider's cage.

41. The camera zooms in on the characters. Mejson looks angry. Keni is still holding Mejson. Keni says (firmly, angry, disappointed): "You disappointed me!". Mejson doesn't say anything, just looks into Keni's eyes. Keni's expression changes to disappointment and says: "I expected more...". Mejson grabs Keni's hands and quickly pulls them down (he frees himself) and says (firmly and angrily): "Fuck you!". Keni <bursts out laughing> amused, then turns and walks away.

42. Mejson follows him and starts saying (angrily): "You...". However, at this point, Keni turns around (with an angry look on his face) and hits Mejson with a spinning back kick (roundhouse kick). Mejson is hit (painfully eyes and blood), <yells in pain>, flies back (fast) and slams against cage, <moans of pain>. Bott* screams off-screen: "Danse macabre!". MariogD yells (concerned) off-screen: "Hey! That's enough!". Then Mejson slides his back against the cage until he’s sitting on the ground (he has blood on face). Keni looks (disappointed) at Mejson and says: "I'm done with you".

43. Keni turns and walks (right). The camera approaches Mejson (he has a tired and indifferent expression on her face), who turns his head (front side) and looks down, while grabbing the cage with his hand. The camera then zooms in on Mejon's head (Mejson's mind). Mejson has a (front side) face (tired and indifferent) and looks down. Behind Mejson's head, Steve (front side) appears from the right (transparency) and moves to the right. Steve says (disappointed): "Fuck! It didn't go too well...". Mejson looks a little angrily (with his eyes) up and right and thinks (ironically): "Well, you don't say!".

44. And then back down again. Steve closes his eyes when he <sighs>, then opens them and says (his expression changes to firm, as does his voice): "I have an idea, but you have to trust me...". Steve disappears. Mejson looks again (worried): "Do I have a choice?". Steve comes on the other (left) side and says (firmly but gently): "No, not really". Steve disappears. Mejson looks (with his eyes) at Steve (where he has been) and thinks (interested): "Okay, what do you mean?". Steve appears centrally behind Mejson and shifts upwards (his expression unhealthily excited), then says (firmly and darkly): "Give me control...".

45. Mejson raises one eyebrow and lowers the other, looking up (at Steve). After a while, he thinks: "All riiight...". Steve has a firm look on his face and says (darkly but calmly): "Close your eyes...". Mejson closes his eyes with an anxious expression on his face. Steve going to (in) Mejson's head (cool effect). Then Mejson (Steve) eyebrows form going menacingly and a psychic smile appears. Then he slowly opens his eyes - looking straight ahead. Back to reality. Mejson has such an expression on his face as well (in normal reality). Mejson gets up and goes to the right. He then picks up the spears (both) from the ground.

<TO BE CONTINUED>


Light effect:

Normal (midday).


Dialogues:

