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Reduce 3 - Scene 14 (Planning)

Posted by Mejson - June 1st, 2022


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Welcome everyone!


First thing:

Well, first the latest information on dialogues for the character (to Part II - R3). The work is ongoing and our best people are hard at work to complete this task. :) @Plasmarift - he already sent me a dub for Scene 13. @Animetion24 - I received the second part of Delsin and I haven't checked them out yet. I will get 23 more in the future. @Cyberdevil - we have everything for the part II to MariogD. Thank you to everyone for your hard work and great recordings!


Main thing:

As you have noticed, Scene 14 wasn't finished for a long time. Well this month has been hot and it has been hard for me to concentrate on anything. Therefore, there was no new scene for almost a month. However, do not think that we have changed our mind or that we have stopped, but remember that we are doing it for fun. Sometimes everyone needs a break...


Extra thing:

I found old notes for #CS5, they it's in Polish on paper, so in my free time I will take it to my friend and scan it, and then @MariogD will translate it. Aaa yes, I forgot to add it's for @MATRVG XD. Yes, this is for you :D I hope it will be useful to you. 'When you look at the dark side, you have to be careful... because the dark side is looking at you too'. ~Yoda


What do you think about it, @Cyberdevil@Animetion24@ChordC@MariogD@SayMeBott@Colizza@XavierDalton@MATRVG?


Regards,

Mejson


Scene 14 - Decisions

Inscription (on black background):

Episode 14
Day 40
(~2 days later)
10:16 AM


Action:

1. The scene starts on the right with the 'Dome' (behind the pot). Nobody removed the rope (liana) that Diablo climbed (and fell) on. MariogD is lying on the ground on the right side, carelessly (one arm stretches out along the body and the other is stretched out behind the head). He stares indifferently upwards (no depression, but still sad and absent). On the left (some distance) sits Delsin in turkish (seat on the ground in this style).

2. There are various parts around it; his standard projectiles (spears - wooden), various types of new "tip" for spears - bone, stone, metal, and others (gifts / suggestions from Mazurek). Nearby, there is Delsin's weapon - the Spear Gun, and in front of him there are pieces of liana. To the right of the hero, there is his basket for spears (ammunition), in which there are several ordinary and several "improved" spears.

3. Delsin holds / looks at a spear that is already "improved" (a bone (serrated) "tip" is connected by lianas to a wooden shaft). Unexpectedly, Delsin puts the spear (ammo) in front of him, looks at MariogD, squint one’s eyes and says (indifferently): "You're just gonna lie there all day?". MariogD without the slightest movement (he did not even move his eyes) replies (indifferently): "Yep... That's the plan, sir".

4. Delsin closes his eyes, <sighs>, and scratches his head (for a moment). He then opens his eyes, looks gently at MariogD and asks (gently): "You think Mejson would be glad to see this?". MariogD squint one's eyes and moves his eyes towards Delsin but says nothing. After a pause, Delsin says (calmly): "You know...". MariogD's expression is blank again, but he is still staring at Delsin. The camera focuses (brings closer) the heroes.

5. And after a while Delsin adds (calmly): "Don't be offended, but...". And he continues (calmly): "Don't you think we decide on something? After, you know...". MariogD rises (to a sitting position), turns to Delsin with a hint of anger (slightly frowns) and asks (uncertainly / slowly): "Huh, what do you mean by that?". Delsin is a bit surprised by MariogD's reaction - he (Delsin) raises a eyebrows. Delsin begins by saying (gently): "What if...".

6. And looks down at the ground. MariogD squint one's eyes and asks (firmly): "What if, what?". Delsin looks at MariogD and says (gently): "What if we need to choose someone new?". And Delsin adds (gently): "To lead…". MariogD flinches and reacts (angrily): "Are you serious?!". Delsin looks down at the ground in response - he has not been provoked to argument. MariogD glares at him for a moment, then squeezes his eyes shut.

