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Reduce 3 - Scene 12 (Planning) - Part II

Posted by Mejson - February 6th, 2022


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Welcome everyone!


It's been a week since the last Poster, but there aren't many of them in this year XD I'm glad we managed to finish it! This is the most important :) Uhhh yeeeeaaa :)


And now attention! Attention! It's time for the awaited day! <Fanfares and even more confetti> Together with the crew we managed to finish Scene 12 (First Version) :D Honestly, it was a particularly difficult scene and it lasted over a month! I am so happy about it!


During the creation of the scene, no animal or human was hurt XD Working with the crew, I learned patience and understanding. Spotting the positives from my brother's unexpected ideas XD Thanks for your help designing the scene! @MariogD@SayMeBott@Mazurek. Your help is always indispensable and needed! Not only for this scene, but for everyone! And when it comes to the scene itself, you guys came up with a great start, I didn't have a good idea and I mainly focused my efforts on the fight of the heroes. I found this scene amazing! I know that it will take a long time to create it, but like the whole Reduce 3 - it's worth it!


What do you think about it, @Cyberdevil@Animetion24@ChordC@MariogD@SayMeBott@Colizza@XavierDalton@MATRVG?


Regards,

Mejson


Scene 12 - Versus

Inscription (on black background):

Episode 12
Day 37
(~4 days later)
9:38 AM


Action:

<CONTINUATION>

46. Keni walks in front of him, Mejson stops smiling for a moment and says (firmly but gently): "You shouldn't turn your back to your opponent". Bott* yells off-screen: "He's resurrected!". Keni stops and says (surprised): "What?!". His facial expression showed surprise for a moment. Delsin yells off-screen (no one responds to that): "I knew you had it in you, Mr. Mejson!". Then he quickly turns, and next he squint one's eyes and lowers his eyebrows and says (embittered): "What's so funny?!". Mejson doesn't answer.

47. Keni looks at Mejson from top to bottom as scratches his head and says (calmly, as if to himself): "Heh, must’ve hit him too hard…". Suddenly, Mejson throws a spear at him, which sobers Keni (he grabs the spear). Mejson says (confidently, but calmly): "We're not finished yet!". Keni regains his humor <cynical laugh> and says (amused): "Still standing, old man?". And then he continues (when he bends down a bit) says (strong): "Bring it on!". Mejson starts to run (smiling maliciously), and after a while also Keni (also smiling). Keni runs with the intention of hitting the spears (collision) and then landing a blow (e.g. from the head).

48. Nothing could be more wrong. When heroes are close to each other, Mejson unexpectedly makes a slide (he stretches the first leg and bends the second). Keni is surprised, helplessly holding a spear in both hands just watching. In subsequent fractions of a second, Mejson attacks with a spear - thrust (from lower) - with the sharp point of the spear and then says (firmly but amused): "Heads up!". Keni dodges (with horror in his eyes) - he takes a step back while leaning back. Mejson gets up quickly, taking a step forward and picking up the spear (at the same moment). Keni steps back again (still in horror).

49. Mejson attacks (strong - two hands) with his spear - swing (from upper) taking a step forward. Keni, backing away, blocks the attack. Keni withstands the pressure (force), then glares at Mejson and says (firmly): "My turn!". Keni pushes Mejson with his spear (with a strong thrust of both arms), Mejson slides back (without moving his legs) a bit (the smile fades from his face as he is probably concentrating). Keni takes a step forward and strikes back immediately with a swing (from lower). Mejson blocks this attack.

50. They are both serious (focused). Keni raises his spear, Mejson does the same (moments later). They attack (strong - two hands) with his spears - swing (from upper). They wrestle for a while. Then Keni attacks (strong - two hands) with his spears - swing (from upper). Mejson takes a step towards Keni when Keni prepares a swing. Then, as Keni's spear moves down (he attacks), Mejson makes a dodge (he rotates all body to the front side and steps back - like Keni in the start fight). Then Mejson smirks as he takes a side-step (towards Keni) and hits Keni's elbows in the face. Keni's face pops out (blood and a grimace of pain) and he <groan of pain> as he takes a few steps back.

51. Mejson faces Keni (whole body position) again and says (in an amused voice): "You had something on your face" then smiles again. After a while, Keni catches his balance and leans forward as he wipes his face (with his hand), then says (a bit irritated): "I'll make you regret saying that…". Keni runs first, and a moment later Mejson. Suddenly, Keni starts to slide and prepare for a punch from above. Mejson does the same, only preparing the punch from below. They both perform attacks - swings with a spear with one hand (weaker attack). The spears collide.

