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Reduce 3 - Scene 15 (Planning)

Posted by Mejson - 6 days ago


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Welcome everyone!


First thing:

Well... first let me mention the information you know perfectly well. According to the manager's recommendation - @MariogD, I'm asking you to DUB to single scenes to avoid dialogue build-up and too much to record later. Everyone eagerly embraced the idea as there is less work at a time. I know I'm repeating myself, but thank you for your hard work! Thank you!


Main thing:

And here's the much-anticipated Scene 15! Yes, you can already see the next events of our heroes! As the title suggests, there are strong emotions arising from numerous situations and relationships. I'm sure no one expected such a... transformation in Candy. But isn't that the reality? Concealed aggression behind social disease? That's right... Will it be possible to control such destructive aggression? We will see in the future!


Extra thing:

For additional things - special dialogues have been / will be sent to be recorded for CS remake (remastered), being create by my most talented student - @MATRVG. We know there was virtually no dub in CS, but they will surely add character and vibe, so why not?


What do you think about it, @Cyberdevil@Azure@ChordC@MariogD@SayMeBott@Colizza@XavierDalton@MATRVG?


Regards,

Mejson


Scene 15 - Emotions

Inscription (on black background):

Episode 15
Day 44
(~3 days later)
11:22 AM


Action:

1. Again... the same stone as in the previous scene was sit Bott*. This time 'Shevy' is leaning in this place. In front of it, on the ground, there are various herbal ingredients (some herbs) like last time. And on the left side (from these ingredients) there is a small fire (certainly Bott* was cooking some infusion by combining various herbs). Candy is lying on the makeshift bed (as in the previous scene).

2. Bott* is sitting behind him (sideways) and is leaning over it with a wooden bowl (holding it in his hands). Bott* has a firm expression on his face. Candy looks very skeptical at Bott* then says (dissatisfied): "I don't like it". Bott* replies (firmly): "I know… but I promise this is the last one". Candy nods. Bott* slowly gives decoction to drink (from a wooden bowl). Candy drinks and then rests his head on the makeshift pillow.

3. Next Candy closes his eyes and says (gently): "See you...". Bott* puts the bowl down and watches Candy for a moment. Then he turns his head to the left (looks at 'Shevy') and says (crazy): "Yes, this is already the seventh test". Next he looks at Candy (still looking wildly) and says (crazy): "This time we can spice it up!". Camera zoom on Candy's head - darkening (entering Candy's mind).

4. Black background, Candy stands in the center, looking reluctantly upward. (The dialogue effects in Candy's head are the same as in the previous scene). Candy asks (impatient): "Now what?". Bott* replies (firmly): "For this last test…". Candy squint one's eyes and he reacts (hesitantly): "Uh-huh". Bott* continues (firmly): "Let’s try something new".

5. Candy scratches his head and asks (curious): "New?". Bott* continues as if to himself (firmly): "It might be nasty, but...". Bott* continues (crazy): "I want you to recall your most terrible memory". Candy grows serious (lowers his hand and looks seriously upwards) and says when he looks down (disheartened): "I don't want to...". Bott* <sighs> then says (softly): "Are we friends or not?".

6. Candy stares at the ground for a moment (he ponders), then looks up and says (concerned): "Yes, we are...". Then Candy (after a pause) replies (seriously): "Okay". Candy then turns (facing the viewer) and sits in a cross-legged position (he rests his hands on his legs). Candy closes his eyes (this is where disturbing music begins). Bott* says (firmly): "Good… Now focus…". And then he continues (firmly): "Recall your memories…".

7. The camera moves a bit to the right (Candy is no longer in the center - it's on the left; there's an empty spot on the right). After three seconds of silence, Candy (without opening her eyes) says (uncertainly): "I see something". Blurred image / Candy's projection flickered (right) for a moment. Bott* catches Candy's words and reacts (crazy): "Yes!". Bott* continues (crazy): "Don't stop!". And after a while (crazy): "Just do it!".