7. Then he leans back on his elbows, his expression softening. MariogD <sighs>, opens his eyes and says (understandingly / slowly): "But you're Goddamn right". Delsin looks at MariogD curiously. MariogD slowly rises (to a sitting position). Next MariogD looks down (sad) and says softly to himself (sadly): "My bro won't live forever...". Delsin doesn't say anything, for he hasn't heard, or he pretends not to have heard.

8. After a moment's pause, MariogD looks serious, looks at Delsin and says (seriously): "We need to discuss it". MariogD ads (interested): "Where's Mr. Mate?". Delsin shudders in disgust and asks (indignantly): "Why do you want him?!". MariogD is surprised by Delsin's reaction (shudders a little) - he has a surprised face. Then MariogD becomes indifferent and says (indifferently): "You're repeating yourself...".

9. Delsin quickly regains composure - he closes his eyes, scratches his head and says (gently): "We should handle this by ourselves". Delsin opens his eyes and says (gently): "Mejson always thought of you as his successor". MariogD flinches a little and reacts (surprised): "What?... Me?!". Then MariogD leans forward, sadly, looks at the ground and replies (sadly): "I'm not cut out for this...".

10. Then MariogD rises a little, looks at Delsin and says (calmly): "It ought to be you". Delsin shudders a bit in surprise and says (a bit surprised): "Me?". And after a while he adds (calmly): "I'm not worthy". MariogD shrugs indifferently, then says (indifferently): "In that case, I'll vouch for Mr. Mate". Delsin squint one's eyes, <snort> and crossed his arms, then says (firmly): "If you're going to put it like that, then I'm up to the task".

11. MariogD nods his head sadly (he's still in a faint mood). After a while, the camera moves to the left. The camera stops on a pile of stones (known from previous scenes). When the camera zoom in, the transparency of the stones is changed to zero - it shows what is behind them. There is another makeshift bed (on the right) on which Candy is sitting (turned to the left), and (on the left) on a stone.

12. The same stone as in the previous scene is Bott* (but turned to the right). His 'Shevy' is leaning on the left side of that stone. In front of him, on the ground, there are various herbal ingredients (some herbs). And on the left side (from these ingredients) there is a small fire (certainly Bott* was cooking some infusion by combining various herbs). Candy sits and watches Bott* (with interest).

13. Bott* is focused (staring) at the held wooden bowl with a maddened gaze (has narrowed pupils) which is hot substance inside. The other hand stirs the substance with a wooden stick (spoon). After a while he puts the spoon down and talks as if to himself (does not take his eyes off the bowl). Bott* says (crazy): "Perfecto!". Candy reacts (curious): "Tomato soup?". Bott* blinks in surprise (his eyes turn normal) when he "back" to reality.

14. Bott* reacts (surprised): "What?". Then he says (confident): "Tsaa, yeah!". Next he squint one’s eyes and adds (ironically): "Sooo much... tomato puree!". Candy shivers excitedly and reacts (excitedly): "Yummy!". After a while he calms down and looks at Bott* pleadingly and asks (shyly): "May I?". Bott* raises his eyebrows (makes a gentle face) and says (lovely): "Of course!". And he adds (encouragingly): "This is for you".

15. Candy shivers happily (closes his eyes and smiles - in his style), Bott* also smiles gently. Next Candy opens his eyes and looks serious (focused). Bott* also grows serious, then slowly hands the bowl (bends down a bit). Candy (bends down) and with both hands quickly reaches for the bowl. Bott* hands over the bowl and says (firmly): "Careful!". Candy stops and looks at Bott* seriously.

16. Bott* then adds (calmly): "It is hot". Candy (serious) nods, then <slurp> greedily from the bowl. Bott* leans in curious, with a maddened look (his pupils narrow for a moment) and asks (crazy): "Well? How's it taste?". Candy pushes the bowl away from his mouth, next looking at the bowl with disappointment when he <3x smack> three times, then says (disappointment): "Strange taste...". Bott* watches Candy curiously.