52. Then they both attack with a strong attack from two hands. Mejson swings attack from the top, and Keni swings from the bottom. The spears collide and the heroes wrestle for a while. Mejson loses his smile, while Keni loses the opposite (smiles maliciously). Mejson withstood (attack's force). Then Mejson strikes back immediately with a swing (from lower). Keni blocks easily. Then Keni attacks (strong - two hands) with his spears - swing (from upper). Mejson blocks, they struggle for a moment. Then Mejson squats under the pressure (he makes a worried face), he also lowers his head (he has an indifferent expression on his face).

53. Keni deals off, picks up the spear (for a thrust with the sharp side) and says (confident but calm): "You're done!". As Keni says this, Mejson looks at Keni and smirks (he doesn't raise his head). Then Mejson drops his spear (on the ground in front of him) and quickly stands up, quickly runs and jumps, hits Keni's torso with knee. Keni flies backward (he lost the ground) with a painful expression on his face and <moan of pain> (off the screen). Delsin off-screen (pleased): "Excellent job, Mr. Mejson!". Rash yells (angry): "Hey! That's cheating!". Bott* off-screen (crazy): "Shut up, Rash! That was awesome!".

54. Mejson crouches down, then picks up his spear and stands up. He walks right (towards Keni) and says (loud and confident): "Who's predictable now?!". The camera zooms in on Mejson, who smiles (as before). Suddenly he hears Keni scream (very pissed off): "You fuckin'…". And after a while he adds (angry): "Die!". The camera zooms in on Mejson. Mejson stops, his face surprised. Then he starts running, suddenly sliding, and a spear appears in front of him. The camera zooms in on this event and time slows down considerably. Mejson's face is tightly focused and concerned as he dodges (leans back when he slides) in slow motion.

55. The spear passes Mejson's head. Time returns to normal. Bott* off-screen (crazy): "Whoah!". MariogD yells off-screen (frustrated): "What are you doing?!". Mejson straightens up and makes a furious face. He then points to Keni with his hand (shaking his hand) and yells (angry): "You've crossed the line, Keni!". Then he continues (firmly) lowering his hand and taking the position: "It’s over! I'll take you down!". Then it runs right (towards Keni). Camera follows Mejson (approximate). Mejson runs up to the place with a firepit. Keni stands up, looking furiously at Mejson (Keni was crouched behind the firepit), and in his hand he holds a burning stick (from the fire).

56. Mejson glares at Keni's hand (his fire-stick) and then at Keni's face. Keni starts running towards Mejson (left). Mejson grabs the spear with two hands and prepares to block. Keni without stop (slide) attacks with a fire-stick - swing (from upper). Keni has an angry expression face (shows his teeth in anger). Mejson blocks the attack by simultaneously leaning back (especially the head to avoid fire). Mejson has a slightly concerned expression on his face. Then Keni starts to step (a few) forward and waves the fire-stick from top to bottom and then up again. Mejson steps back, leaning back (to avoid fire).

57. Then Keni attacks again with a fire-stick - swing (from upper). Mejson also blocks (avoiding fire). Unexpectedly, Keni grabs Mejson's spear and moves closer to him. Almost at the same time, Keni attacks with a fire-stick - swing (from upper) into Mejson's head. Mejson sees it (terrified expression on his face), lets go of his spear (with one hand) and quickly covers his face with it. The attack of the fire-stick is strong because the stick breaks, and Mejson makes <groans of pain>, releases the spear and takes a few steps back and squats (to regain balance).

58. Bott* off-screen (crazy): "Holy fire, bless him!". MariogD off-screen yells (frustrated): "Stop this madness!". Rash off-screen yells (firmly) to MariogD: "Don't be such a pussy!". MariogD off-screen reacts (firmly): "Fuck off!". After a moment of composure Mejson extinguishes the fire (from the forearm) with the other hand. Meanwhile, Keni releases the broken stick, straightens up and looks at Mejson smiling extremely maliciously, then says (maliciously): "Feeling warm enough?". Mejson stands up slowly (without saying anything), and hatred appears on his face (shows his teeth furiously) and his body trembles.

59. Then Mejson says (furious): "I’ll wreck you, bitch!". Keni replies (confident, malicious): "I'd like to see that!". Mejson starts running towards Keni. Keni (confident) attacks with a spear - thrust (to upper), but Mejson dodges - turns his whole body (front side to viewer) approaching Keni, grabs the spear with one hand and hits Keni in the face with the other hand. Keni's face pops back, <moan of pain> (and his body shudders) and blood appears. Then Mejson immediately hits Keni with his leg (standing in the front side) in the torso. Keni releases his spear, <groans of pain> and flies back (off the screen).

60. Mejson straightens up, turns his whole body sideways (as usual) and says (angrily): "Are you done looking?!". Rash off-screen yells (in disbelief): "How is that possible?!". Mejson starts walking to the right (towards Keni) - shown for a moment. The camera moves to the right (and zooms in). Keni gets up slowly from the ground, has a shocked expression (looks at the ground), trembles and says (shocked): "What's happened?!". Everyone looks at Keni in surprise. Only Rash has a disappointed expression on his face and says: "Keni, get your shit together!". Keni doesn't react to these words.