8. Candy doesn't answer, but starts shivering a little, and beads of sweat appear on his forehead and start slowly running off. The image (on the right) flickers for a moment and then becomes clear. The memory depicts the moment of Steve Zombie's attack on Mejson (it's the moment just before Mejson lost his eye - Steve sits on Mejson and tries to hurt him). Candy says (focused): "I see...". Bott* reacts (crazy): "Excellent!".

9. Candy opens his eyes, then looks to the right (at: image / vision / memory) in horror (his pupils are narrowed). Candy shivers terrified and says (horrified): "He's bad...". Bott* reacts (calmly): "Indeed...". Candy slowly stands up without taking his eyes off him, as if trying not to provoke an attack by the wild beast. Bott* (apparently) seeing the frowns on Candy's face says (reassuringly): "Don't worry, he won't hurt you".

10. Candy says (horrified): "But he will hurt him again!". Bott* reacts (surprised): "Huh?". Suddenly the camera zooms in (characters Steve Zombie and Mejson). The characters move almost immediately - Steve Zombie cuts Mejson's eye - he screams in pain (just like then). Steve Zombie looks at his handiwork for a moment, then freezes for a moment. Then he begins to slowly straighten out and at the same time makes a snarl (the one with clenched teeth).

11. After he straightens up, it stops moving. After a long moment, the camera move a little to the left. Candy is bent down (his face is horrified and sweaty). He reaches slowly to Steve Zombie's arm. When Candy's hand is close then Steve Zombie turns unexpectedly and roars right in Candy's face. Candy's mind immediately disappears (sudden return to reality). Camera focuses on both heroes. Candy sits down abruptly on the bed, <breathing heavily>.

12. His mouth is open, shaking, his face sweaty, and his eyes dread (his pupils are narrowed). He looks blankly. Bott* shudders a little, then looks at Candy firmly. After a long while, Candy stops heavy breathing (his expression is worried all the time). Then, still staring blankly, Candy says (absent and tired): "This feeling…". And then he adds (absent and angry): "Never again!".

13. Bott* reacts (firmly): "What are you gonna do about it?". Candy turns his head towards Bott* (he forgot presence of Bott*). A moment of silence. Suddenly, Candy stands up sharply. His expression changes to mad and angry (his eyebrow at the moment looks like on everyone else's - non-spherical). Candy holds his fist close to his face and shaking it furiously.

14. Next he screams as if to himself staring into the void (angrily): "I'll stop him!". Bott* watches Candy with interest, smiles proudly and says (proudly): "That's what I wanted to hear!". Suddenly the camera panes to the right (camera focuses on Bott* and Mr. Mate). Mr. Mate (who has been watching them for some time) says to Bott* (firmly): "Uhmm… What did you just do?!".

15. Bott* looks at Mr. Mate surprised and worried (Bott* shudders for sec - narrowed pupils) from moment, then says nothing (he has a blank expression on his face). Next Bott* turned to Candy - ignores Mr. Mate. Mr. Mate reacts (firmly): "You got nothing to say?!". Next Mr. Mate calms down - he lowers his head, closes his eyes for a moment, and <sighs>. Moments later he opens his eyes, raises his head, squint one's eyes and says (sarcastically): "Very well...".

16. Mr. Mate turns and goes to the right. The camera quickly moves to the right. The camera passes the cage with the spider - it can barely fit into it (it's really big now). The camera stops by the fire where something meat is always baked. It is the same this time - an insect leg is baked over the fire. To the right of the fire, Delsin is sitting on a stone. The camera then focuses on these heroes, he looks at the fire, then raises his hands up (he's stretches).

17. He's wearing full armor made of: bones, metal, lianas and other materials (this is a gift from Mazurek). Delsin looks up and says to himself (calmly and slowly): "This is going to be a wonderful day". The camera zooms out a bit. Here comes Mr. Mate, he stops to the left of the fire. Delsin lowers his head and looks reluctantly at Mr. Mate - squint one's eyes and <sighs>.

18. Then says more quietly to himself (disheartened): "I was expecting too much...". Mr. Mate looks seriously into Delsin's eyes. There's a moment of awkward silence. Delsin is the first to speak. Delsin says (rudely): "What do you want?". Mr. Mate says (firmly): "I heard you're in charge now". Delsin shrugs (still with the same expression on his face) and says (dryly): "Yeah. And?".