17. After a while, Candy sways and drops the bowl, and his eyelids close almost completely. Candy says (tired): "I'm sleepy...". Bott* quickly stands up and crouches (right side) behind Candy. He then grabs Candy, helps him lie down when he says (calmly): "Lay down here". Candy lies on his back, tries to open her eyes and says (anxiously): "What's happening?". Bott* watches him and reassures him by saying (reassuringly): "Relax".

18. And he adds (reassuringly): "Close your eyes". Candy calms down and closes his eyes. The camera quickly zooms in on Candy's head and dims all background to complete darkness. Only Candy is lying there. The camera zooms out. Candy is lying on the ground (without a bed) all alone - only blackout, but not night, just black emptiness. Suddenly is hearing Bott*'s voice (same voice effect as in Mejson's head).

19. Bott* says (interested): "Candy, can you hear me?". Candy opens his eyes, rises to a sitting position and looks around uncertainly, then scratches his head and says (anxiously): "Hello?". Also with the same voice effect. Bott* replies (pleased): "Very well". Candy gets up and looks up, then he is looking around and asks (concerned): "Where are you?". Bott* replies (hesitantly): "I'm here... present...".

20. Candy turns and asks (curious): "Where?". Bott* replies (irritated): "Everywhere!". Candy squint one's eyes when Bott* <sighs> (Bott* calms down). Then Bott* says (calmly): "We're in your head". Candy reacts (confused): "Huh?". Bott* replies (firmly): "Never mind...". And then he adds (calmly): "This is your world". And after a while he adds (hesitantly): "Pretty empty...".

21. Candy calms down (his face softens), and then puts his hands to his face and screams (optimistic): "Echo!". It's hearing the repeated 'echo!' (five times). Candy lowers his hands and listens. After a while, Candy smiles (with all her face) and comments (happily): "Suuuper!". Bott* reacts (indifferently): "Eee... yeah". And then adds (firmly): "Anyway... can we continue?". Candy gets serious and looks upward.

22. Bott* continues as if to himself (thoughtful): "Let's start with something simple". And then he says (calmly): "Think of something pleasant". Candy looks ahead (as if thinking), then shudders as he puts his hands up (enjoying his whole face) and says (delighted): "Ice-cream!". A large ice-cream cone appears behind Candy (the size of a human). Candy turns around and happily shudders (enjoys) and says (happily): "Yeah!".

23. Candy runs over and hugs the ice-cream cone (also with his leg) and says (cheerfully): "Pistachio!" (the ice-cream is pistachio). Bott* says (perplexed): "That's not exactly what I meant...". Candy stops and looks seriously upwards (tongue still in the ice). Bott* takes a <deep breath>, then after a moment says (calmly): "Remember when you were happy?". Candy comes off the ice-cream and stands on the ground.

24. Next he looks down at the ground, and scratches his head (he’s trying to think). The ice-cream disappears. Candy says as if to himself (thoughtful): "Happy...". A few moments pass (3-5 seconds). Candy looks up and lowers his hand - he stares straight ahead (seriously). A static memory flashes before him, and after a moment stabilizes. Two planes (wall and floor) visually limited to an uneven circles.

25. In the middle there is Mejson and Candy (hugging), and next to it there is an ant (only the head is visible). Candy is staring, says as if to herself (touched): "Yes... very happy...". One tear is running down his cheek (from emotion) when Candy trembles slightly with his mouth open. Bott* says (pleased): "Excellent!". After a few moments (3-4 seconds) the image begins to lose sharpness and flashes.

26. Suddenly Candy crouches - he's leaning on the ground with one hand and holding his head with the other (he has a tired face). Candy says (tired): "My head...". And he adds (sore): "Hurts...". Bott* reacts (satisfied): "Great, but that's enough!". And he adds (reassuringly): "Take a nap". Candy slowly collapses to the ground as the camera zooms in on his head. Blackout. Lighten after a second (exit from Candy's head).