61. The camera moves to the left. Mejson is on the left side (next to the spear stand) and walking to the right (he stops after a while). Mejson's mood improved as he smiles maliciously. Everyone is looking at Mejson with curiosity, only Rash looks disgusted. MariogD is the first (a bit worried) to says: "Are you ok, bro?". Mejson replies (confident): "I've never felt better!" - still looking at Keni. Bott* comments (pleased, but less crazy): "That's the spirit!". Unexpectedly, Keni's off-screen voice is heard (amused): "How lovely!". Everyone is looking at him in amazement. Mejson stops smiling and squint one's eyes.

62. The camera shows Keni and Mejson. Keni smiles, then asks (maliciously): "What exactly happened to your eye?". Mejson shudders slightly and replies (gruffly): "None of your business!". Keni raises his head and shakes his shoulders when he <laughs>. After a while, he grows serious, squint one's eyes and says (angrily and maliciously): "You'll never see me again!". Mejson raises an eyebrow (in incomprehension). Mazurek says (worried): "I have a bad feeling about this...". MariogD looks at him uncertainly. Rash smiles maliciously. Keni runs to Mejson. Mejson takes positions (grabs the spear with both hands) and makes an angry face.

63. When Keni is close, he slides, leans, and tilts his arm back. Then he leans forward and hits Mejson in the face (healthy eye). At the same time, Mejson makes a thrust with his spear and cuts Keni's cheek (not too deep), <hiss of pain>. Mejson's head snaps back, <groan of pain>, and he himself leans back sharply (under the influence of impact) and takes a few steps back quickly. Keni straightens up and looks (with his eye) at the slit cheek, then squints one's eyes slightly, next he looks at Mejson for a moment. Keni turns (whole body) to the right (head to right) and holds out his hand, someone throws a spear at him, which Keni catches.

64. Then he turns back to Mejson. At the time Mejson leans forward, leaning on his spear, then Mejson touches self face (in the place where he has a good eye) and <hiss of pain>. Mejson's eye is a little red, and under his eye delicate swollen beginnings (it begins to grow over time). He then shows his teeth angrily looking at Keni. Keni smiles maliciously. Mejson (without hesitating) runs to Keni and attacks again with a spear - swing (from upper). Keni blocks the attack, the heroes wrestle for a while. Then Keni strikes back immediately with a swing (from lower).

65. Next both (Keni and Mejson) attack (one hand - average attack) practically simultaneously with his spear - swing (from upper). Then Mejson attacks again with a spear - swing (from upper), and Keni jumps back (avoids the act). At this point, Mejson's eye has already swollen (strongly). Next Mejson attacks with a spear - thrust (to upper) with both hands. Keni leans back slightly as Mejson's attack is inaccurate (missed the target). Then Mejson straightens up and props himself up with his spear. He bows his head as the other hand touches eye and says (furious): "Fuck, I can't see shit!".

66. Keni raises his head and shakes his shoulders when he <laughs>. Mejson shows his teeth furiously. Then Keni grows serious, squint one's eyes and says (firmly and dryly): "I told you...". Mejson replies (furious): "You cheeky bastard!". Then without any warning Keni attacks (strong - two hands) again with a spear - swing (from upper). He hits Mejson in the head, <moan of pain>, Mejson grabs the spear with both hands when he crouches under the impact and his head falls down. Moments later, blood flows from under the hair (down the face). Then Keni strikes immediately with a swing (from lower).

67. It hits Mejson's face, <moan of pain>, Mejson stands up under the impact, his head flies back (blood from around his mouth appears). Mejson releases his spear and steps back. Keni lets go of his spear (his eyes narrow like a psychopath's), runs to Mejson and grabs his arm (with one hand), and takes a swing with the other hand. Then Keni hits Mejson on the mouth (punch from below). Mejson's head snaps back (along with blood from his mouth), <moan of pain>. MariogD yells off-screen (terrified): "Keni, stop it!". Delsin yells off-screen (angry): "Let him go!".

68. Then Mejson's head drops as Keni takes another swing. This time he hits straight ahead, Mejon's head turns to the front side, <groans of pain>, blood gushes out. Keni then takes a step back and hits from the top (on Mejson's head) while releasing Mejson's arm. Mejson <groan of pain>, hit to the ground, splashing blood on ground (where her head fell) on impact. Mejson passes out. Keni crouches next to Mejson, picks up the spear, and then is about to stab it through Mejson's head. The camera moves characters away (previously it was focused on heroes).