19. Mr. Mate says (seriously): "Something worrying happened". Delsin says (ironically): "What? You killed someone 'accidentally'?". Mr. Mate squint one's eyes and crossed his arms over his chest, leaning back a bit. However, he says nothing. After another strange silence, Mr. Mate continues (firmly): "No, but Bott* is experimenting at Candy’s expense". Delsin reacts (maliciously): "Yeaah?".

20. And he adds (maliciously): "Since when did you care for the sake of someone else?". Mr. Mate lowers his arms and leans forward a little and says (a bit agitated): "What are you on about?!". And then he adds (firmly): "We're in this shit together". Delsin replies (ironically): "Really?". And he adds (dryly): "I don't recall making blood money with you!". Mr. Mate leans back, closing his eyes, shuddering a little and <sighs>.

21. Then he straightens after a while, his face tired. Mr. Mate says (tired): "Listen… I know I was an assasin, but…". Delsin, watching him closely, replies (seriously): "That's why I don't trust you". Mr. Mate looks at Delsin wearily, then down at the ground. After another awkward silence, Mr. Mate turns without a word and walks to the left. When he leaves, he says to himself in a quieter voice (discouraged): "We'll see what Mejson says about that".

22. After a while, the camera moves to the left. It passes the objects as before and stops by the characters: Bott* and Candy. Bott* is sitting on a stone (sitting to the left side of the stone) and holding a 'Shevy' in his hands (possibly out of excitement or fear). On the left side (nearby) there is the second hero. Candy is standing in front of the training pole (on the right side of the pole), with a spear in his hands.

23. Candy has sweat on his forehead, shows gritted teeth, and is trembling with anger. He is in 'rage' mode (discovered by Bott* using psychotic decoction - after 7 experiments). Candy has flat eyebrows (like everyone else heroes) due to his current condition and reduced pupils. Candy hits the pole furiously with a spear, however very chaotic and sloppy (like someone who has no idea about it). Bott* looks at Candy excitedly.

24. Bott* reacts (excited): "Yes! Get it!". Next Bott* looks at 'Shevy' and says (pleased): "See darling? Who’s the freak now?!". Suddenly Candy stops, "hides" his teeth, drops his spear. Then he stares at the training pole (Candy still has narrowed pupils). Bott* grows serious and watches Candy with a lot of interest. Unexpectedly, Candy grabs the pole with both hands and hits the pole with all his strength with head.

25. The impact was so strong that it makes Candy take a few steps back and makes a wild <groan of pain> (like some wild animal, not like Candy). Then swaying uncertainly. Bott* is surprised (he flinches slightly as Candy hits by head). Bott* reacts (surprised): "Holy shiiit!". And then Bott* says (concerned): "Candy! Relax!". And then he adds (reassuringly): "You got him...".

26. And he continues (reassuringly): "It's safe now". Candy calms down, closes his eyes. And his eyebrows return to their original spherical shape (Candy is "normal" again - his pupils are back to normal). Candy grabs his head (where a significant bruise is starting to show) and groans (painfully): "My head...". And after a long moment, he straightens up, lowers his hand, looks at Bott* and says (sore): "What happened?".

27. Bott* doesn't answer anything to Candy, just looks at 'Shevy' and says as if to her (excitedly): "Damn, I didn’t think he would lunge out like that…". Blackout.


Light effect:

Normal (midday).


Dialogues:

Candy: "I don't like it"
Bott*: "I know… but I promise this is the last one"
Candy: "See you..."
Bott*: "Yes, this is already the seventh test"
Bott*: "This time we can spice it up!"
Candy: "Now what?"
Bott*: "For this last test…"
Candy: "Uh-huh"
Bott*: "Let’s try something new"
Candy: "New?"
Bott*: "It might be nasty, but..."
Bott*: "I want you to recall your most terrible memory"
Candy: "I don't want to..."
Bott*: <sighs>
Bott*: "Are we friends or not?"
Candy: "Yes, we are..."
Candy: "Okay"
Bott*: "Good… Now focus…"
Bott*: "Recall your memories…"
Candy: "I see something"
Bott*: "Yes!"
Bott*: "Don't stop!"
Bott*: "Just do it!"
Candy: "I see..."
Bott*: "Excellent!"
Candy: "He's bad..."
Bott*: "Indeed..."
Bott*: "Don't worry, he won't hurt you"
Candy: "But he will hurt him again!"
Bott*: "Huh?"
Candy: <breathing heavily>
Candy: "This feeling…"
Candy: "Never again!"
Bott*: "What are you gonna do about it?"
Candy: "I'll stop him!"
Bott*: "That's what I wanted to hear!"
Mr. Mate: "Uhmm… What did you just do?!"
Mr. Mate: "You got nothing to say?!"
Mr. Mate: <sighs>
Mr. Mate: "Very well..."
Delsin: "This is going to be a wonderful day"
Delsin: <sighs>
Delsin: "I was expecting too much..."
Delsin: "What do you want?"
Mr. Mate: "I heard you're in charge now"
Delsin: "Yeah. And?"
Mr. Mate: "Something worrying happened"
Delsin: "What? You killed someone 'accidentally'?"
Mr. Mate: "No, but Bott* is experimenting at Candy’s expense"
Delsin: "Yeaah?"
Delsin: "Since when did you care for the sake of someone else?"
Mr. Mate: "What are you on about?!"
Mr. Mate: "We're in this shit together"
Delsin: "Really?"
Delsin: "I don't recall making blood money with you!"
Mr. Mate: <sighs>
Mr. Mate: "Listen… I know I was an assasin, but…"
Delsin: "That's why I don't trust you"
Mr. Mate: "We'll see what Mejson says about that"
Bott*: "Yes! Get it!"
Bott*: "See darling? Who’s the freak now?!"
Candy: <groan of pain>
Bott*: "Holy shiiit!"
Bott*: "Candy! Relax!"
Bott*: "You got him..."
Bott*: "It's safe now"
Candy: "My head..."
Candy: "What happened?"
Bott*: "Damn, I didn’t think he would lunge out like that…"

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Comments

Yeah, man. I never thought Candy would have act like other regular heroes, it was very big surprise to me.

As for CS.SiFvsSa2C Remake... yeah guys! I'm the one who will RE-animate it. After Line of Work Mission 1 is completely finished, I'll switch my focus on this incredible, our childhood and retro saga.

Let's see what awaits us in future, about Reduce, Line of Work and CS Remake. ^^

Regards,
~ MATRVG

Thanks for comment!

What? No, no, no... I absolutely do not think it is possible to define loss of control and acting like a wild animal as normal XD

I'm glad to hear it (every time)!

We are sure to have a bright future and great achievements!

Regards!

Yeah, we are very close to the end of planning!

You like to say it again, huh? Thanks for comment.

I like this scene for presented duos: Candy&Bott* and Mr.Mate&Delsin. Well... three more left o7

Thanks for comment!

It's nice that you like it. Yes, two pairs. :P

Regards,
Mejson

Candy: "I don't like it" ==> “Eewww! Not this again!”
Bott*: "I know but… this is the last one" ==> “I know… but I promise this is the last one”
Candy: "See you..."

Bott*: "Yes, this is already the seventh test"
Bott*: "This time we can spice it up!"
Candy: "Now what?"
Bott*: "Time for the final test"
Candy: "Uh-huh"

Bott*: "Anyway... today we will try something new" ==> “Anyway… We will try something new today”

Candy: "New?"
Bott*: "It might be nasty, but..."
Bott*: "I would like you to recall the most terrible thing"
Candy: "I don't want to..."
Bott*: <sighs>

Bott*: "Are we friends or not?" ==> “We’re best friends right?”

Candy: "Yes, we are..."
Candy: "Okay"

Bott*: "Go back..." ==> “Good… Now focus…”
Bott*: "What happened... before" ==> “Recall your memories…”
Candy: "I see something" ==> I think I see something”

Bott*: "Yes!"
Bott*: "Don't stop!"

Bott*: "You will do it!" ==> “You can do it!”
Candy: "I see..." ==> “I can see clearly…”

Bott*: "Excellent!"
Candy: "He's bad..."