27. Candy is lying still, he has sweat on his face. Bott* sits behind Candy (front side) and strokes Candy's head and says as if to himself (calmly): "Rest, my friend". Then he stands up (the camera zooms out a bit) and goes to the right. After a while, he disappears behind the right edge of the screen. After a while Mr. Mate goes from the left screen side. He stops by Candy (behind Candy), looking right to left (no rush).

28. He then looks at Candy, scratching his head. Then he crouches down next to Candy and examines him closely - starting at the head, then directing his gaze to Candy's legs. During this activity, Mr. Mate says to himself (suspiciously): "Hey, you ok?" and next he checks his pulse (Mr. Mate raises Candy's hand and checks his pusl with his other hand). And then he continues (suspiciously): "You're unusually quiet". Suddenly Mr. Mate stops abruptly on the object behind Candy's leg.

29. Mr. Mate squint one's eyes when reaching for the object. He picks up the bowl that Candy has dropped. He brings it closer to his face - examines the bowl (turns it over in his hand). Mate sniffs the bowl (tries to find out the contents of the bowl). He then slowly lowers his hand with the bowl and turns his head to the right (looking towards Bott*). Mr. Mate makes an even more suspicious face (lowers his eyebrows even more) and says to himself (suspiciously): "You got something to do with this, freak?".

30. After a while, the camera moves to the right and stops at the cage with the spider (it is slightly larger than last time and slightly darker). On the left side (left side of the cage) Bott* sits on a stone, in his hand he holds a notebook (made of a leaf) and a pencil (made of a stick). He's very focused on what he's doing. He says to himself (interested): "Interesting…". Blackout.


Light effect:

Normal (midday).


Dialogues:

Delsin: "You're just gonna lie there all day?"
MariogD: "Yep... That's the plan, sir"
Delsin: <sighs>
Delsin: "You think Mejson would be glad to see this?"
Delsin: "You know..."
Delsin: "Don't be offended, but..."
Delsin: "Don't you think we decide on something? After, you know..."
MariogD: "Huh, what do you mean by that?"
Delsin: "What if..."
MariogD: "What if, what?"
Delsin: "What if we need to choose someone new?"
Delsin: "To lead…"
MariogD: "Are you serious?!"
MariogD: <sighs>
MariogD: "But you're Goddamn right"
MariogD: "My bro won't live forever..."
MariogD: "We need to discuss it"
MariogD: "Where's Mr. Mate?"
Delsin: "Why do you want him?!"
MariogD: "You're repeating yourself..."
Delsin: "We should handle this by ourselves"
Delsin: "Mejson always thought of you as his successor"
MariogD: "What?... Me?!"
MariogD: "I'm not cut out for this..."
MariogD: "It ought to be you"
Delsin: "Me?"
Delsin: "I'm not worthy"
MariogD: "In that case, I'll vouch for Mr. Mate"
Delsin: <snort>
Delsin: "If you're going to put it like that, then I'm up to the task"
Bott*: "Perfecto!"
Candy: "Tomato soup?"
Bott*: "What?"
Bott*: "Tsaa, yeah!"
Bott*: "Sooo much... tomato puree!"
Candy: "Yummy!"
Candy: "May I?"
Bott*: "Of course!"
Bott*: "This is for you"
Bott*: "Careful!"
Bott*: "It is hot"
Candy: <slurp>
Bott*: "Well? How's it taste?"
Candy: <3x smack>
Candy: "Strange taste..."
Candy: "I'm sleepy..."
Bott*: "Lay down here"
Candy: "What's happening?"
Bott*: "Relax"
Bott*: "Close your eyes"
Bott*: "Candy, can you hear me?"
Candy: "Hello?"
Bott*: "Very well"
Candy: "Where are you?"
Bott*: "I'm here... present..."
Candy: "Where?"
Bott*: "Everywhere!"
Bott*: <sighs>
Bott*: "We're in your head"
Candy: "Huh?"
Bott*: "Never mind..."
Bott*: "This is your world"
Bott*: "Pretty empty..."
Candy: "Echo!"
Candy: "Suuuper!"
Bott*: "Eee... yeah"
Bott*: "Anyway... can we continue?"
Bott*: "Let's start with something simple"
Bott*: "Think of something pleasant"
Candy: "Ice-cream!"
Candy: "Yeah!"
Candy: "Pistachio!"
Bott*: "That's not exactly what I meant..."
Bott*: <deep breath>
Bott*: "Remember when you were happy?"
Candy: "Happy..."
Candy: "Yes... very happy..."
Bott*: "Excellent!"
Candy: "My head..."
Candy: "Hurts..."
Bott*: "Great, but that's enough!"
Bott*: "Take a nap"
Bott*: "Rest, my friend"
Mr. Mate: "Hey, you ok?"
Mr. Mate: "You're unusually quiet"
Mr. Mate: "You got something to do with this, freak?"
Bott*: "Interesting…"