69. Mr. Mate stands behind Keni, grabs and tears the spear from Keni's hand (throws it to the ground) and says (firmly): "Enough is enough!". Keni then turns around, then stands up and turns (with all her body) to Mr. Mate. Keni has a shocked expression (not crazy anymore). Mr. Mate angrily cross his arms and asks (firmly): "You wanna kill him? You gotta through me first…". Keni looks down at the ground as he scratches his head and makes an embarrassed expression (his pupils narrow). Keni explains (hesitantly): "No, I...". Mr. Mate squints one's eyes. Keni straightens up and says louder (concerned): "We're leaving!". Keni turns left and walks quickly (left).

70. Mr. Mate watches Keni walk away. In the meantime, other heroes run up (they are close when Keni moves away). Camera close-up on Mejson. MariogD runs up first (he has a terrified expression on his face) and crouches behind Mejson - on the left (closer to Mejson's legs) and yells (anxiously) looking at Mejson: "Brother, stay with me!". And after a while (sadly): "It's all my fault…". Delsin comes a moment later and crouches down in front of Mejson (with his back to the viewer) and says (firmly): "Mr. Mejson!". In the meantime, Rash walks (behind the characters) with a brisk step to the left with an indifferent expression on his face looking at the characters (next to Mejson).

71. The camera moves a little to the right. Bott* crouches next to Mejson's head (sideways to the viewer). Bott* raises Mejson's hand (the one he has in front of him) and then checks his pulse (with his free hand). MariogD asks (concerned): "Is he alive?!". Bott* says (sadly): "Yeah, he's still got a pulse". Then he looks up (raises his head) and says (sadly): "Look how they massacred my boy...". The three heroes look sadly at Mejson. Suddenly, Mazurek goes left (he has a disappointed expression on his face) after the characters (he wants to sneak out without a word).

72. MariogD notices this (turns his head) and asks (surprised): "Where the hell are you going?!". Then he continues (firmly): "We need you!". Mazurek stops (turns his head to MariogD), <sighs> as he shrugs. MariogD still looks on Mazurek. Then Mazurek says (disappointed): "I can't leave those idiots alone…". Mr. Mate goes closer to Mazurek and says (surprised): "Are going to stay with those barbarians?". Delsin off-screen (firmly): "Mr. Mejson, we're here to help you!". Mazurek says (seriously): "Keni helped me escape the ambush… and he's right… it’s time to move on…". MariogD replies (sadly): "I understand…" and looks at Mejson. Mazurek turns around and leave. Bott* screams off-screen (a little sarcastic): "Good luck with them!". Blackout.


Light effect:

Normal (midday).


Dialogues:

Mejson: "You shouldn't turn your back to your opponent"
Bott*: "He's resurrected!"
Keni: "What?!"
Delsin: "I knew you had it in you, Mr. Mejson!"
Keni: "What's so funny?!"
Keni: "Heh, must’ve hit him too hard…"
Mejson: "We're not finished yet!"
Keni: <cynical laugh>
Keni: "Still standing, old man?"
Keni: "Bring it on!"
Mejson: "Heads up!"
Keni: "My turn!"
Keni: <groan of pain>
Mejson: "You had something on your face"
Keni: "I'll make you regret saying that…"
Keni: "You're done!"
Keni: <moan of pain>
Delsin: "Excellent job, Mr. Mejson!"
Rash: "Hey! That's cheating!"
Bott*: "Shut up, Rash! That was awesome!"
Mejson: "Who's predictable now?!"
Keni: "You fuckin'…"
Kein: "Die!"
Bott*: "Whoah!"
MariogD: "What are you doing?!"
Mejson: "You've crossed the line, Keni!"
Mejson: "It’s over! I'll take you down!"
Mejson: <groans of pain>
Bott*: "Holy fire, bless him!"
MariogD: "Stop this madness!"
Rash: "Don't be such a pussy!"
MariogD: "Fuck off!"
Mejson: "Feeling warm enough?"
Mejson: "I’ll wreck you, bitch!"
Keni: "I'd like to see that!"
Keni: <moan of pain>
Keni: <groans of pain>
Mejson: "Are you done looking?!"
Rash: "How is that possible?!"
Keni: "What's happened?!"
Rash: "Keni, get your shit together!"
MariogD: "Are you ok, bro?"
Mejson: "I've never felt better!"
Bott*: "That's the spirit!"
Keni: "How lovely!"
Keni: "What exactly happened to your eye?"
Mejson: "None of your business!"
Keni: <laughs>
Keni: "You'll never see me again!"
Mazurek: "I have a bad feeling about this..."
Keni: <hiss of pain>
Mejson: <groan of pain>
Mejson: <hiss of pain>
Mejson: "Fuck, I can't see shit!"
Keni: <laughs>
Keni: "I told you..."
Mejson: "You cheeky bastard!"
Mejson: <moan of pain>
Mejson: <moan of pain>
Mejson: <moan of pain>
MariogD: "Keni, stop it!"
Delsin: "Let him go!"
Mejson: <groans of pain>
Mejson: <groan of pain>
Mr. Mate: "Enough is enough!"
Mr. Mate: "You wanna kill him? You gotta through me first…"
Keni: "No, I..."
Keni: "We're leaving!"
MariogD: "Brother, stay with me!"
MariogD: "It’s all my fault…"
Delsin: "Mr. Mejson!"
MariogD: "Is he alive?!"
Bott*: "Yeah, he’s still got a pulse"
Bott*: "Look how they massacred my boy..."
MariogD: "Where the hell are you going?!"
MariogD: "We need you!"
Mazurek: <sighs>
Mazurek: "I can’t leave those idiots alone…"
Mr. Mate: "Are going to stay with those barbarians?"
Delsin: "Mr. Mejson, we're here to help you!"
Mazurek: "Keni helped me escape the ambush… and he's right… it’s time to move on…"
MariogD: "I understand…"
Bott*: "Good luck with them!"