Keni: "Ok, let's do this"
Keni: "Alright, listen up!"
Keni: "We're sitting here like bumps on a log, we gotta move, now!"
Bott*: "What's going on?"
Rash: "Shhh!"
Keni: "We're wasting time here!"
Keni: "You think loitering around like this is gonna help us survive?"
Bott*: "Is this some kind of joke?"
Keni: "Mejson daydreams all the time and he doesn't fucking do anything!"
MariogD: "What about Bill?"
Keni: <sighs>
Keni: "Losses are inevitable..."
Keni: "He's in a coma. Even he knows he wouldn't make it!"
Bott*: "There is no war without casualties..."
Mejson: "What's all the racket?"
Keni: "There are dead bodies following Mejson!"
Bott*: "He's right… and that’s what I like most about Mejson…"
Mazurek: "Bott*'s going nuts again…"
Mazurek: <sighs>
Mazurek: "Bott* for God’s sake calm down..."
Mejson: "Do you think so, too?"
MariogD: "Well, a lot of people have died... but..."
Keni: "See!?"
Keni: "Even his brother lost faith in him!"
MariogD: "That's not what I…"
Rash: "What do the others think?"
MariogD: "Dicks…"
Mazurek: "Ughh, people these days…"
Keni: "Huh! In their eyes you are not as cool as you think"
Steve: "Do something! You're out of control!"
Steve: "Now!"
Mejson: "You..."
Delsin: "Listen up, all of you! I have something to say!"
Delsin: "I support our leader!"
Rash: "Who the fuck are you?!"
Mejson: "Leave him alone, he's also one of us!"
Keni: "Do you even..."
Mejson: "Shut up!"
Mejson: <sighs>
Mejson: "Do you want to be a leader?"
Mejson: "Look at yourself!"
Mejson: "You aren't ready..."
Mejson: "You impatient and hot-tempered and more importantly..."
Mejson: "I'm better than you..."
Bott*: "Yea, my man!"
Keni: "Hahahahaha..."
Keni: "Oh, ya know something, my 'leader'?"
Keni: "At least I haven't lost anyone..."
Mejson: "How dare you?!"
Keni: "I wonder, if Steve was here, would he turn his back on you too?"
Delsin: "Uncalled for..."
Mejson: "Don’t you dare mention his name!"
Keni: "Or what?"
Mejson: "Shut up!"
Keni: "Heh..."
Keni: "Fuck Steve!"
Mejson: "You asshole!"
Mejson: "Damn!"
Keni: "You're so predictable"
Keni: "This is our leader, everyone?!"
Keni: "Pathetic…"
Bott*: "Time for the slaughter!"
Keni: "Now we're talking!"
Mazurek: "Is this really necessary?"
Rash: "Ohh it’s veeerrryy fucking necessary!"
MariogD: "Are you out of your mind?!"
Mejson: "Fuck this!"
Keni: <little groan of pain>
Mejson: "That's for Steve!"
Bott*: "Yeah! Go, Mejson!"
MariogD: "Ohh, shiiit!"
Keni: "Not bad"
Bott*: "Ouuuu so sharp!"
MariogD: "Are you ok, bro?!"
Mejson: "It's nothing!"
Keni: "What?!"
Keni: <groan of pain>
Rash: "Damn. Can hardly believe it..."
Delsin: "Well-played, Mr. Mejson!"
Bott*: "Impressive!"
Mejson: <breathing heavily>
Keni: "Not bad..."
Keni: "But you have nothing left, old-timer!"
Mejson: "It remains to be seen..."
Mejson: <groan of pain>
Bott*: "Brutal!"
Rash: <laughter>
Delsin: "Don't give up, Mr. Mejson!"
Mejson: <groans of pain>
Bott*: "This is Sparta!"
Mazurek: <sighs>
Mazurek: "Bott*, please..."
Keni: "You disappointed me!"
Keni: "I expected more..."
Mejson: "Fuck you!"
Keni: <bursts out laughing>
Mejson: "You..."
Mejson: <yells in pain>
Mejson: <moans of pain>
Bott*: "Danse macabre!"
MariogD: "Hey! That's enough!"
Keni: "I'm done with you"
Steve: "Fuck! It didn't go too well..."
Mejson: "Well, you don't say!"
Steve: <sighs>
Steve: "I have an idea, but you have to trust me..."
Mejson: "Do I have a choice?"
Steve: "No, not really"
Mejson: "Okay, what do you mean?"
Steve: "Give me control..."
Mejson: "All riiight..."
Steve: "Close your eyes..."

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Comments

Definitely most ambitious scene in Reduce Saga. I have a lot of fun creating it!

I don't thing that the most ambitious, but certainly the most difficult to plan and execute. I have two days off. After the morning gym I will work on planning. I am currently at point 50.

Which scene do you find more ambitious? For me the ants ambush is comparable but still seems to be a lesser scene.

It's hard for me to say, each one is unique and perfectly planned - we do not bore the viewer in any of them :) THIS is thanks to the merit of the entire team.

Was not expecting that Sparta reference. XD This is one intense fight... feels like Mejson probably will win this one way or another, being main protagonist and leader and all, and even more so now that the trial's been overcome; he's getting back on his feet for a second attempt... really split the scene at the cliffhanger here though. :)

Did make some ambitious resolutions for the New Year btw but not much time to work on them yet! How about you/everyone?

Great scene.