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Comments

No problem! You do well to take a break. Good job with Scene 14!

Thanks for comment! It's always good to see you. Good to hear that!

Hell yeah, man! We all need to take break... Scene is seem too great, I can't wait to see Candy's inner world ^^

Really?! I also can't wait for those scripts...! They'll be VERY useful for me. That Yoda quote is quite cool, BTW. I have big plans for this saga.

As for you, fans... STAY TUNED!

Regards,
-MATRVG

Thanks! It's amazing that everyone is enjoying this scene so much XD I got it, but it's just a normal scene! Scene 12 - It is a great scene!

I am glad that I will be able to help. Yes, I'm sure this saga will be cool!

Yeah, Yoda! This is the guy!

Yes, we invite you, come to our corner!

Me: :)
My throat: :o (meme Pikachu face)

With each scene, I look forward to the premiere more and more!

Thanks for the comment my friend! We are definitely approaching the end of planning! :)

Finally the next scene. 4 more left!

Yes, 'in dick' (indeed) XD

Hm, didn't get a feedback notice on my feed for this post. I think the 30 days are up and NG no longer redirects "Animetion24" to my username anymore.

Well, better get used to it guys. :)

Anyhow:

1.-3. - I take it that's what you were pointing my way on Discord? I don't mind it, sure helps to see characters trying to move on from such a dramatic moment and get their heads back on survival, especially Delsin - someone as curious and observant as him will often be finding something to do in the meantime.

27. or 30. - After Bott* lets Candy rest, you think we can have him excitedly inform Shevy of the great news and progress on his little experiment? I understand if you would like to pull on that personality tic every so often though.

28.-29. - If Mr. Mate is that concerned over Candy's status, might I recommend he also checks for Candy's pulse, either by wrist or... Where a stickman's neck would be? And when he discovers the bowl, Mate also tries smelling the inner section of bowl to try and find any strange substances? As a former assassin and wetwork asset, he'd likely have a decent level of understanding with toxins and poisons, and would try to see if Candy ingested some, even if this particular one is unfamiliar to him.

30. I'm guessing Bott* is too engrossed with his research to hear Mr. Mate demanding answers? Don't mind it, just making sure I get what's going on.

Dialogues:

Delsin: "Are you going to lie here all day long?" -> "Are you really just going to sleep the whole day away?"

MariogD: "That's the plan, sir" -> "That's the idea..."

Delsin: <sighs>

Delsin: "Do you think Mejson would be proud of this?" -> "You think Mejson would be glad to see this?"

Delsin: "You know..."
Delsin: "Don't be offended, but..."

Delsin: "Don't you think we should decide what to do next?" -> "We should determine what we need to do next."