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Finally scene is over! I’m looking forward to see this scene animated
P.S the next scenes have to be shorter :p

Hehehe... well XD You still have to wait, because animating this scene will takes a long time. :P

We don't stick to templates, nothing "has to" :)

Mejson: "shouldn't turn your back to your opponent" ==> "You shouldn't turn your back on your opponent"

Bott*: "He's resurrected!"

Keni: "What?!" ==> “The hell?!”
Delsin: "I knew you'd be back, Mr. Mejson!" ==> “I knew I could count on you, Mr. Mejson!”
Keni: "Why are you so happy?!" ==> “What’re you on about?!”
Keni: "I must hit him too hard..." ==> “Heh, must’ve hit him too hard…”

Mejson: "We're not finished yet!"

Keni: "You want more?" ==> <cynical laugh>, “Still standing, old man?”
Keni: "C'mon!" ==> “Bring it on!”

Mejson: "Heads up!"

Keni: "My turn!" ==> “ ‘that all you got, old timer?!”

Keni: <groan of pain>

Mejson: "You had something on face" ==> “You had something on your face”
Keni: "You're starting to tease me..." ==> “I’ll make you regret saying that…”
Keni: "You're done!" ==> “You’re done for!”

Keni: <moan of pain>
Delsin: "Nice one, Mr. Mejson!"
Rash: "Hey! That's cheating!"
Bott*: "Shut up, Rash! Mejson rocks!"

Mejson: "And who is predictable now?!"==> “Who’s predictable now”
Keni: "I hate you!" ==> “You fuckin’…”

Kein: "Die!"
Bott*: "Whoah!"
MariogD: "What are you doing?!"

Mejson: "You crossed the line, Keni!" ==> “You’ve crossed the line, Keni!”

Mejson: "It’s over! I'll take you down!"
Mejson: <groans of pain>
Bott*: "Holy fire, bless him!"
MariogD: "Stop this madness!"

Rash: "Don't be so pussy!" ==> “Don’t be such a pussy!”

MariogD: "Fuck off!"

Mejson: "Are you warm enough?" ==> “Feeling warm enough?”

Mejson: "I’ll wreck you, bitch!"

Keni: "I'd like to see that!" ==> “Looking forward for that!”

Keni: <moan of pain>
Keni: <groans of pain>

Mejson: "Are you done looking?!"
Rash: "How is that possible?!"

Keni: "What's happened?!" ==> “The fuck happened?!”

Rash: "Keni, get your shit together!"
MariogD: "Are you ok, bro?"

Mejson: "I've never felt better!" ==> “Never better!”

Bott*: "That's the spirit!"

Keni: "How lovely!" ==> “How marvelous!”

Keni: "What exactly happened to your eye?"
Mejson: "None of your business!"
Keni: <laughs>
Keni: "You'll never see me again!"

Mazurek: "I have bad feeling about that..." ==> "I have a bad feeling about this..."

Keni: <hiss of pain>
Mejson: <groan of pain>
Mejson: <hiss of pain>

Mejson: "Fuck! I don't see anything!" ==> “Fuck! I can’t see anything!”

Keni: <laughs>
Keni: "I told you..."

Mejson: "You sneaky motherfucker!" ==> “You cheeky bastard!”

Mejson: <moan of pain>
Mejson: <moan of pain>
Mejson: <moan of pain>
MariogD: "Keni, stop it!"
Delsin: "Get off him!"
Mejson: <groans of pain>
Mejson: <groan of pain>
Mr. Mate: "Enough is enough!"

Mr. Mate: "You wanted to kill him?!" ==> “You wanna kill him? You gotta through me first…”

Keni: "No, I..."
Keni: "We're leaving!"