Why? :P Very popular in Poland and we enjoy it! XD

Yes, the most intense fight we've ever planned :P

Well, it may looks like that... but what is your certainty? :P We don't approach it this way - the leader is the undefeated leader XD Don't be so sure XD

Well my resolutions are average, but I try to XD

Thanks!

Well I just haven't heard it in a long time. XD It's a classic!

Ahh is it possible this may not go the way it seems after all?! All the more exciting then! :D My certainly is potentially unjustified for sure, it's just how it seems to be to me. Though it's nice when things don't go as you expect them too sometimes it'd be a shame if he lost his role as a leader...

Maybe they're a bit more realistic than mine though that way. :) Might be a good thing. As long as we have the required resolve it's all a steady stream of incremental improvement!!!

Yes, a classic! Sometimes it happens XD

How does it seem? : P What do you think? Yes, very exciting! xD

Well, possible: P Cool :)

Hehehehe, well... who knows :P Certainly the viewer will not predict what will happen XD

Indeed!

"Listen up!" ==> “Alright, listen up!

"We're sitting like a bump on the log,  we got to move!" ==> “We’re sitting like bumps on a log, we gotta move!”

"You think 'this crap' is going to help you survive, don't you?" ==> “You think loitering around like this is gonna help us survive?”

"Mejson daydreams all the time and he doesn't fucking do anything!" ==> “All Mejson does is daydreaming about God knows what and doing absolutely nothing!”

"Losses are indispensable..." ==> “Losses are inevitable”

"He's in a coma, and he's not going to get out of this!" ==> “He’s in a coma, ain’t no way he’s getting out of this!”

"What is this congregation?" ==> “What’s all the racket?”

"He's right and that's what I like most about Mejson..." ==> “He’s right… and that’s what I like most about Mejson….” (Adds space after saying, He’s right, so that it sounds more natural)

"Bott* goes crazy again..." ==> “Bott*’s going nuts again…”

"It's not what..." ==> “That’s not what I…”

"What people these days..." ==> “Ughh, people these days…”

"Huh! In their eyes you are not as cool as you think" ==> "Huh! Did you see that Mejson, no one believes in you anymore…”

"Do something! You're out of control!" ==> “Do something! You’re just gonna let him walk after that?!”

"Now!" ==> “What are you waiting for? Show him who’s boss!”

"Hey! I want to say something too!" ==> “Hey! Cut it! I have something to say…”

"Serious mistake..." ==> “Big Mistake…”

"Don't even mention him!" ==> “Don’t you dare mention his name!”

"Or what?" ==> “Oh yeah? What are you gonna do about it?”

"Damn!" ==> “Goddammit!”

"That's the leader?" ==> “You see that everyone? That’s your leader right there”

"Now we talking!" ==> “Now we’re talking!”

"It's really necessary?" ==> “Is it really necessary?”

"Sooo fucking necessary!" ==> “Oh it’s veeerrryy fuckin’ necessary!”

"Are you crazy?!" ==> “Are you out of your mind?!”

"Fuck this!" ==> “Let’s do this!”

"Sooo sharply!" ==> “ouuuu so sharp!”

Keni regains her balance ==> Keni’s a girl lol

then wipes her mouth with her hand ==> girl Keni XD

"Quite well, but..." ==> “Not bad, but…”

"This is your limit, old man!" ==> “You’ve reached your limit, old man!”

"Rough!" ==> “Ooohhhh, that’s gotta hurt!”

The camera quickly goes to Bott*, he screams, raising her hands ==> gender ambiguity

"You disappointed me!" ==> “You disappoint me…” (uses present tense, cause the even is still going)

"Hey! That's enough!" ==> “Alright! That’s enough!”

That’s all, the rest of the dialogue is great for me.

Thanks, great dialogues :P Nice ideas!

@Cyberdevil I’ve been preparing for my future throughout the whole January. Looking for flight schools, looking for sound design courses and learning how to organize your money.

Also, I’ve been working on the reduce song that hopefully @Cyberdevil can sing/rap to. You can collab with other singers if you want too. Hopefully the instrumental can be done this February.