Bott*: "Well... yes" ==> “I agree…”

Bott*: "Don't worry, he won't hurt you"
Candy: "He's going to hurt him again!"
Bott*: "Huh?"
Candy: <breathing heavily>
Candy: "This feeling…"
Candy: "Never again!"

Bott*: "What do you want to do with this?" ==> “What are you gonna about it?”

Candy: "I'll stop him!"
Bott*: "That's what I wanted to hear!"

Mr. Mate: "What are you doing with him?!" ==> “Uhmm… What did you just do?!
Mr. Mate: "You have nothing to say?!" ==> “You got nothing to say?!”

Mr. Mate: <sighs>
Mr. Mate: "Very well..."

Delsin: "This is going to be a nice day" ==> “This is going to be a wonderful day”

Delsin: <sighs>

Delsin: "I was expecting too much..." ==> “I jinxed it…”

Delsin: "What do you want?"
Mr. Mate: "Likewise, you are in command now"

Delsin: "So?" ==> “Yeah, so?”
Mr. Mate: "I have something specific to say" ==> “I have a rather, worrying news…”

Delsin: "What? You killed someone 'accidentally'?"

Mr. Mate: "Bott* is conducting weird experiments on Candy" ==> “It’s… nothing like that… Bott* is conducting some weird experiments on Candy”

Delsin: "Yeaah?"
Delsin: "Since when do you worry about someone else's life?" ==> “Since when did you worry about someone else’s life?”

Mr. Mate: "What are you on about?!"
Mr. Mate: "We're all in this shit together" ==> “We’re in this shit together”

Delsin: "Really?"

Delsin: "I don't remember working together" ==> “You planning on disposing us once all of this over? Think we’re just a bunch of witnesses?”

Mr. Mate: <sighs>

Mr. Mate: "It was such a job..." ==> “Listen… I know I’m an assasin, but…”
*Delsin then abruptly ends Mr. Mate’s dialogue with:
Delsin: "That's why I don't trust you"
*I think this adds more dynamic

Mr. Mate: "We'll see what Mejson says about that"

Bott*: "Yes! Get it!" ==> “Yes! Smash that Thing!
Bott*: "See dear? He rocks!" ==> “See darling? Who’s the freak now?!”

Candy: <groan of pain>
Bott*: "Holy shiiit!"

Bott*: "Relax Candy!" ==> “Candy! Relax!”
Bott*: "You got him..." ==> “You got him good…”
Bott*: "It's safe now" ==> “You’re safe now”

Candy: "My head..."
Candy: "What happened?"

Bott*: "I didn't expect there would be such aggression in this kid..." ==> “Damn, I didn’t think he would lunge out like that…”

I like the concept, thanks for improving the dialogues!

2. Maybe Candy gives off a strained, but weak reaction to swallowing the next decoction? It perhaps could add further weight to Mr. Mate’s rejection to these experiments since Candy has not warmed up to them since being subjected.

14-15. Are we going to establish Bott* as obviously ignorant of Mr. Mate or is he just too distracted grooming Candy for success? If the former, the current script works out well. If the latter, I’m thinking after Candy asserts his fury, he will look around for a spear to train with, and when he runs by Bott* and Mate, Bott*’s attention is diverted and he points Candy in the right direction.

24. This totally works on its own, though when I was reading it, I was half-expecting Candy would end up breaking the spear he was training with. He takes a look at the half he still has, then back at the pole, throwing the remaining half at it and then continuing on with the scene. Candy ought to have the strength for it (I know the first Reduce character page stated he had weak strength, but now he’s on adrenaline; plus, CS3 intro shows him carrying 3 heavy weapons on his back at once. Side note, happy to see that coming back soon ^^).

DIALOGUE:

Candy: "I don't like it" -> “Eeergh, no more!”

Bott*: "I know but… this is the last one" -> “I get it. But I promise you this will be the last.”

Candy: "See you..."

Bott*: "Yes, this is already the seventh test" -> “Here we are - seventh and final test!”

Bott*: "This time we can spice it up!" -> “We’re gonna spice things up this time!”