MariogD: "Brother, hold on!" ==> “Brother, stay with me!”
MariogD: "It's my fault..." ==> “It’s all my fault…”

Delsin: "Mr. Mejson!"
MariogD: "Is he alive?!"

Bott*: "Yeah... he’s passed out" ==> “Yeah, he’s still got a pulse” (meaning his heart is still beating)
Bott*: "He's been hit hard..." ==> “He got massacred…”

MariogD: "Where the hell are you going?!"
MariogD: "We need you!"
Mazurek: <sighs>

Mazurek: "I can't leave these idiots alone…" ==> “I can’t leave those idiots alone…”
Mr. Mate: "Are you going to stay with these barbarians?" ==> “Are going to stay with those barbarians?”

Delsin: "Mr. Mejson, we will help you!"

Mazurek: "Keni helped me escape the ambush and he's right - time to move on" ==> "Keni helped me escape the ambush… and he's right… it’s time to move on…”

MariogD: "I understand…"

Bott*: "Good luck with them!" ==> “Best of luck to you, sir!”

Only a suggestion for 67-69, when I was reading it through the first time, I was thinking Keni had Mejson in the full mount on the ground and was pummeling him from top position (hence Delsin saying "Get off!") I see 2nd time around it's a short-arm attack.

Is it out of the question to change that section into full mount? I'd say it is a more savage display than short-arm, which befits Keni well. Of course some of the scenery needs to change to make it work, like below:
67: Keni releases spear, runs at Mejson and tackles him to the ground. Mejson on his back, Keni gets past his legs to kneel on his chest, delivering a grounded hook to the helpless face. After Mejson's face returns, Keni then delivers a 12-6 elbow targeting Mejson's forehead OR Keni then delivers a hammerfist to Mejson's nose.

68: More of above, despite MariogD and Delsin's pleas, with Keni now adding headbutts. Keni then notices Mejson's spear next to him/in front of him, stretches to take it, and intends on running it through Mejson's head.

69: Mr. Mate takes away the spear as Keni brings it up as high as he can, and uses his other hand to pull Keni back to his feet. Scene continues as normal.

I didn't do something like that on purpose, because Keni is very strong, and hitting someone who is on ground focuses all the energy - the hero's head has nowhere to jump away. Keni could kill or make Mejson coma - too risky. Mejson is supposed to wake up in a few days, and not be hooked up (for months) to an apparatus that does not exist in this world. Anyway, thanks for your dedication and ideas - I appreciates it as always! They are always very interesting and amazing!

PS. Then we change the text from: "Get off him!" to: "Let him go!".

Mejson: "You shouldn't turn your back to your opponent"

Bott*: "He's resurrected!" -> "He's got a second wind!"

Keni: "What?!"

Delsin: "I knew you'd be back, Mr. Mejson!" -> "I knew you had it in you, Mr. Mejson!"

Keni: "Why are you so happy?!"

Keni: "I must hit him too hard..." -> "I must've hit him too hard..."

Mejson: "We're not finished yet!"
Keni: "You want more?"
Keni: "C'mon!"
Mejson: "Heads up!"
Keni: "My turn!"
Keni: <groan of pain>

Mejson: "You had something on face" -> "You had a little something on your face."

Keni: "You're starting to tease me..." -> "You're teasing me now?!"

Keni: "You're done!"
Keni: <moan of pain>

Delsin: "Nice one, Mr. Mejson!" -> "Excellent job, Mr. Mejson!"

Rash: "Hey! That's cheating!"

Bott*: "Shut up, Rash! Mejson rocks!" -> "Shut up, Rash! That was awesome!"

Mejson: "And who is predictable now?!" -> "Who's predictable now?!"

Keni: "I hate you!"
Kein: "Die!"
Bott*: "Whoah!"
MariogD: "What are you doing?!"
Mejson: "You crossed the line, Keni!"
Mejson: "It’s over! I'll take you down!"
Mejson: <groans of pain>
Bott*: "Holy fire, bless him!"
MariogD: "Stop this madness!"

Rash: "Don't be so pussy!" -> "Don't be such a pussy!"

MariogD: "Fuck off!"

Mejson: "Are you warm enough?" -> "Are you warmed up?""

Mejson: "I’ll wreck you, bitch!"
Keni: "I'd like to see that!"
Keni: <moan of pain>
Keni: <groans of pain>
Mejson: "Are you done looking?!"
Rash: "How is that possible?!"
Keni: "What's happened?!"
Rash: "Keni, get your shit together!"
MariogD: "Are you ok, bro?"
Mejson: "I've never felt better!"
Bott*: "That's the spirit!"
Keni: "How lovely!"

Keni: "What exactly happened to your eye?" -> "How's your eye doing?"