Uuuuuuu quite important and meaningful :) With sound design too? Uhuhmmm :)

Yes! This song sounds amazing! :D

Always a nice surprise when it does. :D

Well I'm not sure what to think at this point. XD I still suspect Mejson (with Steve's help) will probably come out unscathed after this one, but not so certain now...

For sure!

It's nice that there is a surprise!

Oh dear, unscathed? <pause> well... XD

@ChordC ah that sounds awesome. :D Looking forward to it; hope I'm ready to go whenever you're ready!

Flight schools and sound design courses?! Unexpectedly diverse fields there! Been attending a lot of health webinars this month myself; trying to get my life in order a bit too. Best of luck with those endeavors!

Hey guys! Giving it a quick read, I do enjoy the dynamic of the characters and the build up to the contest.

Will provide more scene-by-scene observations later this week; I'm quite busy during the week's start right now and will try to find a moment probably by evening my time tomorrow.

Meanwhile, here's some dialogue suggestions (A lot of it is advocating @ChordC 's suggestions too):

Keni: "Ok, let's do this"
Keni: "Listen up!"

Keni: "We're sitting like a bump on the log, we got to move!" -> "We're sitting like bumps on a log. We need to move on!"

Bott*: "What's going on?"
Rash: "Shhh!"
Keni: "We're wasting time here!"

Keni: "You think 'this crap' is going to help you survive, don't you?" -> "Do you really think sitting on your asses will help you survive?

Bott*: "Is this some kind of joke?"

Keni: "Mejson daydreams all the time and he doesn't fucking do anything!" -> "Aside from entertaining us with his daydreams, he's not doing anything!"

MariogD: "What about Bill?"
Keni: <sighs>
Keni: "Losses are indispensable..." -> "Losses are inevitable..."

Keni: "He's in a coma, and he's not going to get out of this!" -> "He's in a coma. Even he knows he wouldn't make it!"

Bott*: "There is no war without casualties..."

Mejson: "What is this congregation?" -> "What's this meeting about?"

Keni: "There are dead bodies following Mejson!"
Bott*: "He's right and that's what I like most about Mejson..."

Mazurek: "Bott* goes crazy again..." -> "Bott*'s speaking nonsense again."

Mazurek: <sighs>
Mazurek: "Bott* for God’s sake calm down..."
Mejson: "Do you think so, too?"
MariogD: "Well, a lot of people have died... but..."
Keni: "See!?"
Keni: "Even his brother lost faith in him!"

MariogD: "It's not what..." -> "That's not what I m-"

Rash: "What do the others think?"
MariogD: "Dicks…"

Mazurek: "What people these days..." -> "What have people become these days...?"

Keni: "Huh! In their eyes you are not as cool as you think"
Steve: "Do something! You're out of control!"
Steve: "Now!"
Mejson: "You..."

Delsin: "Hey! I want to say something too!" -> "Listen up, all of you! I have something to say!"

Delsin: "I support him, he is our leader!" -> "I support our leader!"

Rash: "Who the fuck are you?!"
Mejson: "Leave him alone, he's also one of us!"
Keni: "Do you even..."
Mejson: "Shut up!"
Mejson: <sighs>
Mejson: "Do you want to be a leader?"
Mejson: "Look at yourself!"
Mejson: "You aren't ready..."

Mejson: "You impatient and hot-tempered and more importantly..." -> "You're impatient, beyond hot-tempered, and most importantly..."

Mejson: "I'm better than you..."
Bott*: "Yea, my man!"
Keni: "Hahahahaha..."
Keni: "Oh, ya know something, my 'leader'?"
Keni: "At least I haven't lost anyone..."
Mejson: "How dare you?!"

Keni: "I wonder if Steve would have thought the same?" -> "I wonder, if Steve was here, would he turn his back on you too?"

Delsin: "Serious mistake..." -> "Uncalled for..."

Mejson: "Don't even mention him!"
Keni: "Or what?"
Mejson: "Shut up!"
Keni: "Heh..."
Keni: "Fuck Steve!"
Mejson: "You asshole!"
Mejson: "Damn!"
Keni: "You're so predictable"

Keni: "That's the leader?" -> "This is our leader, everyone?!"