Candy: "Now what?"

Bott*: "Time for the final test" -> “For this last test…”

Candy: "Uh-huh"

Bott*: "Anyway... today we will try something new" -> “Let’s try something new.”

Candy: "New?"
Bott*: "It might be nasty, but..."

Bott*: "I would like you to recall the most terrible thing" -> “I want you to recall your most terrible memory.”

Candy: "I don't want to..."
Bott*: <sighs>

Bott*: "Are we friends or not?"

Candy: "Yes, we are..."
Candy: "Okay"

Bott*: "Go back..." -> “Great! Now…”

Bott*: "What happened... before" -> “Reminisce on what happened before…”

Candy: "I see something" -> “I see… Something.”

Bott*: "Yes!"
Bott*: "Don't stop!"

Bott*: "You will do it!" -> “I believe in you!”

Candy: "I see..." -> “It’s coming together…”

Bott*: "Excellent!"
Candy: "He's bad..."

Bott*: "Well... yes" -> “Agreed.”

Bott*: "Don't worry, he won't hurt you" -> “Worry not, he won’t hurt you.”

Candy: "He's going to hurt him again!" -> “But he will hurt him again!”

Bott*: "Huh?" -> “Hurt who again?”

Candy: <breathing heavily>
Candy: "This feeling…"
Candy: "Never again!"

Bott*: "What do you want to do with this?" -> “”How will you prevent it?”

Candy: "I'll stop him!"
Bott*: "That's what I wanted to hear!"

Mr. Mate: "What are you doing with him?!" -> “What is this madness with Candy?”

Mr. Mate: "You have nothing to say?!" -> “Ignoring me, are you?!”

Mr. Mate: <sighs>
Mr. Mate: "Very well..."

Delsin: "This is going to be a nice day" -> “Things are looking up today.”

Delsin: <sighs>

Delsin: "I was expecting too much..." -> “I spoke too soon…”

Delsin: "What do you want?"

Mr. Mate: "Likewise, you are in command now" -> “I heard you’re in charge now.”

Delsin: "So?" -> “Yeah. And?”

Mr. Mate: "I have something specific to say" -> “Something worrying happened”

Delsin: "What? You killed someone 'accidentally'?"

Mr. Mate: "Bott* is conducting weird experiments on Candy" -> “No, but Bott* is experimenting at Candy’s expense.”

Delsin: "Yeaah?"

Delsin: "Since when do you worry about someone else's life?" -> “Since when did you care for the sake of someone else?”

Mr. Mate: "What are you on about?!"
Mr. Mate: "We're all in this shit together"

Delsin: "Really?"

Delsin: "I don't remember working together" -> “I don’t recall making blood money with you!”

Mr. Mate: <sighs>

Mr. Mate: "It was such a job..." -> “It was just my job, Delsin…”

Delsin: "That's why I don't trust you"

Mr. Mate: "We'll see what Mejson says about that"

Bott*: "Yes! Get it!" -> “Yes, clobber it!”

Bott*: "See dear? He rocks!" -> “See, dearest? He’s a natural!”

Candy: <groan of pain>
Bott*: "Holy shiiit!"

Bott*: "Relax Candy!" -> “Stand down, Candy!”

Bott*: "You got him..."

Bott*: "It's safe now" -> Coast is clear.”

Candy: "My head..."
Candy: "What happened?"

Bott*: "I didn't expect there would be such aggression in this kid..." -> “This kid has quite the beast locked deep inside…”

Regarding your comments:

Candy... hmmm, MariogD got it best: "Candy trusts Bott* so much that he doesn't whine anymore". This remark clashes with the plot assumption. Candy is slowly recovering from autism and he's less childish (at least in relation to Bott*).

Mr. Mate is visible when he wants to be seen... It's his special ability - he disappears and reappears when he wants to. It's an assasin, after all, and they were a elusive.

Why would he break the spear? He's a kid with mediocre strength. Adrenaline does not give you great strength. It was a joke in CS3, and it's a different saga anyway.

Thanks for your great ideas and improving the dialogues, they are great as always!

I close this scene! Great job, gentlemen!