MariogD: "Huh, what do you mean by that?"
Delsin: "What if..."

MariogD: "What if?" -> "What if, what?"

Delsin: "What if we shall have to choose... somebody new?" -> "What if we need to choose someone new?"

Delsin: "To lead…"
MariogD: "Are you serious?!"
MariogD: <sighs>

MariogD: "But you're Goddamn right" -> "You're right, though."

MariogD: "My bro won't live forever..."
MariogD: "We need to discuss it"
MariogD: "Where's Mr. Mate?"
Delsin: "Why do you want him?!"
MariogD: "You're repeating yourself..."

Delsin: "We should handle this alone" -> "We should handle this by ourselves."

Delsin: "Mejson always thought of you as his successor"
MariogD: "What?... Me?!"
MariogD: "I... I'm rubbish at this..."

MariogD: "That should be you" -> "It ought to be you."

Delsin: "Me?"
Delsin: "I'm not worthy"

MariogD: "Okay, so may be Mr. Mate" -> "Fine. Maybe Mr. Mate will say yes to the job then."

Delsin: <snort>

Delsin: "Well... since you put it that way, I'm in!" -> "If you're going to put it like that, then I'm up to the task."

Bott*: "Perfectly!" -> "Perfecto!" or "Perfection!"

Candy: "Tomato soup?"
Bott*: "What?"
Bott*: "Tsaa, yeah!"
Bott*: "Sooo much... tomato puree!"
Candy: "Yummy!"
Candy: "May I?"
Bott*: "Of course!"
Bott*: "This is for you"

Bott*: "Carefully!" -> "Careful now!"

Bott*: "It is hot"
Candy: <slurp>
Bott*: "Well? How's it taste?"
Candy: <3x smack>
Candy: "Strange taste..."
Candy: "I'm sleepy..."
Bott*: "Lay down here"
Candy: "What's happening?"
Bott*: "Relax"
Bott*: "Close your eyes"
Bott*: "Candy, can you hear me?"
Candy: "Hello?"
Bott*: "Very well"
Candy: "Where are you?"
Bott*: "I'm here... present..."
Candy: "Where?"
Bott*: "Everywhere!"
Bott*: <sighs>
Bott*: "We're in your head"
Candy: "Huh?"
Bott*: "Never mind..."
Bott*: "This is your world"
Bott*: "Pretty empty..."
Candy: "Echo!"
Candy: "Suuuper!"
Bott*: "Eee... yeah"
Bott*: "Anyway... can we continue?"
Bott*: "Let's start with something simple"
Bott*: "Think of something pleasant"
Candy: "Ice-cream!"
Candy: "Yeah!"
Candy: "Pistachio!"
Bott*: "That's not exactly what I meant..."
Bott*: <deep breath>
Bott*: "Remember when you were happy?"
Candy: "Happy..."
Candy: "Yes... very happy..."
Bott*: "Excellent!"
Candy: "My head..."
Candy: "Hurts..."

Bott*: "Great, but that's enough!" -> "Great work! Go ahead."

Bott*: "Take a nap"
Bott*: "Rest, my friend"
Mr. Mate: "What's going on?"
Mr. Mate: "You are usually very energetic"
Mr. Mate: "What's this game, freak?"
Bott*: "Interesting…"

Sorry, I accidentally entered your old nickname so I remember you changed it. Sorry.

Suggestions:

1.-3. - Yes!

27. or 30. - No ("the more you repeat something, the more it loses it's power" ~ Bott*).

28.-29. - Yes, she holds up his hand and checks his pulse. Yes, Mr. Mate sniffs the bowl.

30. - Yes, Bott* is engrossed in his research, and he's not too close to the other Mr. Mate doesn't say it out loud somehow.

Thanks, and for the fixes dialogues below!