Keni: "Pathetic…"
Bott*: "Time for the slaughter!"

Keni: "Now we talking!" -> Now we're talking!"

Mazurek: "It's really necessary?" -> "Is this really necessary?"

Rash: "Sooo fucking necessary!" -> "Super fucking necessary!!"

MariogD: "Are you crazy?!"

Mejson: "Fuck this!" -> "Fuck you!"

Keni: <little groan of pain>
Mejson: "That's for Steve!"
Bott*: "Yeah! Go, Mejson!"
MariogD: "Ohh, shiiit!"
Keni: "Not bad"

Bott*: "Sooo sharply!" -> "Oooooo, sharp!"

MariogD: "Are you ok, bro?!"
Mejson: "It's nothing!"
Keni: "What?!"
Keni: <groan of pain>

Rash: "Damn, impossible..." -> "Damn. Can hardly believe it..."

Delsin: "Well-played, Mr. Mejson!"
Bott*: "Impressive!"
Mejson: <breathing heavily>

Keni: "Quite well, but..." -> "Not bad..."

Keni: "This is your limit, old man!" -> "But you have nothing left, old-timer!"

Mejson: "It remains to be seen..." -> "That remains to be seen."

Mejson: <groan of pain>

Bott*: "Rough!" -> "Brutal!"

Rash: <laughter>
Delsin: "Don't give up, Mr. Mejson!"
Mejson: <groans of pain>
Bott*: "This is Sparta!"
Mazurek: <sighs>
Mazurek: "Bott*, please..."

Keni: "You disappointed me!" -> "You disappoint me, Mejson!"

Keni: "I expected more..."
Mejson: "Fuck you!"
Keni: <bursts out laughing>
Mejson: "You..."
Mejson: <yells in pain>
Mejson: <moans of pain>
Bott*: "Danse macabre!"
MariogD: "Hey! That's enough!"
Keni: "I'm done with you"
Steve: "Fuck! It didn't go too well..."
Mejson: "Well, you don't say!"
Steve: <sighs>
Steve: "I have an idea, but you have to trust me..."
Mejson: "Do I have a choice?"
Steve: "No, not really"

Mejson: "Okay, what do you mean?" -> "Alright, what's your idea?"

Steve: "Give me control..."

Mejson: "All riiight..." -> "Very well."

Steve: "Close your eyes..."

@ChordC and @Animetion24 thanks for your help. We will decide with @SayMeBott @Mazurek and @Mejson which one to use.

Hey there, guys!

I really started to think that if this scene planning is that good, I cannot imagine how great this movie of this saga can be!

Mejson, I always saw you and MariogD confront each other in CS series, so I cannot quite guess how your new rival Keni can behave and move against you. It's also a miracle to see you and MariogD and others surviving together at all costs! I will create time someday to read the whole transcript of this scene. :)

Regards,

- MATRVG

Hey homie!

Well... fucking good! XD This season is going to be so good that 4 out of 5 is the minimum! Well planned and executed, and long :P

Not only in CS XD My brother and I sometimes have different views :P Well... you will see in the distant future. :) The whole scene? Well... the others aren't too small either XD

PS. I would love to see you in my fans :) How's your animation?

Regards,
Mejson

@Mejson

I think Reduce sana deserve 6/5 score lol

You are planning a scene for weeks. What about me? Er... What I did as teaser clips just took me 20 minutes to plan them xD ZERO JOKE! I woke up for bathroom, sit down on closet and planned 45 clips. After that, I slept. 4 hours later, I went to work xD

If God graces, I will keep being your fan, like ı was when I was child :) I have stopped temporarily because of overtime working. But I will start again.

Regards,

MATRVG

No, don't overdo it XD I think in reasonable ranges.

Yes, we are planning 'THIS' scene a long time, I'm going to finish today :P
It's kind of sparingly :) That's good, you'll be able to move on to animating. I understand :)
Remember that at a later age you will not be able to do that anymore XD I had this too :P

The way he gave it, you can click 'FALLOWING' and you will! xD