Mejson: "None of your business!"
Keni: <laughs>
Keni: "You'll never see me again!"

Mazurek: "I have bad feeling about that..." -> "I have a bad feeling about this..."

Keni: <hiss of pain>
Mejson: <groan of pain>
Mejson: <hiss of pain>

Mejson: "Fuck! I don't see anything!" -> "Fuck, I can't see shit!"

Keni: <laughs>
Keni: "I told you..."
Mejson: "You sneaky motherfucker!"
Mejson: <moan of pain>
Mejson: <moan of pain>
Mejson: <moan of pain>
MariogD: "Keni, stop it!"
Delsin: "Get off him!"
Mejson: <groans of pain>
Mejson: <groan of pain>
Mr. Mate: "Enough is enough!"

Mr. Mate: "You wanted to kill him?!" -> "Did you want to kill him?"

Keni: "No, I..."
Keni: "We're leaving!"
MariogD: "Brother, hold on!"
MariogD: "It's my fault..."
Delsin: "Mr. Mejson!"
MariogD: "Is he alive?!"

Bott*: "Yeah... he’s passed out" -> "Yeah, just unconscious."

Bott*: "He's been hit hard..."
MariogD: "Where the hell are you going?!"
MariogD: "We need you!"
Mazurek: <sighs>

Mazurek: "I can't leave these idiots alone…" -> "I can't leave those idiots alone."

Mr. Mate: "Are you going to stay with these barbarians?" -> "You're going with those barbarians?"

Delsin: "Mr. Mejson, we will help you!" -> "Mr. Mejson, we're here to help you!"

Mazurek: "Keni helped me escape the ambush and he's right - time to move on" -> "Keni helped me escape the ambush. And he's right - It's time we moved on."

MariogD: "I understand…"

Bott*: "Good luck with them!" -> "Happy travels!"

@Mejson That makes sense. I guess I was getting carried away with my fight fantasies ^^ as someone who writes more than a couple fight scenes using characters whose primary disciplines are BJJ, Sambo, and Krav Maga, I have an inclination for the fights to make it to the ground. That being said, most times the downed fighter is conscious and can block and/or get back to their feet, which would not be the case for Mejson the character at this time.

Eager to see this fight scene someday ;D

Yes, Mejson cannot see - it cannot cover and block itself anymore... xD

Yes, you'll see one day :P Hehehehe

@Animetion24, will you write a text for the narrator - regarding Part II in Part III? 4-5 points - as last time. Previously on Reduce 3... If you don't mind / this is not a problem.

@Mejson Hey mate, yeah, I'll get on that. Hopefully I can get you a brief synopsis by tomorrow.

@Mejson
Note: This might be long for a narration, but there were a lot of long-term effects in Reduce III pt 2 that I reckon would need to be reminded about. Still, if you think I should cut some of this down, go ahead and say what could be condensed. Goes for you too, @Cyberdevil and @ChordC
Previously on Reduce III...

Bill's grave illness as a result of the most recent attack has quite an adverse effect on the remaining survivors, making the idea that they still know so little about the dangers they face come to the front of their minds. But that's not the only thing invading their leader Mejson's mind when a good friend recently thought gone decides to live rent-free in his brain.

The group splits up temporarily to gather the necessary ingredients in order to stabilize Bill. Mejson and Mr. Mate pair up to gather fresh water, taking on spiders in their way. Delsin and MariogD, with the help of their shiny new toys, hunt for the herb aloe, also confronting spiders. Bott* and Candy stay behind, the former to watch over Bill while the latter takes up defending the base - a task notably larger than any other he's been given before.

With everything they need, the team reconvened, hoping they were just in time to save Bill. And as a nice bonus, they were reunited with a couple of old friends and effective allies, in the form of Zip, Mazurek, Keni, and Rash. Also, thanks to Candy, they might've just found a means to cure Bill when he befriended an albino spider, which Bott* believes can be studied well.

But the levity would be short-lived. Despite his skills and contributions as well as MariogD's endorsement, Delsin remains unconvinced of Mr. Mate's loyalty to the group. Zip has reached the angry phase of grief after snapping at Bott* from an uncomfortable exchange, and Keni and Rash both find the antics of the rest of team aggravating.

Egos ran high, and before anyone knew it, a rift was formed. And expanded into the night, when Keni and Rash attempted a split from the group just as quickly as they reunited. Mejson's attempt to pacify went on deaf ears, and after an underhanded insult, the leader and would-be leader came to blows. Back and forth they went, but try as Mejson and mind-Steve might, Keni had the last laugh, leaving Mejson a bloody mess on the floor.

Mr. Mate was able to appease the splinter faction from causing fatalities amongst each other, but that didn't stop them from leaving. Mazurek, who has seen them in action and supports their decision to move on, joins them, and once more, the survivors are fractured between each other.