I have no corrections for the plot, however, here are some dialogue changes that I recommend:

Delsin: "Are you going to lie here all day long?" ==> "You're just gonna lie there all day?"
MariogD: "That's the plan, sir" ==> "Yep... That's the plan, sir"

Delsin: <sighs>

Delsin: "Do you think Mejson would be proud of this?" ==> "How would Mejson react to this?"

Delsin: "You know..."

Delsin: "Don't be offended, but..." ==> "Don't get me wrong, but..."
Delsin: "Don't you think we should decide what to do next?" ==> Don't you think we decide on something? after, you know..."

MariogD: "Huh, what do you mean by that?"
Delsin: "What if..."

MariogD: "What if?" ==> "If what?"
Delsin: "What if we shall have to choose... somebody new?" ==> "What if we pick someone new..."

Delsin: "To lead…"
MariogD: "Are you serious?!"
MariogD: <sighs>
MariogD: "But you're Goddamn right"
MariogD: "My bro won't live forever..."
MariogD: "We need to discuss it"
MariogD: "Where's Mr. Mate?"
Delsin: "Why do you want him?!"
MariogD: "You're repeating yourself..."
Delsin: "We should handle this alone"
Delsin: "Mejson always thought of you as his successor"
MariogD: "What?... Me?!"

MariogD: "I... I'm rubbish at this..." ==> "I'm not cut out for this..."
MariogD: "That should be you" ==> "I think you'll make a better leader"

Delsin: "Me?"
Delsin: "I'm not worthy"

MariogD: "Okay, so may be Mr. Mate" ==> "In that case, I'll vouch for Mr. Mate"

Delsin: <snort>
Delsin: "Well... since you put it that way, I'm in!"

Bott*: "Perfectly!" ==> "Splendid!"

Candy: "Tomato soup?"
Bott*: "What?"
Bott*: "Tsaa, yeah!"
Bott*: "Sooo much... tomato puree!"
Candy: "Yummy!"
Candy: "May I?"
Bott*: "Of course!"
Bott*: "This is for you"

Bott*: "Carefully!" ==> "Careful!"

Bott*: "It is hot"
Candy: <slurp>
Bott*: "Well? How's it taste?"
Candy: <3x smack>
Candy: "Strange taste..."
Candy: "I'm sleepy..."
Bott*: "Lay down here"
Candy: "What's happening?"
Bott*: "Relax"
Bott*: "Close your eyes"
Bott*: "Candy, can you hear me?"
Candy: "Hello?"
Bott*: "Very well"
Candy: "Where are you?"
Bott*: "I'm here... present..."
Candy: "Where?"
Bott*: "Everywhere!"
Bott*: <sighs>

Bott*: "We're in your head" ==> "I'm in your head"

Candy: "Huh?"
Bott*: "Never mind..."
Bott*: "This is your world"
Bott*: "Pretty empty..."
Candy: "Echo!"
Candy: "Suuuper!"
Bott*: "Eee... yeah"
Bott*: "Anyway... can we continue?"
Bott*: "Let's start with something simple"
Bott*: "Think of something pleasant"
Candy: "Ice-cream!"
Candy: "Yeah!"
Candy: "Pistachio!"
Bott*: "That's not exactly what I meant..."
Bott*: <deep breath>
Bott*: "Remember when you were happy?"
Candy: "Happy..."
Candy: "Yes... very happy..."
Bott*: "Excellent!"
Candy: "My head..."
Candy: "Hurts..."
Bott*: "Great, but that's enough!"
Bott*: "Take a nap"
Bott*: "Rest, my friend"

Mr. Mate: "What's going on?" ==> "Hey, you ok?"
Mr. Mate: "You are usually very energetic" ==> "You're unusually quiet"
Mr. Mate: "What's this game, freak?" ==> "You got something to do with this, freak?"

Bott*: "Interesting…"

Thanks for the dialogue corrections! Regards!

OK, I'm closing the stage! Thanks to everyone for your participation and help! We got a great scene!