Will Mejson be the same man as he was before, both psychologically and physically? Has this display also shaken the belief of even his best supporters? What would happen if the two teams ever saw each other again? Like the insects, the answers are out there...

Very beautifully written! The fact that it is long is not a problem - a lot has happened and it was worth describing. :P It is possible that the Plasmarift will be dissatisfied (will have more to record) :P

I'm puzzled by two issues. Albino spider. Does it matter that it is white because it has just hatched from an egg? Spiders darken over time, as they grow up. "mind-Steve might" - What does it mean? Well, I hope our viewers has a good understanding. This isn't Steve in Mejson's mind. It's Mejson's separated self that has taken a form that makes it easier for Mejson to accept it. Is that how it is understood? :P

@Animetion24 Couldn’t do it better myself, it’s a solid narration imo, we’ll see what @mejson thinks about.

@Mejson @Cyberdevil @ChordC Ah in my haste while describing that out I skimmed a little too much. You're right, we can change that to perhaps "Try as Mejson - in all his forms - might,..."?

As for the albino spider, that color trait was rather focused on when it debuted so I reckoned it would do well to make sure it was distinct, at least as far as the viewer is aware of at this time. If you think it can be taken out though, I won't disagree.

After consulting with the guys, we have the following changes:

Also, thanks to Candy, they might've just found a means to cure Bill when he befriended a newborn spider, which Bott* believes can be studied well.

Back and forth they went, but try as Mejson - in all his forms - might, Keni had the last laugh, leaving Mejson a bloody mess on the floor.

@Animetion24, what do you think?

@Mejson @Cyberdevil @ChordC That's good to go.

Super! Add to the to-do list!

@Animetion24 Arriving a bit late here but that was great, wonderfully well-worded, love the end. I don't have any suggestions for changes, but maybe a missing word in:

of the rest of team > of the rest of the team

Is "the" really missing? Keep me informed :)

This scene turned out way more intense than I'd expected it too! Adding in the element of potentially losing another eye at the end too... really adds to the sense of danger...

Wasn't expecting a rift like this but finna make it all the more interesting moving on...

For the first time I have the impression that you are so impressed XD I am pleased with the work of the whole team! Because I can't do such a thing on my own... well, only in the group we are the best!

PS. Yes... you actually got "here" quite late, are you all right? Do you have time to start working on dubbing? :P Hehehe... I know, I'm calmer when I see the finished dubs XD

@Cyberdevil @Mejson Hey Cyber, yeah reading that over that is missing. Good eye. :)

OK, updated!

I don't think it's the FIRST time, but I am indeed. XD Feeling a little guilty I'm not involved more hmm...

Well it's just been a lot of different things lately, work and personal projects. My mom was in the hospital for a while last week too, severe allergic reaction it seems, so we were all a little preoccupied. She's better now though. :) Been meaning to respond there soon as they're recorded, hopefully any day now. ;)

Well... yes, but a lot is actually happening with you :O Hope your mom gets better soon! Fingers crossed! Uuu, so you want recorded soon? :P There is a lot of it!

Thank you, hope so too. :) Yepp there definitely were more lines now. XD At least Candy shouldn't take too long, anyway hope to get back to you on those this week.

Sure! Can you give her a ride from me? :P Hehehe, probably for our people's families I'm some abstract man. XD This week?! You are extremely fast! :O

A ride, as in a car ride...? Wonder if that phrase maybe has a different cultural significance in Polish. :) I can give her your best, for sure, if that's what you meant, though indeed I don't think she knows you yet. XD

Well I hope so! :) We shall see!

No, not a single ride XD Greeting from me :P

I know, we know each other a bit, but it's possible that our families do not know about our existence. Hmmm, my family knows, I mentioned the crew to them sometimes.

Yes, I hope your mom will be fine! :)

Will do. XD But I'm curious, is 'ride' something else in Polish? Is there a similar word? I just understand it as 'drive'.

Ah well then give them by best too if there's ever a good opportunity to. :) My family doesn't know much about my presence on NG at all, I'd rather they don't get involved with all the content I partake in, as sometimes it's a bit explicit, but they do know I've been doing some voices, and vague details about some of these projects. I mention collaborators by place but not so much identity, I think they've heard of 'a Polish buddy'. :P Some day maybe more will be revealed!

:)

Yes, but not in the sense you think :P I was just wrong XD

Ehhh my family, they don't understand my works XD Maybe yes, I understand :P Our parents are of a different date :P From different times :)

I understand :) Also nice :) Cool, everyone says as much as they want :)

Gotcha. :)

Yess, same. :) They are indeed! Though it's nice they are, I like old values, feels like everything was also a bit more 'honorable' when people were a bit more reserved; not exposed to just anything. Them times...

Indeed. :)